Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本切题，但表达不自然且缺少完整句子。应直接说明“通过父母教育或日常模仿学会礼貌”，并使用完整结构，例如“learned to say hello, please, and thank you”。“plight”表示“困境”，此处应使用“politeness”或“respect”。建议补充一个具体来源，如父母提醒你对长辈使用礼貌用语。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to say “hello,” “please,” and “thank you,” especially when I was speaking to adults. I also copied the polite way they treated other people.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但句子结构混乱，且回答没有完整结束。应使用清晰的因果连接词，如“because”或“as a result”，并说明礼貌如何改善人际关系。 “implied”应改为“important”或“necessary”；“two peoples”应改为“two people”；“at most fair”以及“some subjects”不符合语境。建议给出一个具体结果，例如更容易解决分歧或建立信任。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate more comfortably. It can also prevent unnecessary misunderstandings and make it easier to build trust. For example, a polite request is usually more effective than a rude one.

Sugerencia: 回答提到了初次见面，但语法和词汇需要改进。 “exchangers”应改为“strangers”或“new people”；“professor situations”应改为“professional situations”；“it’s needed to be polite to introduce oneself”表达生硬。建议先概括场合，再提供一两个具体例子，并使用“especially”或“for example”连接细节。

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, especially in formal or professional situations. For example, when I attend a job interview or meet a professor, I should greet them respectfully and introduce myself clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答有具体行为，但时态应与问题保持一致：将“will invite”改为“would invite”或“I invited”。“as a child”重复且位置不自然；“have better activities”不符合英语习惯，可改为“have a better time together”。建议围绕一个行为展开，并说明这样做的结果，例如让其他孩子感到受欢迎。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I would invite other children to play with me and introduce myself politely. I usually asked them what games they liked, which helped us start a conversation. As a result, they felt welcome and we often became friends.

× I learned to say hello please thank you words to show my plight as a child.

✓ I learned to say “hello,” “please,” and “thank you” as a child.

原句中多个词语直接堆在一起，句子结构不完整。“hello,” “please,” 和 “thank you” 是并列内容，需要使用逗号和 and 连接。这里仅调整句子结构，没有修改词汇含义。

× It is very important to be implied because...

✓ It is very important to be polite because...

“implied”表示“被暗示的”，不符合句意。这里需要使用形容词“polite”（有礼貌的）来描述人的行为或状态。

× ...at most fair between two peoples will be more harmonious...

✓ ...in most cases, relationships between two people will be more harmonious...

“people”本身就是“人”的复数形式，表示两个人时应说“two people”，不能说“two peoples”。“peoples”通常表示不同民族或民族群体。

× It is very important to be implied because when we are polite, at most fair between two peoples will be more harmonious and also it is easier to reach some aims such as some subjects or.

✓ It is very important to be polite because, when we are polite, relationships between two people are more harmonious, and it is also easier to achieve certain goals.

原句包含多个结构不完整或不清楚的部分，例如“at most fair”和“some subjects or”无法构成完整、清晰的句子。需要重新组织主语、谓语和宾语，使句子表达完整。

× When we meet some exchangers for the first time and there's some professor situations it's needed to be polite to introduce oneself.

✓ When we meet strangers for the first time or are in professional situations, we need to be polite and introduce ourselves.

“situations”是复数，因此如果使用 there be 结构，应说“there are some situations”，不能说“there's some situations”。本句改为直接使用“are in professional situations”，使结构更自然。

× When we meet some exchangers for the first time and there's some professor situations...

✓ When we meet strangers for the first time or are in professional situations, we need to be polite and introduce ourselves.

这里是在列举两种应该有礼貌的情况：“第一次见陌生人”或“处于职业场合”。因此应使用表示选择或列举的“or”，而不是“and”。

× ...it's needed to be polite to introduce oneself.

✓ ...we need to be polite and introduce ourselves.

前面的主语是“we”，后面的反身代词也应与主语保持一致，因此应使用“ourselves”，而不是泛指的“oneself”。同时，“introduce ourselves”比“be polite to introduce oneself”更符合英语表达习惯。

× I will invite someone to play with me and introduce myself as a child.

✓ As a child, I invited someone to play with me and introduced myself.

问题使用过去时提问：“What did you do...?”，回答童年经历时应使用过去时。因此“will invite”应改为“invited”，“introduce”应改为“introduced”。

× I will invite someone to play with me and introduce myself as a child.

✓ As a child, I invited someone to play with me and introduced myself.

“as a child”放在句末容易让人误解为“介绍自己是一个孩子”。将时间状语放在句首，可以清楚地说明这些事情发生在童年时期。