Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答有明确的来源和例子，但存在较多语法和搭配错误。应将“Thanks to my mom, she told me”改为“主语+动词”的完整结构，例如“My mother taught me...”；“great with”应改为“be respectful to”或“treat...well”，“to the festival”应改为“during festivals”，“avoid to making”应改为“avoid making”。同时，例子要清楚说明具体的礼貌行为，并使用“for example”连接。

Ejemplo: My mother taught me to be polite through everyday reminders. For example, during the Spring Festival, she told me to greet my relatives warmly and treat them respectfully. She also reminded me not to make noise while eating in public.

Sugerencia: 观点直接，理由和例子也相关，但有重复和语法问题。“because it is it can”应简化为“because it can”，“society harmony”应改为“social harmony”或“a more harmonious society”，“my family teach”应改为“my family taught me”。最后一句表达不完整，应具体说明在什么情况下使用“please”和“thank you”，例如见面、请求帮助或接受帮助时。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I think politeness is very important because it can reduce misunderstandings and create a more harmonious society. For instance, my family taught me to say “please” when asking for help and “thank you” when someone helped me. These small expressions make communication more pleasant.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，直接回答了问题，并提供了两个具体场合。不过，“shows of respect”应改为“shows respect”，“reduce”应与主语“being polite”保持一致，改为“reduces”，“which help”应改为“which helps”或拆成两个句子。还可以加入工作场合、公共场所等更自然的例子，使内容更丰富。

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially when asking for help or meeting someone for the first time. We should also use polite language in public places and at work. Being respectful shows good manners and helps prevent misunderstandings.

Sugerencia: 回答自然、切题，使用了过去经历和具体行为，整体表达较好。为了保持时态一致，“I'm”应改为“I was”，“which makes me very proud”应改为“which made me very proud”。还可以补充一个具体场景，例如拜访亲戚时主动打招呼或接受礼物时道谢。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I always greeted people warmly and used words like “please” and “thank you.” For example, I would say hello to relatives when they visited us and thank them whenever they gave me a gift. People around me often said that I was a polite child, which made me very proud.

× Thanks to my mom, she told me how to be polite in daily life. For example, she told me great with the family members to the festival such as Spring Festival and avoid to making noise when eating outside.

✓ Thanks to my mom, I learned how to be polite in daily life. For example, she taught me to greet family members at festivals such as the Spring Festival and to avoid making noise when eating out.

“Thanks to my mom”不能直接和“she told me”构成完整、自然的句子。可以改为“Thanks to my mom, I learned...”。另外，“told me great”结构不完整，应改为“taught me to greet”。

× Thanks to my mom, she told me how to be polite in daily life. For example, she told me great with the family members to the festival such as Spring Festival and avoid to making noise when eating outside.

✓ Thanks to my mom, I learned how to be polite in daily life. For example, she taught me to greet family members at festivals such as the Spring Festival and to avoid making noise when eating out.

“avoid”后面必须接动名词，即“avoid doing”，不能说“avoid to do”。因此应改为“avoid making noise”。

× Thanks to my mom, she told me how to be polite in daily life. For example, she told me great with the family members to the festival such as Spring Festival and avoid to making noise when eating outside.

✓ Thanks to my mom, I learned how to be polite in daily life. For example, she taught me to greet family members at festivals such as the Spring Festival and to avoid making noise when eating out.

表示在节日时问候家人，应使用“at festivals”，而不是不自然的“to the festival”。“eating out”也比“eating outside”更自然地表示“在外面吃饭”。

× Absolutely, yes. I think politeness plays a big role in our daily life because it is it can reduce misunderstandings and create society harmony.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I think politeness plays a big role in our daily life because it can reduce misunderstandings and create social harmony.

“it is it can”中重复使用了两个谓语结构，句子结构错误。应删除“it is”，保留“it can”。

× Absolutely, yes. I think politeness plays a big role in our daily life because it is it can reduce misunderstandings and create society harmony.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I think politeness plays a big role in our daily life because it can reduce misunderstandings and create social harmony.

“society”是名词，不能直接修饰“harmony”。这里需要使用形容词“social”，所以应说“social harmony”，意思是“社会和谐”。

× For example, my family teach me to say please and thank you and meet others or ask for help.

✓ For example, my family taught me to say please and thank you when meeting others or asking for help.

问题是在谈论童年经历，应该使用过去时。“teach”的过去式是“taught”，不是“teach”。

× For example, my family teach me to say please and thank you and meet others or ask for help.

✓ For example, my family taught me to say please and thank you when meeting others or asking for help.

“when”后面描述两个同时发生的场景时，可以使用现在分词形式，保持结构平行。因此使用“meeting”和“asking”。

× Being polite shows of respect for others and reduce misunderstandings which help create a friendlier society.

✓ Being polite shows respect for others and reduces misunderstandings, which helps create a friendlier society.

固定搭配是“show respect for someone”，不能在“shows”和“respect”之间加“of”。“show respect”表示“表示尊重”。

× Being polite shows of respect for others and reduce misunderstandings which help create a friendlier society.

✓ Being polite shows respect for others and reduces misunderstandings, which helps create a friendlier society.

主语“Being polite”是一个动名词短语，整体看作单数，因此谓语应使用“reduces”，而不是“reduce”。另外，“which”指代前面整个结果或行为时，谓语使用单数形式“helps”更合适。

× People around me always said that I'm a very polite kid, which makes me very proud.

✓ People around me always said that I was a very polite kid, which makes me very proud.

主句动词“said”是过去时，间接引语中的“am”通常要进行时态回退，改为过去式“was”。“which makes me very proud”表示现在仍然感到自豪，因此保留现在时“makes”是合理的。