Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，先直接回答，再举例说明，内容也切题。主要问题是时态和搭配：讲述童年经历时应使用过去时，例如“asked”和“asked me to say”；“when I ask”应改为“when I asked”；“others help”应改为“other people’s help”或“someone’s help”。可以补充一个更具体的场景，使答案更加自然。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers when I was young. They often reminded me to say “please” when asking for something and “thank you” after receiving help. They also taught me to listen carefully and avoid interrupting other people.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也提供了原因和结果，但有明显的词汇、语法和句子连接问题。“implied”应改为“politeness”；“in our daily life”可以改为“in daily life”；“when you ask... you said”时态不一致，应使用一般现在时；两个完整分句之间需要使用“because”“so”或句号连接。建议避免重复“help”，并将答案控制在两到三句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, politeness is very important in daily life because it helps people communicate more comfortably. For instance, when I say “please” and “thank you” while asking someone for help, they usually feel respected and are more willing to help me.

Sugerencia: 答案提到了向别人求助和去亲戚家两个场合，基本切题，但表达不够准确。“when I ask”应改为“when I asked”或使用一般情况“when I ask”；“relatives home”应为“relatives’ homes”；“gray to them”应为“greet them”。此外，题目询问的是多个场合，可以先概括回答，再列举场景，并使用“also”或“for example”衔接。

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially when asking for help or visiting someone’s home. For example, when I visit my relatives, I greet them warmly and use polite expressions. It is also important to be polite in public places, such as on public transport or in a restaurant.

Sugerencia: 答案有列举结构，也提供了两个具体做法，但词汇和语法错误较多。“plightlessness”应改为“politeness”；“grate”应改为“greet”；“other relatives home”应为“my relatives’ homes”；描述童年习惯时应统一使用过去时，如“should greet”或“would greet”；“say yes and thank you please and thank you”表达混乱，应改为“say please when asking for help and thank you afterwards”。

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness in several simple ways. When I visited my relatives, I greeted them and listened carefully when they spoke. Also, whenever I needed help, I said “please” first and “thank you” afterwards. These habits were taught to me by my parents.

× For example, they usually asked me to say please and thank you when I ask for others help.

✓ For example, they usually asked me to say please and thank you when I asked others for help.

整段是在回忆童年经历，因此从句中的动词也应使用过去时。将“ask”改为“asked”。

× For example, they usually asked me to say please and thank you when I ask for others help.

✓ For example, they usually asked me to say please and thank you when I asked others for help.

英语中通常说“ask someone for help”，而不是“ask for someone’s help”或“ask for others help”。这里应使用“ask others for help”的结构。

× Yes, of course implied is really important in our daily life.

✓ Yes, of course, being polite is really important in our daily life.

句子的主语结构不完整或不正确。“being polite”是动名词短语，可以充当主语，后面接“is”。此外，逗号后应加逗号以使表达更自然。

× For example, when you ask for other people's help, you said please and thank you they usually feel happier and more willing to help you.

✓ For example, when you ask other people for help, you say please and thank you, so they usually feel happier and more willing to help you.

这里描述的是普遍情况，应使用一般现在时。主语“you”后应使用“say”，不能使用过去式“said”。

× For example, when you ask for other people's help, you said please and thank you they usually feel happier and more willing to help you.

✓ For example, when you ask other people for help, you say please and thank you, so they usually feel happier and more willing to help you.

“you say please and thank you”和“they feel happier...”是两个完整的分句，不能直接连接。应使用“so”连接，表示因果关系。

× Well, you know, my parents taught me to be polite when I ask for others' help.

✓ Well, you know, my parents taught me to be polite when I asked others for help.

“taught”描述的是过去的经历，因此“ask”也应改为过去式“asked”。同时，“ask others for help”是更准确的表达结构。

× Well, you know, there are several ways to show my plightlessness. Firstly, when I went to other relatives home, I should grate them and show my respect.

✓ Well, you know, there are several ways to show my politeness. Firstly, when I went to my relatives' home, I greeted them and showed my respect.

“went”表示过去经历，因此后面的动作也应使用过去时。“should greet”表示应该做某事，不适合描述已经发生的经历，应改为“greeted”；并列动词“show”也应改为过去式“showed”。

× Besides that when I ask others for help, I should say yes and thank you please and thank you.

✓ Besides that, when I asked others for help, I said please and thank you.

这段内容是在描述童年时的行为，所以“ask”和“say”应使用过去式“asked”和“said”。“should”表示建议或义务，不适合这里的过去经历描述。