Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 두 번째 문장의 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. ‘taught me to be polite’처럼 동사 뒤의 목적어와 to부정사를 정확히 사용하고, ‘whenever I met someone for the first time’처럼 의미를 완성해야 합니다. 학교에서 배운 구체적인 행동(인사하기, 감사 인사하기)을 추가하면 내용이 더 효과적이고 자연스러워집니다.

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly at school when I was a child. My teachers taught me to greet people and say “thank you” whenever I met someone for the first time. I also copied the polite behavior of my classmates.

Sugerencia: ‘Yes, I agree’보다는 질문이 의견을 묻고 있으므로 ‘Yes, I do’가 더 자연스럽습니다. ‘because be polite’는 ‘because being polite’로 고쳐야 하며, ‘in relationship’는 ‘in relationships’ 또는 ‘in our relationships’가 적절합니다. 마지막의 ‘I helped many moments’는 의미가 불분명하므로, 예의가 갈등을 줄이고 좋은 관계를 만드는 데 도움이 된다는 결과를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Being polite is very important because it helps us build good relationships and avoid unnecessary conflicts. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make people feel respected.

Sugerencia: 핵심 내용은 전달되지만 ‘whenever we met’는 일반적인 상황이므로 ‘whenever we meet’로 고쳐야 합니다. ‘first be polite’ 대신 ‘it is crucial to be polite from the beginning’이라고 표현하고, ‘Like greeting or thank you for’는 ‘For example, we should greet people and say thank you’처럼 완전한 문장으로 만드세요. 처음 만나는 사람뿐 아니라 직장, 공식 행사 등 한두 가지 상황을 구체적으로 제시하면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, especially in formal situations. Making a good first impression is important, so we should greet people properly and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.”

Sugerencia: 질문에 직접 답했고 예시도 제시했지만, ‘many thing’은 ‘many things’, ‘show polite attitude’는 ‘show a polite attitude’로 수정해야 합니다. ‘like’보다 ‘such as’를 사용하면 예시를 더 정확하게 연결할 수 있습니다. 또한 누구에게, 어떤 상황에서 그런 행동을 했는지 한 가지 구체적인 사례를 추가하면 내용과 어휘가 향상됩니다.

Ejemplo: As a child, I tried to show politeness by greeting adults and saying “thank you” when someone helped me. I was especially careful to use polite language when I was visiting other people’s homes. My parents often reminded me to behave respectfully in front of guests.

× Many teachers taught me that be polite whenever I met someone 1st and.

✓ Many teachers taught me to be polite whenever I met someone for the first time.

The structure taught me that be polite is incorrect here. After taught me, use the infinitive form to be. The ending 1st and is also incomplete; for the first time is the correct expression.

× Yes, I agree because be polite is the most important part in relationship so I helped many moments.

✓ Yes, I agree because being polite is the most important part of a relationship, so I try to be polite in many situations.

When an action is used as the subject of a sentence, use the gerund form being polite, not be polite. The phrase being polite functions as a noun phrase.

× Yes, I agree because be polite is the most important part in relationship so I helped many moments.

✓ Yes, I agree because being polite is the most important part of a relationship, so I try to be polite in many situations.

The singular countable noun relationship needs an article. Use a relationship because the sentence refers to one general relationship.

× Yes, I agree because be polite is the most important part in relationship so I helped many moments.

✓ Yes, I agree because being polite is the most important part of a relationship, so I try to be polite in many situations.

Helped many moments is not a grammatically complete or natural verb phrase because helped normally needs an appropriate object. The sentence should express the general benefit of politeness with a complete structure, such as I try to be polite in many situations.

× In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we met someone, first be polite is crucial. Like greeting or thank you for.

✓ In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we meet someone, being polite first is crucial, such as greeting someone or saying thank you.

The question asks about general situations, so use the present tense meet rather than the past tense met after whenever. The present tense is appropriate for habits and generally true situations.

× In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we met someone, first be polite is crucial. Like greeting or thank you for.

✓ In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we meet someone, being polite first is crucial, such as greeting someone or saying thank you.

Being polite is the subject of the clause, so the gerund form being is required. Similarly, use saying thank you because it is part of a list of activities.

× In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we met someone, first be polite is crucial. Like greeting or thank you for.

✓ In my opinion, the first impression is very important, so whenever we meet someone, being polite first is crucial, such as greeting someone or saying thank you.

Like greeting or thank you for is an incomplete sentence fragment. Connect the examples to the main sentence with such as and use parallel forms: greeting and saying.

× I tried many thing to show polite attitude like greeting or saying thank you especially in front of others.

✓ I tried many things to show a polite attitude, such as greeting people or saying thank you, especially in front of others.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, thing must be changed to things.

× I tried many thing to show polite attitude like greeting or saying thank you especially in front of others.

✓ I tried many things to show a polite attitude, such as greeting people or saying thank you, especially in front of others.

The singular countable noun attitude needs an article. Use a polite attitude when referring to one general attitude.