Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，也提供了具体例子，但“promisely”不是正确用词，应改为“mainly”或直接说“I learned it through...”。“These good manners leave a lasting influence”时态和搭配不自然，建议改为“They have had a lasting influence on my life”。还可以补充一个更具体的场景，例如父母如何示范礼貌行为。

Ejemplo: I mainly learned to be polite through imitation and guidance from my parents. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” when asking for something. I also watched them greet people respectfully, and this has had a lasting influence on my behavior.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，使用了“not only...but also...”等连接结构，内容也较充分。需要注意语法细节：“plays crucial role”应为“plays a crucial role”，句首“Ultimately”要大写。此外，句子过长，建议拆分成两到三句，并避免“widespread politeness”这类略显生硬的表达，改为“when people are generally polite”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it plays a crucial role in our social lives. It helps people build harmonious relationships and shows mutual respect. When people are generally polite, the community feels warmer and more civilized.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，并说明了礼貌的作用，但“polite weather”是明显的词汇错误，应改为“polite behavior”或“good manners”。“in public places or at work”可以进一步具体化，例如在公共交通工具上、与同事交流时或第一次见面时。最后一句中的“basically”略显口语化且信息量较低，可以换成更自然的“make social interactions smoother”。

Ejemplo: We should be polite in public places, at work, and whenever we meet someone for the first time. For example, we should speak respectfully to staff and avoid disturbing other people on public transport. Good manners create a favorable first impression and make social interactions smoother.

Sugerencia: 回答自然、具体，包含问候和收到礼物时表达感谢两个例子，结构也很清楚。主要问题是时态一致性：因为问题问的是过去，最后应说“etiquette became second nature to me”，而不是“becomes”。“say hi”较口语化，在考试中也可以使用，但“greeted”会更准确、自然。

Ejemplo: When I was young, I always greeted my family members and neighbors by saying “hi” or “good morning.” Whenever I received a gift, my parents reminded me to thank the person sincerely. Because of this early training, good manners became second nature to me.

× I promisely learned it through imitation and parental guidance.

✓ I primarily learned to be polite through imitation and parental guidance.

“promisely”不是正确的英语副词。这里应使用“primarily”，表示“主要地”。另外，“learned to be polite”比“learned it”更准确，因为“be polite”是需要学习的行为。

× Yes, I believe being polite plays crucial role in our social life and not only fosters harmonious relationships with people around us but also conveys our mutual respect.

✓ Yes, I believe being polite plays a crucial role in our social life and not only fosters harmonious relationships with people around us but also conveys our mutual respect.

“role”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。固定搭配是“play a crucial role”，意思是“发挥重要作用”。

× I reckon that we should maintain polite weather in public places or at work.

✓ I reckon that we should maintain polite behavior in public places or at work.

“weather”表示“天气”，不能用来表示礼貌行为。这里应使用名词“behavior”，构成“maintain polite behavior”，意思是“保持礼貌的行为”。

× I guess etiquette becomes second nature to me because of this early training.

✓ I guess etiquette has become second nature to me because of this early training.

这里描述的是童年训练对现在产生的结果，因此使用现在完成时“has become”更准确，表示“已经变成”。主语“etiquette”是不可数名词，所以使用“has”。