Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: You answer the question directly and give a clear reason, but the answer repeats “my grandma” and includes hesitation. Use a more natural expression such as “I learned it from my grandmother,” then add one specific example of how she taught you to behave politely. This would make the answer more detailed and effective.

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my grandmother, who was my role model when I was growing up. She always reminded me to greet people properly, listen without interrupting, and say “please” and “thank you.” Because I spent so much time with her, these habits became natural to me.

Sugerencia: Your opinion is clear, but the answer contains repetition and an awkward double negative in “I don't think are not polite.” Avoid repeating “I think” and use more natural phrases such as “I find it difficult to interact with rude people.” Add a specific result of politeness, such as creating trust or preventing misunderstandings.

Ejemplo: Yes, politeness is extremely important because it helps people communicate respectfully and avoid unnecessary conflict. I find it difficult to spend time with people who are consistently rude or inconsiderate. Even a simple gesture, such as listening carefully or saying “thank you,” can make relationships much stronger.

Sugerencia: You give a strong and direct answer, and the final point about being polite to close family is relevant. However, there are grammar problems with “a specific events” and “your most loved and close ones,” and the answer could use a clearer linking structure. Mention a few situations, such as meeting strangers, speaking to colleagues, or disagreeing with family members, to provide specific support.

Ejemplo: I believe we should be polite at all times, not only on special occasions. For example, we should show respect when meeting strangers, speaking to colleagues, or asking someone for help. It is especially important to remain polite with close family members because familiarity should not be an excuse for being rude.

Sugerencia: You respond honestly, but the answer is hesitant and does not give a clear example of your own behavior. The phrase “children who interrupts” should be “children who interrupt,” and “gets in their ways” is unnatural here; use “get in adults’ way.” Instead of saying “maybe I was kind of polite,” describe a specific habit, such as waiting your turn, greeting guests, or helping adults.

Ejemplo: I do not remember one particular incident, but I usually showed politeness by waiting my turn to speak and avoiding interruptions. For instance, when adults were having a conversation, I tried to listen quietly until they finished. I also greeted guests and thanked people when they helped me.

× I cannot umm talk or spend my time with people which I don't think umm are not polite.

✓ I cannot talk to or spend time with people who I think are not polite.

Use who, not which, when referring to people. The revised sentence also removes the unnecessary negative combination in I don't think ... are not polite, which makes the intended meaning clear: the student does not want to spend time with people who are impolite.

× I think all the time because to be polite you don't have to have a specific occasion or a specific events or to spend your time with specific people.

✓ I think all the time because, to be polite, you don't have to have a specific occasion or a specific event or spend your time with specific people.

The article a must be followed by a singular countable noun. Therefore, events should be changed to the singular form event. The verb phrases are also made parallel by removing the unnecessary second to before spend.

× Adults don't like children who interrupts and gets in their ways a lot.

✓ Adults don't like children who interrupt and get in their ways a lot.

The relative pronoun who refers to children, which is plural. Therefore, the verbs must be in their plural forms: interrupt and get, not interrupts and gets.