Part 1
Examinador
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Candidato
Yes, I had learned to be polite since I was a child. My parents teached me a lot of etiquette that made me feel better to be a polite guy.
Examinador
Do you think being polite is very important?
Candidato
I think polite is very important in Thailand society because when people say thank you or please to every situation that they face, it will prefer better feedback to them.
Examinador
On what occasions should we be polite?
Candidato
We should provide on every situation when we enter to the social that may us reually positive blessed positive and everyone will cry to us.
Examinador
What did you do to show your politeness as a child?
Candidato
I always say thank you to everyone who gives something to me and when I want some help I will ask someone will accuse me or please before I say something to them.
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Answer the question directly without starting with “Yes,” because it is not a yes/no question. Use the correct past tense “taught,” and say “polite person” rather than “polite guy” in this context. Explain specifically how your parents taught you, and avoid the unnatural phrase “made me feel better to be polite.”
Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite from an early age. They encouraged me to greet adults, say “please” and “thank you,” and listen when other people were speaking. As a result, these habits became a natural part of my daily life.
Do you think being polite is very important?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Use the adjective “politeness” as the subject or say “being polite is very important.” Replace “Thailand society” with “Thai society,” and use a natural result expression such as “it creates a positive impression” instead of “it will prefer better feedback.” Give one clear reason and, if possible, a specific example.
Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important in Thai society because it shows respect and helps people build positive relationships. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make conversations more pleasant and encourage others to treat us kindly.
On what occasions should we be polite?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: State the answer directly: “We should be polite in almost every situation.” The original response contains several unclear and incorrect phrases, such as “provide on every situation,” “enter to the social,” and “everyone will cry to us.” Organize the answer with a linking word and provide specific occasions, such as meeting elders, speaking to strangers, or asking for help.
Ejemplo: We should be polite in almost every situation, especially when we meet older people, speak to strangers, or ask someone for help. In addition, we should remain polite in formal settings, such as school or the workplace, because respectful behavior creates a positive impression.
What did you do to show your politeness as a child?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “I always said” and “I would ask.” Replace “who gives something to me” with “who gave me something,” and correct the unclear phrase “ask someone will accuse me or please” to “ask someone for help politely” or “say ‘please’ before making a request.” Add a clear example to make the answer more specific.
Ejemplo: As a child, I always said “thank you” when someone gave me something. I also said “please” before asking for help, such as when I needed assistance with my homework. These were simple ways of showing respect to my family, teachers, and friends.
× Yes, I had learned to be polite since I was a child. My parents teached me a lot of etiquette that made me feel better to be a polite guy.
✓ Yes, I learned to be polite when I was a child. My parents taught me a lot about etiquette, which made me feel like a polite person.
Use the simple past learned because the question asks about a completed period in the past. The irregular past form of teach is taught, not teached. Also, when is more appropriate than since because the sentence describes when the learning happened.
× I think polite is very important in Thailand society because when people say thank you or please to every situation that they face, it will prefer better feedback to them.
✓ I think politeness is very important in Thai society because when people say thank you or please in every situation they face, they receive better feedback from others.
Polite is an adjective, but the subject of the sentence needs a noun, politeness. Thai is the adjective used to describe society, not Thailand. The phrase receive better feedback is grammatically appropriate because people receive feedback; they do not prefer feedback in this meaning.
× I think polite is very important in Thailand society because when people say thank you or please to every situation that they face, it will prefer better feedback to them.
✓ I think politeness is very important in Thai society because when people say thank you or please in every situation they face, they receive better feedback from others.
Use in, not to, before every situation because politeness happens within a situation. Use from others to show the source of the feedback.
× I think polite is very important in Thailand society because when people say thank you or please to every situation that they face, it will prefer better feedback to them.
✓ I think politeness is very important in Thai society because when people say thank you or please in every situation they face, they receive better feedback from others.
The pronoun it does not clearly refer to the people who receive the feedback. Use they because people is the subject that receives better feedback.
× We should provide on every situation when we enter to the social that may us reually positive blessed positive and everyone will cry to us.
✓ We should be polite in every situation, especially when we enter a social setting, because this may make us feel positive and encourage everyone to be kind to us.
Use in every situation, not on every situation. The verb enter does not take the preposition to before a direct object, so say enter a social setting. The phrase be polite in every situation is also the appropriate grammatical structure for answering this question.
× We should provide on every situation when we enter to the social that may us reually positive blessed positive and everyone will cry to us.
✓ We should be polite in every situation, especially when we enter a social setting, because this may make us feel positive and encourage everyone to be kind to us.
After the modal verb may, use the base form of a verb. The original phrase may us is incomplete; it should be may make us. The modal should is correctly used to give advice, but it must be followed by an appropriate verb phrase, such as should be polite.
× We should provide on every situation when we enter to the social that may us reually positive blessed positive and everyone will cry to us.
✓ We should be polite in every situation, especially when we enter a social setting, because this may make us feel positive and encourage everyone to be kind to us.
The original sentence contains incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses, such as that may us and reually positive blessed positive. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, a correctly formed verb phrase, and conjunctions that show the relationship between ideas.
× I always say thank you to everyone who gives something to me and when I want some help I will ask someone will accuse me or please before I say something to them.
✓ I always say thank you to everyone who gives me something, and when I need help, I ask someone for help or say please before I say anything to them.
The adverb always describes a regular habit, so use the simple present ask rather than the future form will ask. The sentence also needs a parallel structure: say thank you, ask for help, and say please.
× I always say thank you to everyone who gives something to me and when I want some help I will ask someone will accuse me or please before I say something to them.
✓ I always say thank you to everyone who gives me something, and when I need help, I ask someone for help or say please before I say anything to them.
Use ask someone for help, not ask someone help or ask someone will help. The preposition for is required before the thing being requested.
× I always say thank you to everyone who gives something to me and when I want some help I will ask someone will accuse me or please before I say something to them.
✓ I always say thank you to everyone who gives me something, and when I need help, I ask someone for help or say please before I say anything to them.
The original sentence has an incomplete and confusing structure after ask someone. It needs a complete verb phrase, such as ask someone for help, and the alternatives should be parallel: ask for help or say please.