Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提供了家庭背景和具体经历，但时态不一致：过去经历应使用“taught”和“played”。“learn from games and their behaviors”表达不够自然，可以改为“learned by observing their behavior”。建议用“直接回答+具体说明+结果”的结构，并加入一个更明确的礼貌行为例子。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my grandparents. I grew up with them, and they taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to respect older people. I also learned by observing how kindly they treated others.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也使用了例子，但“family style”和“country style”不自然，建议改为“reflect our family values”和“create a positive impression of our country”。“talk to them very polite”应改为“speak to them politely”，并注意条件句结构：“If we speak politely, they may...”。避免重复使用“show”，并补充礼貌带来的实际作用，如建立信任或避免误解。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it reflects our family values and creates a positive impression of our country. For example, when we speak politely to foreign visitors, they may feel respected and become more willing to communicate with us. It also helps prevent misunderstandings.

Sugerencia: 回答提到了需要帮助时应保持礼貌，但有明显的语法和用词问题。“so that we are not bothered”意思不准确，建议改为“so that people are more willing to help us”。“phone phone functions”重复且不自然；“with is queues”无法表达清楚，可能想说“someone in the queue”。建议使用清晰的例子，并用“especially when/for example”连接细节。

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we ask someone for help, especially in public places or formal situations. For example, if I do not know how to use a function on my phone, I might politely ask someone in the queue for assistance. This makes the person more willing to help me.

Sugerencia: 回答给出了两个具体行为，方向很好，但“agreed people”应改为“elderly people”或“people in need”，“help ... go across the street”应改为“help ... cross the street”。由于问题使用过去时，应将“help”和“pick up”改为“helped”和“picked up”。建议补充这些行为发生的场景或原因，使答案更完整自然。

Ejemplo: As a child, I often helped elderly people cross the street. I also picked up litter when I saw it on the ground, because my grandparents taught me to respect both people and the environment. These were simple ways for me to show politeness and responsibility.

× I grew up with my grandparents, so they teach me how to be polite.

✓ I grew up with my grandparents, so they taught me how to be polite.

整段是在描述童年经历，因此应该使用一般过去时。teach 的过去式是 taught。建议描述过去发生的事情时，注意把动词改为过去式。

× I always play with them and learn a lot from games and their behaviors.

✓ I always played with them and learned a lot from games and their behavior.

这里继续描述童年时的经历，应使用一般过去时。play 改为 played，learn 改为 learned。behavior 在这里通常作为不可数名词使用，因此用 behavior 更自然。

× Yes, of course it can show our family style or even more important.

✓ Yes, of course. It can show our family style and, even more importantly, our country’s style.

修饰整个后面的观点时，应使用副词 importantly，而不是形容词 important。important 描述名词或人、事物的特征；importantly 用来表示“更重要的是”。另外，使用 country’s style 表示“我们国家的风格”更清楚。

× For example, if we meet a foreigner and talk to them very polite.

✓ For example, if we meet a foreigner and talk to them very politely, they will think our country is respectful.

talk 是动词，需要用副词修饰，因此 polite 应改为 politely。原句以 if 开头但没有完整的主句，建议将后面的内容连接起来，形成完整句子。

× We can ask someone with is queues.

✓ We can ask someone who is in the queue.

with is 不能作为关系代词使用。指代人的关系代词应使用 who；表示“在队伍里”应使用 in the queue。建议记住：who 指人，which 指物，where 指地点。

× I always help agreed people go across the street and always pick up the rubbish from the ground.

✓ I always helped people go across the street and always picked up the rubbish from the ground.

问题使用了 What did you do，回答过去做过的事情时应使用一般过去时。help 改为 helped，pick 改为 picked。原句中的 agreed 不是合适的词；如果想表达“年长的人”，应使用 elderly people 或 older people，但这属于词汇选择问题。