Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答没有完整结束，而且“blindness”应为“politeness”。建议先直接说明是在学校向老师学习礼貌，然后补充具体内容，例如学习如何问候、说“please”和“thank you”。注意使用过去时：用“had”或“were taught”，不要用“will have”。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my primary school teachers. We had lessons about good manners, such as greeting people and saying “please” and “thank you.” My teachers also reminded us to respect our classmates and elders.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“leave a good pressure”应改为“make a good impression”，“a good manners”应改为“good manners”，且句子没有完成。建议使用“because”解释原因，再用一个结果或例子支持观点；注意一般事实使用现在时，如“meet”。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is very important because it helps us make a good impression when we meet someone for the first time. Good manners also make communication smoother and help people feel respected.

Sugerencia: “played”应改为“polite”，“almost older occasions”应改为“almost all occasions”。回答列出了工作、学习和正式会议，但语法和句子结构不完整。建议先概括“几乎所有场合”，再列举场合，并说明礼貌有助于留下好印象。

Ejemplo: We should be polite on almost all occasions, especially at work, at school, and during formal meetings. It is important to behave appropriately in these situations because we need to show respect and make a good impression on others.

Sugerencia: 内容与问题相关，但“bring to elderly”表达不清，可能想说“向老人打招呼”或“帮助老人”。“saying hi”重复较多，且应保持平行结构。建议使用“used to”后接动词原形，并列举两到三个具体行为即可。

Ejemplo: As a child, I used to greet elderly people to show my respect. I also said “please” and “thank you” when I asked for something or received help. In addition, I tried to help older people carry heavy bags.

× For example, we will have some classes on blindness, blindness on schools.

✓ For example, we would have some classes on blindness at school.

这段话是在回忆童年经历，因此应使用过去时。将“will have”改为“would have”，表示过去经常发生的事情。

× In teachers, they will teach us

✓ Our teachers taught us.

“In teachers”不是正确的介词结构，应改为主语“Our teachers”。由于句子描述的是童年经历，“will teach”应改为过去时“taught”。

× Sure, I think being polite is very crucial in our daily life because it helps us to leave a good pressure to others when we first met each other and a good manners also helps us to

✓ Sure, I think being polite is very crucial in our daily life because it helps us to leave a good pressure on others when we first meet each other, and good manners also help us to behave well.

这里描述的是普遍事实，应使用一般现在时，所以“met”应改为“meet”。“manners”是复数名词，后面的动词应使用“help”，不能使用单数形式“helps”。

× a good manners also helps us to

✓ good manners also help us to

“manners”是复数名词，前面不能使用单数冠词“a”；同时，复数主语应搭配“help”，而不是“helps”。

× I think we should be played in almost older occasions, especially for work, study and some formal meetings is because it's really important to behave well and leave a good impression on others when we have some

✓ I think we should be polite on almost all occasions, especially at work, at school, and in some formal meetings, because it's really important to behave well and leave a good impression on others.

“should be played”不能表达“应该有礼貌”，情态动词“should”后面应接合适的动词结构，这里应使用“should be polite”。“almost all occasions”表示“几乎所有场合”；“at work”和“at school”是正确的介词搭配。原句中的“meetings is because”结构不完整，应直接使用“because”引导原因从句。

× I used to bring to elderly to show my respect and saying hi hi Saying hi to everyone and saying hi please and thank you to everyone.

✓ I used to show my respect to elderly people, say hi to everyone, and say please and thank you to everyone.

“bring to elderly”缺少正确的动词和宾语结构，表达“尊敬老人”时应使用“show my respect to elderly people”。列举多个行为时，动词形式应保持平行，因此使用“show、say、say”，而不是混用不同结构。