Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly in the past tense. Avoid the unnatural phrase “politeness starts from our parents” and the incorrect structure “until we learned them.” Use “learn about politeness” or “learn polite behavior.” Add one specific example of what your mother taught you, and connect the ideas with a linking word such as “for example.”

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents, especially my mother. She taught me to greet adults, say “please” and “thank you,” and listen when other people were speaking. I also reinforced these habits at primary school through my teachers.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, such as “Yes, I think it is very important.” Avoid repeating “social” and replace the unnatural phrases “that specific person” and “sense of belongingness” with more natural expressions like “build stronger relationships” and “feel accepted.” Give one concrete result or example to make the answer more effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is extremely important because it helps us build positive relationships. For example, when we speak respectfully to colleagues or strangers, they are more likely to respond warmly. As a result, polite behavior helps people feel respected and included.

Sugerencia: Your main idea is relevant, but the answer repeats “daily” and needs clearer sentence structure. Say “There is no specific occasion” rather than “should have no occasion.” You could also mention a few situations, such as speaking to older people, dealing with customers, or asking for help, to provide specific support.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, we should be polite every day rather than only on special occasions. It is especially important when we are speaking to older people, asking someone for help, or dealing with customers. Simple expressions like “excuse me” and “thank you” can make these interactions more pleasant.

Sugerencia: Give a complete answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Use quotation marks and commas when listing polite expressions, and replace “that material item” and “that thing” with a specific noun. The final sentence is incomplete, so finish it with “to me” or describe a complete situation.

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “excuse me,” “please,” and “thank you.” For example, if I wanted to borrow a toy from my brother, I would say, “Please, could you pass me that toy?” After he gave it to me, I would always thank him.

× Politeness starts from our parents. They are the first teachers that will guide us until we learned them at our primary school from our teachers. So I can still remember that my mother taught me.

✓ Politeness started with my parents. They were the first teachers who guided me until I learned about politeness at primary school. I can still remember that my mother taught me.

The question asks about a past experience, so the main verbs should generally be in the past tense: started, were, and guided. Use learned about politeness because politeness is the subject or concept being learned, not them.

× Politeness starts from our parents.

✓ Politeness starts with our parents.

Use with when describing the people or source from which a quality or habit begins. Starts from is possible in some contexts, but starts with is the natural prepositional expression here.

× They are the first teachers that will guide us until we learned them at our primary school from our teachers.

✓ They were the first teachers who guided me until I learned about politeness at primary school.

The pronoun them incorrectly refers to politeness, which is singular and not normally referred to as them. Use it or, more clearly, repeat the noun phrase about politeness. The relative pronoun who is also more appropriate for people.

× Politeness is extremely crucial nowadays because it helps promote better social social connection with that specific person and have a sense of belongingness.

✓ Politeness is extremely crucial nowadays because it helps promote better social connections with other people and gives us a sense of belonging.

Connection is a countable noun, so connections is more suitable when referring to relationships in general. The sentence also refers to relationships with people in general, so other people is more appropriate than that specific person.

× Politeness is extremely crucial nowadays because it helps promote better social social connection with that specific person and have a sense of belongingness.

✓ Politeness is extremely crucial nowadays because it helps promote better social connections with other people and gives us a sense of belonging.

The subject is politeness, which is third-person singular. Therefore, the coordinated verb must also have a singular form: gives, not have. Keeping the verbs in parallel forms, helps promote and gives, makes the sentence grammatically consistent.

× In my opinion, being polite should have no occasion it should be an everyday habit, a daily habit that we should instill and practice in our daily life.

✓ In my opinion, being polite should not be limited to any particular occasion. It should be an everyday habit that we instill and practise in our daily lives.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction. Separating them into two sentences fixes the run-on sentence. The expression should not be limited to any particular occasion is also the correct sentence structure for this meaning.

× As a child, I showed my politeness by saying Excuse me, thank you or please for example, when I want to have that material item. I usually say please can you grab that thing and give it

✓ As a child, I showed my politeness by saying, 'Excuse me,' 'Thank you,' or 'Please,' for example, when I wanted to have a particular item. I usually said, 'Please, can you grab that thing and give it to me?'

Because the answer describes childhood behavior, the verbs should be in the past tense: wanted and said, not want and say. The past tense keeps the answer consistent with the question, which asks about what you did as a child.

× I usually say please can you grab that thing and give it

✓ I usually said, 'Please, can you grab that thing and give it to me?'

The words spoken by the person should be marked as direct speech with quotation marks. A comma is used before the quotation, and the request should end with a question mark. The phrase give it to me is complete because it identifies the person receiving the item.