Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 内容上直接回答了问题但表达不够自然且有语法和连贯性问题。改进建议： 1) 使用清晰的主题句直接回应（例如：I learned politeness mainly from my family and school）。 2) 修正语法（动词形式、冠词、连词）并把句子分成最多5句；用连接词（and, also, because）增强连贯性。 3) 提供具体例子（例如父母如何示范，老师做了什么）。 示例步骤：先给出主句，然后用一两个具体细节支持。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my family and from school. My mother always reminded me to say “please,” “thank you,” and “sorry,” and she praised me when I did. At school, my teachers taught us manners through role‑playing and reminders during class. Because of this constant guidance, politeness became a habit for me.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且有逻辑与词汇错误（例如“make no friends” 意思不清）。改进建议： 1) 开门见山表达观点（例如：Yes, I think politeness is very important）。 2) 用原因和具体例子支持观点（例如：it shows respect and helps build relationships）。 3) 使用适当的连接词（because, so, therefore）并避免矛盾或反向表述。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important in my country. It shows respect for other people and helps build good relationships. For example, saying “thank you” or holding the door for someone can create a friendly atmosphere.

Sugerencia: 回答比较笼统且有语法及表达不清问题。改进建议： 1) 先给出直接回答（例如：We should be polite in almost all situations）。 2) 列举具体场合并用连接词区分（for example, when...; especially...）。 3) 提供简短原因说明为何在这些场合要礼貌。

Ejemplo: We should be polite in almost all situations, especially in public places and formal meetings. For example, on public transport and at work meetings we should speak quietly and follow rules. Being polite in these situations shows respect and keeps things orderly.

Sugerencia: 回答重复且语法混乱，缺少明确结构和细节。改进建议： 1) 用过去时描述儿童时期的行为（例如：I used to say...）。 2) 清晰说明具体行为和结果（what you said, how parents responded）。 3) 使用连接词（because, so, and）并控制句子数量在五句以内。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I often said “thank you” and “sorry” to show politeness. My mother taught me that these words show respect, and she would praise or reward me when I used them. Because of this, saying polite words became a habit.

× When I was a child, my mom often told me say please thank you and sorry.

✓ When I was a child, my mom often told me to say 'please', 'thank you' and 'sorry'.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式（在此句中实际是缺少不定式to）。中文解释：动词 tell 后接动作时一般用不定式（tell somebody to do something），而不是直接跟动词原形。建议：使用“told me to say”来表示“告诉我去说”。另外，标点和引号用来分隔礼貌用语。

× What more in our school, my teacher also often taught me how to keep polite

✓ Moreover, at our school my teacher also often taught me how to be polite.

错误类型：连接词使用不当与句子结构问题。中文解释：短语“What more”不自然且语序混乱，应使用“Moreover”或“In addition”引出补充信息；“keep polite”不是常用搭配，应使用“be polite”。建议：使用“Moreover, at our school my teacher also often taught me how to be polite.”并调整介词位置。

× Sure, of course, I think in my country polite is very important which can help people show personal respect and make no friends.

✓ Sure, of course, I think in my country being polite is very important because it can help people show respect and make friends.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当及句子结构问题。中文解释：需要用动名词“being polite”表示“有礼貌”；“personal respect”不自然，改为“respect”；“make no friends”与语境相反，应为“make friends”；从句连接应使用because等连词而非which。建议：使用“being polite… because it can…”并修正词汇。

× To be honest, in China, we should keep polite everywhere especially special occasions like public area under meeting order, which can help people show personal respect.

✓ To be honest, in China we should be polite everywhere, especially on special occasions or in public places where order is required, which can help people show respect.

错误类型：介词使用不当。中文解释：短语“keep polite”应为“be polite”；“especially special occasions like public area under meeting order”结构混乱，需改为“especially on special occasions or in public places where order is required”；“public area”应为“public places”；“show personal respect”改为“show respect”。建议：调整介词和名词形式，使用清晰的从句修饰。

× When I was a child, I like to say thank you or sorry Since my mom often taught me say sorry and thank you can show personal respect was more my mum often reward me

✓ When I was a child, I liked to say 'thank you' or 'sorry'. Since my mom often taught me that saying 'sorry' and 'thank you' can show respect, she often rewarded me.

错误类型：现在时/过去时使用错误与句子结构混乱。中文解释：描述过去的习惯应使用过去时，所以“like”改为“liked”；句中缺少连词和从句结构，需用“that”引出宾语从句，并将动词形式改为动名词“saying”；“was more”不合适，应改为“she often rewarded me”。建议：统一使用过去时并补全连词和正确的动名词形式。