Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答抓住了父母示范和教导这一核心，但存在明显的时态、主谓一致和代词错误，例如“my parents teach”应改为“my parents taught”，“my parents is”应改为“my parents were”，“learn them”表达不自然。建议先直接回答，再用一个具体例子补充，并使用“because”或“so”连接原因和结果。注意控制在2—3句话，避免重复使用“my parents”。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they always set a good example by treating other people respectfully.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点和原因，但“plot/plate”应为“polite”，“when they make friends”中的主语不一致，“at first time”应改为“for the first time”，而且句子结构较混乱。建议用“Being polite is important because...”直接说明原因，并具体解释礼貌如何帮助建立良好关系。避免使用无意义的停顿词“uh”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it creates a positive first impression. When we meet someone for the first time, polite language can make them feel respected and help us build a better relationship.

Sugerencia: 回答列出了交朋友、第一次见面以及面对老师和成年人等场合，内容基本相关，但缺少完整的主句，且“at the first time”应为“for the first time”，“to teachers to adults”表达不自然。建议使用“ We should be polite when...”开头，并用“especially”突出重要场合，再补充一个具体行为，如使用礼貌用语或认真倾听。

Ejemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, make new friends, or speak to teachers and older people. In these situations, we should use polite expressions and listen carefully to show respect.

Sugerencia: 回答提到了说“please”和“thank you”，这是相关的具体内容，但“when was a child”应为“When I was a child”，“will remind”应改为“would remind”，“see Please”应为“say please”，“platinum”应为“politeness”，并且“others people child”表达不正确。建议用过去时完整描述自己的行为，并加入一个具体场景，例如向老师请求帮助或感谢别人。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I showed politeness by saying “please” when I asked for something and “thank you” when someone helped me. I also greeted my teachers respectfully and listened when adults were speaking.

× Actually I my parents teach me to say thank you and please to others and my parents is very polite so I just learn them.

✓ Actually, my parents taught me to say “thank you” and “please” to others. My parents are very polite, so I learned from them.

问题发生在描述童年经历时使用了现在时。由于事情发生在过去，teach 和 learn 应分别改为 taught 和 learned。另有主谓一致问题：parents 是复数，不能使用 is。learn them 的搭配也不正确，应说 learn from them，表示“向他们学习”。

× Actually I my parents teach me to say thank you and please to others and my parents is very polite so I just learn them.

✓ Actually, my parents taught me to say “thank you” and “please” to others. My parents are very polite, so I learned from them.

主语 my parents 是复数，因此 be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。复数主语和谓语动词必须保持一致。

× Yes, I think being plot is very important because when they make friends and uh talk with someone at first time plate is usually influence our relationship.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when we make friends and talk with someone for the first time, politeness usually influences our relationship.

plot 不是表示“礼貌的”正确形容词，应改为 polite。表示“礼貌”这一抽象概念时，应使用名词 politeness。

× Yes, I think being plot is very important because when they make friends and uh talk with someone at first time plate is usually influence our relationship.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when we make friends and talk with someone for the first time, politeness usually influences our relationship.

这里是在陈述一般事实，所以应使用一般现在时。主语 politeness 是不可数名词，属于第三人称单数，因此 influence 应改为 influences。

× Yes, I think being plot is very important because when they make friends and uh talk with someone at first time plate is usually influence our relationship.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when we make friends and talk with someone for the first time, politeness usually influences our relationship.

固定表达是 for the first time，而不是 at first time。表示“第一次”时，应使用介词 for，并在 time 前加 the。

× Is when we make friends and meet someone at the first time or to teachers to adults, we should be polite.

✓ We should be polite when we make friends, meet someone for the first time, or talk to teachers and adults.

原句缺少清晰的主语和完整的句子结构，Is when 开头不符合英语表达习惯。可以用 We should be polite 作主句，再用 when 引导具体场合。

× Is when we make friends and meet someone at the first time or to teachers to adults, we should be polite.

✓ We should be polite when we make friends, meet someone for the first time, or talk to teachers and adults.

列举多个场合时，应使用并列结构。teachers 和 adults 之间应使用 and；多个动作或场合之间可以使用 or 来表示“或者”。

× Is when we make friends and meet someone at the first time or to teachers to adults, we should be polite.

✓ We should be polite when we make friends, meet someone for the first time, or talk to teachers and adults.

表达“第一次见某人”时，应说 meet someone for the first time。表达“和老师及成年人交谈”时，应说 talk to teachers and adults，而不是使用 to teachers to adults 的错误结构。

× When was a child, my parents will remind me to see Please and thank you to adult and teachers.

✓ When I was a child, my parents would remind me to say “please” and “thank you” to adults and teachers.

When was a child 缺少主语 I，应改为 When I was a child。完整的从句需要包含主语和谓语。

× When was a child, my parents will remind me to see Please and thank you to adult and teachers.

✓ When I was a child, my parents would remind me to say “please” and “thank you” to adults and teachers.

问题描述的是童年时期的习惯，属于过去时间。will 是将来时形式，在这里应改为 would，表示过去经常发生的动作。也可以使用 reminded。

× When was a child, my parents will remind me to see Please and thank you to adult and teachers.

✓ When I was a child, my parents would remind me to say “please” and “thank you” to adults and teachers.

这里说的是成年人和老师这一类人，应该使用复数 adults。teachers 已经是正确的复数形式。

× And sometimes I also show my platinum to others people child.

✓ Sometimes I also showed my politeness to other children.

问题是在回答“小时候做了什么”，所以应使用过去时。show 应改为 showed。句首的 And 可以省略，使回答更加自然。

× And sometimes I also show my platinum to others people child.

✓ Sometimes I also showed my politeness to other children.

other 后面应接复数名词 children。原来的 others people child 同时存在代词、名词和单复数搭配错误。表示“其他孩子”时，正确表达是 other children。