Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 부모님이 가르쳐 주셨다는 핵심은 잘 전달되지만, 문장이 너무 길고 같은 의미의 표현이 반복됩니다. “warned”와 “look polite”는 문맥에 맞지 않으므로 “taught”와 “behave politely”를 사용하세요. 먼저 직접적인 답을 말한 뒤, 부모님이 가르친 구체적인 행동과 현재의 결과를 연결어로 간단히 설명하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite from an early age. They encouraged me to use phrases like “please” and “thank you” and to respect older people. As a result, my friends and colleagues still consider me a polite person.

Sugerencia: 의견을 제시하려는 시도는 있지만, “a little important thing,” “as there as people”처럼 문법과 표현이 불명확합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 상황에 따라 다르다는 이유를 한 가지 제시하세요. 시험관에게 “어떻게 생각하세요?”라고 되묻지 말고 자신의 의견으로 마무리하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important, although it may depend on the situation. Politeness shows respect and helps people communicate more comfortably. For example, using polite language is especially important when speaking to teachers, older people, or strangers.

Sugerencia: 예시를 여러 개 제시하려 했지만 문장이 매우 혼란스럽고 “treat all the person,” “Jamper teachers”와 같은 표현은 의미가 불분명합니다. “We should be polite when...”으로 답을 시작하고, 교사나 노인, 식당 직원처럼 구체적인 대상과 상황을 정확한 문장으로 설명하세요. 예시를 나열할 때 “for example”과 “also”를 사용하면 답변의 연결성이 좋아집니다.

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations. For example, we should show respect to teachers and older people. We should also use polite language when ordering food in a restaurant.

Sugerencia: 어릴 때 인사할 때 절을 했다는 구체적인 행동이 있어 내용은 비교적 분명합니다. 다만 “Wherever I met or the people”은 부자연스러우므로 “Whenever I met someone”으로 바꾸세요. 같은 내용을 반복하는 “because... So that’s why...”를 하나로 줄이고, 절을 한 대상이나 이유를 덧붙이면 더 효과적입니다.

Ejemplo: As a child, I usually bowed whenever I met someone. My parents taught me that bowing was a respectful way to greet people, especially adults and older relatives. I also used polite greetings when speaking to them.

× My parents taught me you have to be always polite to other people so that's why I also warned to look polite to other people so until now people say I'm very polite.

✓ My parents taught me that you always have to be polite to other people, so I also tried to be polite to other people. Until now, people have said that I am very polite.

The adverb always is usually placed before the main verb have to, not between be and always. The corrected sentence also uses be polite instead of look polite because polite describes a person's behavior.

× My parents taught me you have to be always polite to other people so that's why I also warned to look polite to other people so until now people say I'm very polite.

✓ My parents taught me that I had to be polite to other people, so I was also warned to behave politely. Until now, people have said that I am very polite.

Warn is normally used with a subject in the passive structure: I was warned. The original phrase I also warned is missing the passive auxiliary was.

× It depends on situation, but I think that is a little important thing as a child as there as people.

✓ It depends on the situation, but I think it is a little important thing for children because there are people around them.

Situation is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. The specific situation being discussed requires the definite article the.

× It depends on situation, but I think that is a little important thing as a child as there as people.

✓ It depends on the situation, but I think it is important for children because there are people around them.

The correct there-be structure for a plural noun is there are. The original phrase there as people is not a grammatical there-be construction.

× Because we learn we have to be polite every time.

✓ We learn that we have to be polite all the time.

A sentence beginning with because usually needs an independent clause to complete its meaning. The correction removes the incomplete dependent clause and forms a complete sentence.

× But I wonder how do you think about that?

✓ But I wonder what you think about that.

In an indirect question, the word order is the same as in a statement: subject followed by verb. Therefore, use what you think, not how do you think.

× When we treat all the person or the people or there are some people we have to be polite for Jamper teachers were old people and also at a restaurant when we ordered.

✓ When we meet people, especially teachers and older people, we have to be polite. We should also be polite at a restaurant when we order.

People is the correct plural form when referring to more than one person. The singular form person cannot be used after all in this context.

× When we treat all the person or the people or there are some people we have to be polite for Jamper teachers were old people and also at a restaurant when we ordered.

✓ When we meet people, especially teachers and older people, we have to be polite to them. We should also be polite at a restaurant when we order.

The correct preposition after polite when referring to the person receiving the behavior is to, as in polite to them. At is correctly used for a location such as a restaurant.

× When we treat all the person or the people or there are some people we have to be polite for Jamper teachers were old people and also at a restaurant when we ordered.

✓ When we met people, especially teachers and older people, we had to be polite to them. We also had to be polite at a restaurant when we ordered.

The question asks about occasions in the past, so the answer should consistently use the past tense: met, had, and ordered.

× When we treat all the person or the people or there are some people we have to be polite for Jamper teachers were old people and also at a restaurant when we ordered.

✓ We had to be polite whenever we met people, especially teachers and older people. We also had to be polite at a restaurant when we ordered.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Separating the ideas into two complete sentences makes the meaning clear and grammatical.

× Wherever I met or the people I tried to bow as soon as I saw them because my parents taught me when you see other people, you have to bow. So that's why I did.

✓ Whenever I met people, I tried to bow as soon as I saw them because my parents had taught me to do so.

The phrase wherever I met or the people is not a complete or logical clause. Whenever I met people correctly introduces the repeated situation, and the final fragment So that's why I did is unnecessary.

× Wherever I met or the people I tried to bow as soon as I saw them because my parents taught me when you see other people, you have to bow. So that's why I did.

✓ Whenever I met people, I tried to bow as soon as I saw them because my parents had taught me that when I saw other people, I had to bow.

After taught me, the following idea should be introduced with that in an indirect statement. Because the main story is in the past, saw and had to are appropriate forms for the reported instruction.