Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct word order and small grammar points (e.g., use 'taught me to say', 'greet people', and punctuation). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: My mother taught me how to be polite when I was a child. For example, she always reminded me to say 'thank you' and to greet everyone with 'hello' when we met them, which helped me develop respectful habits.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use a clear reason and a linking word (because, so) to support your opinion. Use correct phrasing like 'shows that' and 'open-minded'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes conversations more pleasant. Being polite also shows you are open-minded and willing to listen to other people's views.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and then one or two specific examples of occasions. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g., 'on every occasion' or 'in all situations') and a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: We should be polite in all situations, especially at work, in school, and when meeting new people. For instance, polite behaviour at work helps build good relationships with colleagues.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and provide a clear list with linking words. Avoid incorrect words (use 'interrupt' instead of 'interlop'). Keep it within 2–3 short sentences and give a brief example of a situation.

Ejemplo: As a child, I always said 'hello', 'please' and 'thank you' to show politeness. I also tried not to interrupt others when they were speaking, especially during family dinners.

× I learned to be polite when I was a child because my mother taught me a lot to say thank you Please add hello to everyone that we talk to.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was a child because my mother taught me a lot, such as saying thank you and greeting everyone we speak to.

The original sentence uses infinitive and imperative forms incorrectly ('to say thank you Please add hello') and has awkward phrasing. Change to gerund phrases ('saying thank you', 'greeting everyone') to list examples of what the mother taught. Also add a comma and conjunction for clarity and correct 'talk to' to 'speak to'. Suggestion: Use parallel gerund forms when listing learned actions and connect clauses with punctuation and conjunctions.

× Of course yes, being polite is show that you are the politeness and you are the kind person person that can have opened mind to conversation.

✓ Of course. Being polite shows that you are polite and a kind person who is open to conversation.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'is show' should be 'shows' for present simple third-person; noun usage 'the politeness' is wrong—use adjective 'polite'; duplicated 'person person'; awkward phrase 'can have opened mind to conversation' should be 'who is open to conversation'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'being polite' -> 'shows'. Use adjective 'polite' and correct relative clause for fluent English. Suggestion: Use simple present 'shows' and concise adjective phrases ('polite', 'a kind person who is open to conversation').

× I think we should be polite in every occasions, every time that you say something to other people.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion and every time we say something to other people.

Errors: 'in every occasions' mixes preposition and number—use 'on every occasion' (singular) or 'on all occasions'; article/number mismatch. 'every time that you say' is wordy; use 'every time we say' for natural phrasing. Also change 'you' to 'we' to match speaker perspective. Suggestion: Use 'on every occasion' or 'on all occasions' and keep pronouns consistent.

× I say hello please thank you and I will not interlop when people are talking.

✓ I said hello, please, and thank you, and I did not interrupt when people were talking.

The question asks about what the student did as a child (past), so use past tense. Original uses present 'I say' and future 'I will not interlop'. Also 'interlop' is incorrect; correct verb is 'interrupt'. For past habitual actions, use simple past 'said' and 'did not interrupt'; when describing simultaneous past actions use 'were talking'. Suggestion: Use past tense for childhood actions and correct the verb to 'interrupt'.