Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答抓住了“老师教导”这一核心，但存在明显的词汇和语法问题，例如“next meet you”应为“nice to meet you”，“when we see others in first time”应为“when we met someone for the first time”，“collected vocabulary”应改为“polite expressions”。建议先直接说明学习来源，再补充具体例子，并使用过去时保持时态一致。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my primary school teacher. She taught us to greet people when we met them and to use polite expressions such as “please,” “thank you,” and “goodbye.”

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“polluted”和“polleted”应为“politeness”或“being polite”；后半部分几乎无法理解，影响连贯性。建议使用清晰的结构：先表明观点，再说明礼貌能表达尊重、改善人际关系，并避免重复和无意义表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people and helps us build positive relationships. Without politeness, people may think we are rude or inconsiderate.

Sugerencia: 你给出了见面时要礼貌这一相关例子，但“see Nestor metal”无法理解，可能想表达“show good manners”；“when we see others in first time”应改为“when we meet someone for the first time”，“lady or gentlemen”应改为“ladies and gentlemen”或直接使用对方的称呼。建议列出一到两个具体场合，如初次见面、与长辈交流或请求帮助。

Ejemplo: We should be polite when we meet someone for the first time, especially in a formal situation. For example, we should greet them, use “please” and “thank you,” and address them respectfully.

Sugerencia: 回答包含两个例子：初次见面打招呼和在图书馆保持安静，但句子结构混乱，且“Natural Meteor”应改为“nice to meet you”。由于问题询问过去的行为，应统一使用过去时，例如“said”和“kept”；结尾应明确说明这些行为是为了表达尊重。

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “hello” or “nice to meet you” when I met someone for the first time. I also kept quiet in the library because I wanted to respect other people who were studying.

× When I was a child in primary school, my teacher told me that we should say hello and next meet you when we see others in first time and to teach us some collected vocabulary such as please and goodbye.

✓ When I was a child in primary school, my teacher taught us to say hello and “nice to meet you” when we met people for the first time. She also taught us polite expressions such as “please” and “goodbye.”

原句把多个动作混在一个长句中，结构不清晰，而且“told us... and to teach us...”结构不平行。建议把复杂句拆成两个句子，并使用平行结构，例如“taught us to...”和“also taught us...”。

× When I was a child in primary school, my teacher told me that we should say hello and next meet you when we see others in first time and to teach us some collected vocabulary such as please and goodbye.

✓ When I was a child in primary school, my teacher taught us to say hello and “nice to meet you” when we met people for the first time. She also taught us polite expressions such as “please” and “goodbye.”

“in first time”中的介词使用错误。表示“第一次”应该使用固定短语“for the first time”，而不是“in first time”。

× When I was a child in primary school, my teacher told me that we should say hello and next meet you when we see others in first time and to teach us some collected vocabulary such as please and goodbye.

✓ When I was a child in primary school, my teacher taught us to say hello and “nice to meet you” when we met people for the first time. She also taught us polite expressions such as “please” and “goodbye.”

“first time”前面需要搭配固定表达“the first time”，但在“for the first time”中，冠词已经包含在短语里。

× Definitely I think polluted is very significant in modern society. Polleted can show our respect for others without polluted via We are we are rude people so we can do nothing.

✓ Definitely, I think politeness is very important in modern society. Politeness shows our respect for others. Without politeness, we may seem rude and may not be able to build good relationships.

“polluted/polleted”表示“被污染的”，不能表示“礼貌”或“礼貌行为”。这里应使用名词“politeness”。另外，“significant”虽然语法上可以使用，但表达“礼貌很重要”时，“important”更自然。

× Definitely I think polluted is very significant in modern society. Polleted can show our respect for others without polluted via We are we are rude people so we can do nothing.

✓ Definitely, I think politeness is very important in modern society. Politeness shows our respect for others. Without it, we may seem rude and may not be able to build good relationships.

第二句中重复使用“polluted”，而且“without polluted”后面缺少正确的指代。前面已经提到“politeness”，后面可以用代词“it”代替，避免重复并使句子结构正确。

× Definitely I think polluted is very significant in modern society. Polleted can show our respect for others without polluted via We are we are rude people so we can do nothing.

✓ Definitely, I think politeness is very important in modern society. Politeness shows our respect for others. Without it, we may seem rude and may not be able to build good relationships.

原句包含重复词语和不完整结构，例如“without polluted via We are we are...”。建议将意思拆成几个完整句子，并确保每个句子都有清楚的主语和谓语。

× For example, when we see others in first time, we should see Nestor metal and use some collected vocabulary such as please and call them lady or gentlemen.

✓ For example, when we meet people for the first time, we should show respect, use polite expressions such as “please,” and call them ladies or gentlemen.

“in first time”不正确，应该说“for the first time”。另外，“meet people”比“see others”更适合表达“遇到别人”。

× For example, when we see others in first time, we should see Nestor metal and use some collected vocabulary such as please and call them lady or gentlemen.

✓ For example, when we meet people for the first time, we should show respect, use polite expressions such as “please,” and call them ladies or gentlemen.

表示“第一次”时需要使用固定短语“for the first time”。不能说“in first time”。

× For example, when we see others in first time, we should see Nestor metal and use some collected vocabulary such as please and call them lady or gentlemen.

✓ For example, when we meet people for the first time, we should show respect, use polite expressions such as “please,” and call them ladies or gentlemen.

“them”指代复数的人，因此后面的称呼也应保持复数形式。“lady or gentlemen”单复数不一致，应改为“ladies or gentlemen”。

× When I was a child when I see others in first time, I should say Natural Meteor and when I went to a library I should be quiet And so my respect for the others

✓ When I was a child, I would say “nice to meet you” when I met people for the first time. When I went to the library, I kept quiet to show my respect for others.

这段内容描述童年时期的习惯，主要时态应使用过去时。“see”应改为“met”，因为这里表示过去遇见别人。描述过去经常做的事情时，也可以使用“would”。

× When I was a child when I see others in first time, I should say Natural Meteor and when I went to a library I should be quiet And so my respect for the others

✓ When I was a child, I would say “nice to meet you” when I met people for the first time. When I went to the library, I kept quiet to show my respect for others.

“in first time”应改为固定短语“for the first time”。“a library”表示任意一个图书馆，但根据语境，说自己去图书馆这一日常活动时，“the library”更自然。“the others”在这里不合适，泛指其他人时使用“others”。

× When I was a child when I see others in first time, I should say Natural Meteor and when I went to a library I should be quiet And so my respect for the others

✓ When I was a child, I would say “nice to meet you” when I met people for the first time. When I went to the library, I kept quiet to show my respect for others.

“the others”通常指一组特定范围内剩下的那些人。本句只是泛指其他人，所以应使用“others”，不需要定冠词“the”。

× When I was a child when I see others in first time, I should say Natural Meteor and when I went to a library I should be quiet And so my respect for the others

✓ When I was a child, I would say “nice to meet you” when I met people for the first time. When I went to the library, I kept quiet to show my respect for others.

原句重复使用“When”，并且最后的“And so my respect for the others”不是完整句子，缺少正确的谓语。应拆分句子，并使用“to show my respect”表示“以表达我的尊重”。