Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答思路是合理的，但有明显的语法和词汇错误。应使用过去时，例如“my parents taught me”和“when my uncle came to our home”。“candles”在这里不符合语境，可能想表达“some tea and water”。建议先直接说明父母如何教育你，再给出一个具体例子，并使用完整的条件句。

Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite by encouraging me to be patient and respectful to others. For example, whenever my uncle visited our home, I would offer him some tea and water. They also reminded me to listen carefully and say “please” and “thank you.”

Sugerencia: 答案直接表达了观点，但“plight”和“plat”不是这里应使用的词，正确词汇是“polite”或“politeness”。“the word will accept to you”表达不清楚，可以改为“people will respect and treat you well”。建议给出一个明确原因，并补充礼貌如何改善人际关系。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I think politeness is an essential quality in modern society because it helps people communicate respectfully. If you are polite, others are more likely to trust you and treat you well. It also helps prevent unnecessary conflicts.

Sugerencia: 你回答了“所有场合”，方向正确，但句子结构和词汇需要改进。“every occasion we should”应改为“we should be polite on every occasion”，“basement mental”不自然，可用“basic quality”或“basic social skill”。“the word will be pledge to you”意思不清，建议具体说明在家庭、学校、工作场所或公共场合保持礼貌的好处。

Ejemplo: I believe we should be polite on every occasion, especially when we are speaking to older people, teachers, or colleagues. Politeness is a basic social skill that shows respect for others. Even when we disagree, using polite language can help us avoid arguments and maintain good relationships.

Sugerencia: 你提供了具体人物和行为，这是优点，但语法、时态和句子结构需要改进。“I every day good morning”应改为“I said good morning every day”，“the grandmother which under my home”应改为“an elderly woman who lived downstairs”。由于问题询问童年经历，应统一使用过去时，并避免重复两次“good morning”。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I often greeted an elderly woman who lived downstairs from us. I saw her on my way to school and always said, “Good morning.” I also smiled and helped her carry her shopping bags when she needed assistance.

× My parents told me I will be patient to others.

✓ My parents told me to be patient with others.

主句使用过去时“told”，后面的表达应与过去语境保持一致。这里用“told me to do”比“told me I will”更自然；“will”不应直接用于过去语境。

× My parents told me I will be patient to others.

✓ My parents told me to be patient with others.

“be patient”通常与介词“with”搭配，表示“对某人有耐心”，不能使用“to”。

× For example, if my uncle to my home, I will give him some candles and water.

✓ For example, if my uncle came to my home, I would give him some candles and water.

“if my uncle to my home”缺少谓语动词。这里应使用“came”表示“来我家”。条件句中，过去情境通常使用“if + 过去式，would + 动词原形”。

× For example, if my uncle to my home, I will give him some candles and water.

✓ For example, if my uncle came to my home, I would give him some candles and water.

题目询问童年时的经历，应该使用过去时。“came”和“would give”与过去语境一致。

× Of course, plight is most character in nowadays social.

✓ Of course, politeness is the most important characteristic in today's society.

“most character”不能正确表达“最重要的特征”。应使用形容词“important”修饰名词“characteristic”。此外，“nowadays social”搭配不正确，应使用名词短语“today's society”。

× Of course, plight is most character in nowadays social.

✓ Of course, politeness is the most important characteristic in today's society.

最高级前通常需要使用定冠词“the”，并且“most”应该修饰形容词，如“the most important”，不能直接修饰“character”。

× Of course, plight is most character in nowadays social.

✓ Of course, politeness is the most important characteristic in today's society.

最高级“most important”前需要定冠词“the”。“society”在这里由“today's”限定，因此不需要额外使用冠词。

× If you are a plight person, the word plat will accept to you.

✓ If you are a polite person, the world will accept you.

“accept”后面直接接宾语，不能使用“accept to you”。正确结构是“accept you”。

× If you are a plight person, the word plat will accept to you.

✓ If you are a polite person, the world will accept you.

表示“一个有礼貌的人”时，需要使用不定冠词“a”，构成“a polite person”。

× I think every occasion we should be polite because it's a basement mental of people to be polite.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion because politeness is a basic quality of being human.

表示“在每个场合”时，应使用介词“on”，构成“on every occasion”。同时，句首的地点或时间短语不应错误地放在主语前而缺少正确结构。

× And if you be a polite person, the word will be pledge to you.

✓ And if you are a polite person, the world will be pleased with you.

在一般现在时条件句中，主语“you”后面应使用“are”，不能使用动词原形“be”。结构应为“if you are...”。

× And if you be a polite person, the word will be pledge to you.

✓ And if you are a polite person, the world will be pleased with you.

“will be pledge”中的过去分词形式错误，正确形式是“pleased”。“will be pleased”是正确的“will be + 过去分词”结构。

× And if you be a polite person, the word will be pledge to you.

✓ And if you are a polite person, the world will be pleased with you.

“be pleased”通常与介词“with”搭配，表示“对……感到满意”。因此应说“be pleased with you”，而不是“be pledge to you”。

× When I was a child, I every day good morning with the grandmother which under my home and when I go to school I always see her and I will say good morning

✓ When I was a child, I said good morning every day to the grandmother who lived below my home. When I went to school, I always saw her and said good morning.

“I every day good morning”缺少谓语动词。表达“说早上好”应使用动词短语“say good morning”；因为故事发生在过去，这里使用过去式“said”。

× When I was a child, I every day good morning with the grandmother which under my home and when I go to school I always see her and I will say good morning

✓ When I was a child, I said good morning every day to the grandmother who lived below my home. When I went to school, I always saw her and said good morning.

整段描述的是童年经历，因此动词应使用过去式：“go”改为“went”，“see”改为“saw”，“will say”改为“said”。

× When I was a child, I every day good morning with the grandmother which under my home and when I go to school I always see her and I will say good morning

✓ When I was a child, I said good morning every day to the grandmother who lived below my home. When I went to school, I always saw her and said good morning.

“say good morning”后面通常使用介词“to”引出对象，应说“say good morning to the grandmother”，不能使用“with”。

× When I was a child, I every day good morning with the grandmother which under my home and when I go to school I always see her and I will say good morning

✓ When I was a child, I said good morning every day to the grandmother who lived below my home. When I went to school, I always saw her and said good morning.

先行词“the grandmother”指人，关系代词应使用“who”，不能使用指物的“which”。