Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly by saying that your family taught you politeness. Avoid repeating “from” several times, and use the correct words “polite” and “patient” instead of “ployed” and “pleid.” Also, “remain calm” is not exactly the same as “be polite,” so include specific polite behaviors, such as greeting people, listening carefully, and saying “please” and “thank you.”

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and grandparents. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you,” listen when other people were speaking, and treat everyone with respect. They also reminded me to stay patient, even when I disagreed with someone.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two well-organized reasons. Replace the unnatural phrases “gives a positive impact from you” and “makes a good impression of you” with “creates a positive impression” or “has a positive effect on how people see you.” Avoid repeating “polite people” and “people” too often.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it helps us build positive relationships and creates a good impression. For example, people are usually more willing to communicate with someone who listens respectfully and uses courteous language.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer by mentioning several occasions clearly. Since you are describing general situations, use the present tense: “when someone comes to our house,” not “when somebody came.” Replace “some other scenario” with a more natural phrase such as “in other situations,” and use linking words like “also” and “for example” to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet other people, especially when guests come to our home or when someone asks us for help. We should also show respect to our elders, teachers, and younger children. For example, we can listen patiently, speak calmly, and offer help when necessary.

Sugerencia: Answer with specific actions rather than saying only that you respected your elders. “Employed tone” is incorrect; use “polite tone” or “respectful manner.” The phrase “I never disappointed them” does not clearly demonstrate politeness, so replace it with examples such as greeting relatives, listening carefully, or helping older family members. Avoid repeating “and” and remove the duplicated word in “and and.”

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting my elders whenever I saw them and speaking to them in a respectful tone. I also listened carefully when they gave me advice and helped them with small tasks around the house. Because of this, my family considered me a well-mannered child.

× When I was a child, I learned from my parents from my aunt, from my grandparents to be ployed, they taught me lessons and encouraged me to always remain calm and pleid with other people. So this helped me a lot in remaining calm.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite from my parents, my aunt, and my grandparents. They taught me valuable lessons and encouraged me always to remain calm and polite with other people. This helped me a lot in remaining calm.

The original sentence contains a run-on structure and incorrectly joins several independent ideas with commas. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use a clear structure: learn to be polite from someone. The words ployed and pleid also appear to be mispronunciations or spelling errors of polite.

× Yes, I do believe that being polite is very important nowadays because it gives a positive impact from you and everyone likes to talk to polite people and it makes a good impression of you and people will always remember you.

✓ Yes, I do believe that being polite is very important nowadays because it has a positive impact on others. Everyone likes to talk to polite people, and politeness makes a good impression on them. People will always remember you positively.

The correct preposition is impact on, not impact from, when describing an effect. We also say make a good impression on someone, not make a good impression of someone. Breaking the long sentence into shorter sentences makes the meaning clearer.

× Yes, I do believe that being polite is very important nowadays because it gives a positive impact from you and everyone likes to talk to polite people and it makes a good impression of you and people will always remember you.

✓ Yes, I do believe that being polite is very important nowadays because it has a positive impact on others. Everyone likes to talk to polite people, and politeness makes a good impression on them. People will always remember you positively.

The original sentence is too long and contains several ideas joined only by and. Use full stops and commas to separate the ideas, and avoid repeatedly connecting independent clauses with and.

× I think when somebody came to our house or some other scenario like somebody came to us for help I believe we should always be polite and listen to them properly and we should always be polite to our elders and little children.

✓ I think that when somebody comes to our house or comes to us for help, we should always be polite and listen to them carefully. We should also always be polite to our elders and young children.

The question asks about occasions in general, so the present tense is needed. Use comes rather than came for a repeated or general situation. The phrase when somebody comes introduces a general condition.

× I think when somebody came to our house or some other scenario like somebody came to us for help I believe we should always be polite and listen to them properly and we should always be polite to our elders and little children.

✓ I think that when somebody comes to our house or comes to us for help, we should always be polite and listen to them carefully. We should also always be polite to our elders and young children.

The phrase some other scenario is not used correctly in this structure. Use in another situation or, more naturally here, describe the situation directly with when somebody comes to us for help. The sentence also needs punctuation to show the relationship between the ideas.

× When I was a child I always respected my elders and I never disappointed them and I always talked with them with an employed tone and and they liked me a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I always respected my elders, never disappointed them, and spoke to them in a polite tone. They liked me a lot.

Employed does not mean polite. The appropriate adjective is polite. Also, the natural expression is speak to someone in a polite tone, rather than talk with someone with an employed tone.

× When I was a child I always respected my elders and I never disappointed them and I always talked with them with an employed tone and and they liked me a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I always respected my elders, never disappointed them, and spoke to them in a polite tone. They liked me a lot.

The conjunction and is repeated unnecessarily as and and. Use one and to connect the final item in a list, or separate the final idea into a new sentence. This creates a clearer and more natural sentence.