Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use accurate past-tense grammar. Say “I was taught by my parents” rather than “I learned by teaching,” and avoid repeating words such as “also” and “teach.” Complete the final idea by explaining when your mother told you to say “thank you.” Use a clear structure: main answer, one family example, and one school-related detail.

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. My parents taught me to say “please” and “thank you” whenever I asked for something or received help. At school, my teachers also reminded us to respect other people and use good manners.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion and support it with one or two clear reasons. Avoid fillers and repeated phrases such as “like,” “very kind of,” and “for instance like.” Correct the grammar in “it shows many aspects” and “it shows that you have good manners.” Explain the result of politeness, such as making conversations more positive and showing respect.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people. It also creates a friendly atmosphere and makes communication easier. For example, using polite language when speaking to a colleague can help build a good relationship.

Sugerencia: State clearly that people should be polite on all occasions, not only when speaking to older people. Give specific situations, such as meeting elders, speaking to teachers, or communicating at work. Improve grammatical accuracy by saying “on every occasion,” “show respect,” and “Thai people respect politeness.” Avoid unfinished phrases and repeated references to Thai culture.

Ejemplo: I think we should be polite in every situation, especially when speaking to older people, teachers, or colleagues. This is particularly important in Thai culture, where showing respect to elders is highly valued. For example, people often use respectful language and greetings when meeting an older person.

Sugerencia: Use the correct phrase “As a child” and maintain the past tense when describing childhood habits. Explain the actions in a natural way: saying “thank you” after receiving help and saying “please” when making a request. Replace “to get more polite” with “to be polite,” and avoid unnecessary fillers such as “like.”

Ejemplo: As a child, I always said “thank you” when someone helped me. I also said “please” whenever I wanted to ask for something. These simple expressions helped me show respect and develop good manners.

× Well I learned how to be polite by teaching from my parents and my family.

✓ Well, I learned how to be polite by being taught by my parents and my family.

The speaker received the teaching, so the passive form is needed. Use being taught, not teaching, after by in this sentence.

× Also the school also teach me umm thought me about the manner as well.

✓ The school also taught me about manners.

The answer describes childhood learning in the past, so teach must be changed to its past-tense form, taught.

× Also the school also teach me umm thought me about the manner as well.

✓ The school also taught me about manners.

Manners is normally used in the plural when referring to polite behavior in general.

× So my mum's charge me to always say thank you when we.

✓ So my mum charged me to always say thank you when we received something.

The answer refers to a past childhood experience, so charge must be changed to the past-tense form charged.

× So my mum's charge me to always say thank you when we.

✓ So my mum charged me to always say thank you when we received something.

The sentence is incomplete because when we has no completed idea after it. Add a verb and the necessary information to form a complete clause.

× Yes, I believe that like being polite is very kind of important because it shows many aspect for instance like it show you are have like a good manner and when you talk politely and show that real respect.

✓ Yes, I believe that being polite is very important because it shows many aspects. For instance, it shows that you have good manners and that when you talk politely, you show real respect.

Kind of important is not the appropriate expression here. Use very important or quite important to modify the adjective important naturally.

× Yes, I believe that like being polite is very kind of important because it shows many aspect for instance like it show you are have like a good manner and when you talk politely and show that real respect.

✓ Yes, I believe that being polite is very important because it shows many aspects. For instance, it shows that you have good manners and that when you talk politely, you show real respect.

Many requires a plural noun, so aspect must be changed to aspects. Good manners is also the usual plural expression for polite behavior.

× Yes, I believe that like being polite is very kind of important because it shows many aspect for instance like it show you are have like a good manner and when you talk politely and show that real respect.

✓ Yes, I believe that being polite is very important because it shows many aspects. For instance, it shows that you have good manners and that when you talk politely, you show real respect.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the verb must be shows, not show.

× Yes, I believe that like being polite is very kind of important because it shows many aspect for instance like it show you are have like a good manner and when you talk politely and show that real respect.

✓ Yes, I believe that being polite is very important because it shows many aspects. For instance, it shows that you have good manners and that when you talk politely, you show real respect.

You are have contains two verbs that cannot be used together in this structure. Use you have to express possession, and separate the long sentence into clearer clauses.

× Felt I believe that in every occasion which involved many like older people, so it's important to show the respect, especially in the Thai culture uh, this very kind of important for a Thai culture because the Thai people uh, respects.

✓ Well, I believe that on every occasion that involves older people, it is important to show respect, especially in Thai culture. This is very important in Thai culture because Thai people respect others.

The answer gives a general opinion, so use the present-tense verb involves rather than the past-tense verb involved.

× Felt I believe that in every occasion which involved many like older people, so it's important to show the respect, especially in the Thai culture uh, this very kind of important for a Thai culture because the Thai people uh, respects.

✓ Well, I believe that on every occasion that involves older people, it is important to show respect, especially in Thai culture. This is very important in Thai culture because Thai people respect others.

Respect is an uncountable noun when referring to the general idea of showing respect, so it does not need the definite article the.

× Felt I believe that in every occasion which involved many like older people, so it's important to show the respect, especially in the Thai culture uh, this very kind of important for a Thai culture because the Thai people uh, respects.

✓ Well, I believe that on every occasion that involves older people, it is important to show respect, especially in Thai culture. This is very important in Thai culture because Thai people respect others.

The clause this very kind of important has no main verb. Add is after this to create a complete sentence: This is very important.

× Felt I believe that in every occasion which involved many like older people, so it's important to show the respect, especially in the Thai culture uh, this very kind of important for a Thai culture because the Thai people uh, respects.

✓ Well, I believe that on every occasion that involves older people, it is important to show respect, especially in Thai culture. This is very important in Thai culture because Thai people respect others.

Thai culture is being discussed in a general sense, so it does not need the indefinite article a. Use Thai culture, not a Thai culture.

× Felt I believe that in every occasion which involved many like older people, so it's important to show the respect, especially in the Thai culture uh, this very kind of important for a Thai culture because the Thai people uh, respects.

✓ Well, I believe that on every occasion that involves older people, it is important to show respect, especially in Thai culture. This is very important in Thai culture because Thai people respect others.

Thai people is a plural subject, so it must be followed by the plural verb respect, not respects.

× As a chives I always say thank you when someone helping me and if I would ask someone to help me I would say like please help me to get more polite and show that I respect them as well.

✓ As a child, I always said thank you when someone helped me. If I asked someone to help me, I would say please to be polite and show that I respected them as well.

The question asks about childhood, so the past-tense forms said, helped, asked, and respected are appropriate.

× As a chives I always say thank you when someone helping me and if I would ask someone to help me I would say like please help me to get more polite and show that I respect them as well.

✓ As a child, I always said thank you when someone helped me. If I asked someone to help me, I would say please to be polite and show that I respected them as well.

In a second conditional structure, use if + past simple followed by would + base verb. Therefore, use If I asked, not If I would ask.

× As a chives I always say thank you when someone helping me and if I would ask someone to help me I would say like please help me to get more polite and show that I respect them as well.

✓ As a child, I always said thank you when someone helped me. If I asked someone to help me, I would say please to be polite and show that I respected them as well.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined without clear structure. Separate the ideas into two sentences and use to be polite to express the purpose correctly.