Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，结构清楚，也提供了具体场景。需要注意名词单复数和更自然的表达：将“everyday situation”改为“everyday situations”，将“notice the effort that others made for me”改为“appreciate other people's efforts”。此外，可以加入一个结果句，让答案更加完整。

Ejemplo: When I was very young, my mother taught me to be polite through everyday situations, such as shopping or visiting someone's home. She reminded me to say hello and thank you, and to appreciate other people's efforts. As a result, I gradually developed good manners and became more considerate of others.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也有例子支持，但存在明显的词汇和语法错误。“planners”应改为“politeness”，“It showed”应改为“It shows”，“make”应改为“makes”。“please and thank you”最好改为“say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”。建议使用一个清晰的主题句，并通过“because”连接原因，避免句子之间衔接松散。

Ejemplo: Definitely. I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and makes people feel comfortable in social situations. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” when speaking to others can create a positive impression and help build good relationships.

Sugerencia: 回答直接并举出了例子，但“public situation”应改为“public situations”或“public places”。“more more smoother”是重复且错误的表达，应改为“smoother”或“make conversations go more smoothly”。“say hello, please or thank you”搭配不自然，可以说“greet people and use words such as ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”。同时应减少“uh”等停顿词。

Ejemplo: I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially in public places, at school, and at work. For instance, when we meet someone, we should greet them and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” This helps conversations go more smoothly and makes others feel respected.

Sugerencia: 回答包含具体故事，内容较真实有效。不过，前两句与第一题答案重复，可以减少重复并直接回答“我做了什么”。“everyday situation”应改为“everyday situations”，“when I was grow up”应改为“as I grew up”或“when I grew up”。“took a bag of snacks from a shopkeeper”可改为“bought a bag of snacks from a shopkeeper”，表达更准确。

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying “thank you” when I received something. I remember buying a bag of snacks from a shopkeeper, and my mother reminded me to thank him. I continued this habit as I grew up, and now I use polite expressions naturally in daily life.

× When I was very young, my mom taught me to be polite through everyday situation like shopping or visiting someone's home.

✓ When I was very young, my mom taught me to be polite through everyday situations like shopping or visiting someone's home.

“Situations”指多个日常场合，因为后面列举了购物和拜访别人家两种情况，所以应使用复数形式。建议注意名词前的数量概念：如果表示多个事物，通常要使用复数。

× I think planners is very important for everyone.

✓ I think politeness is very important for everyone.

这里的“planners”不符合语境，而且复数名词不能与“is”搭配。根据上下文，应使用不可数名词“politeness”，并与单数动词“is”搭配。建议根据语境选择正确的名词，并检查主语和动词是否一致。

× It showed our respect and make someone feel comfortable in social situations.

✓ It shows our respect and makes people feel comfortable in social situations.

这段话是在表达普遍事实，所以应使用一般现在时。“showed”应改为“shows”。建议描述一般规律、观点或事实时使用一般现在时。

× It showed our respect and make someone feel comfortable in social situations.

✓ It shows our respect and makes people feel comfortable in social situations.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，因此并列动词都要使用第三人称单数形式。“make”应改为“makes”。建议看到“he、she、it”或单数名词作主语时，检查一般现在时的动词是否加“-s”。

× I think we should always be polite, especially in public situation.

✓ I think we should always be polite, especially in public situations.

“Public situations”表示多个公共场合，因此“situation”应使用复数形式“situations”。建议根据表达的数量判断名词使用单数还是复数。

× That uh, can make the conversation more more smoother.

✓ That can make the conversation smoother.

“Smoother”本身已经是比较级，不能再与“more”重复使用；“more more smoother”是重复表达。应直接使用“smoother”。建议比较级只能使用“more + 原级形容词”或“形容词加-er”中的一种形式。

× When I was a child, my mom taught me to be polite through everyday situation like shopping or visiting someone's home.

✓ When I was a child, my mom taught me to be polite through everyday situations like shopping or visiting someone's home.

这里谈到的是不同的日常场合，所以“situation”应改为复数“situations”。建议在列举多个场合或例子时使用复数名词。

× She reminded me to say thank you to the shopkeeper and this habit stayed with me uh, when I was grow up.

✓ She reminded me to say thank you to the shopkeeper, and this habit stayed with me when I grew up.

“Grow up”在这里描述过去发生的成长过程，应使用过去式“grew up”，而不是“was grow up”。“Was”后面不能直接接动词原形或过去式来表达主动动作。建议表达过去发生的动作时使用动词的过去式：“grow”变为“grew”。