Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 発音や語彙の誤りと不自然な表現（例: "be proud" は文脈上不適切、"bought slightly meeting erodes" は意味不明）を修正してください。直接的なトピック文（例: "I learned politeness from my mother"）で始め、具体的な行動（挨拶の仕方、感謝を表す言葉、礼儀作法の練習）を追加し、文を短くして冗長さを避けると自然になります。接続語（"for example", "also"）を適切に用いて論理を明確にしてください。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite from my mother. For example, she taught me how to greet people properly and always say "thank you" and give compliments. She also made me practice table manners and respectful gestures, which helped me develop good habits.

Sugerencia: 語彙の誤り（"fright" や "frighteness" は誤用）を訂正し、意見を明確なトピック文で述べてから理由や具体例を示してください。接続表現（"however", "for example"）を使って対比を明確にし、文を2〜4文に収めて簡潔に話してください。

Ejemplo: I don't think being polite is always the most important thing. Politeness does help people get along, but sometimes being direct and honest is better. For example, at work you may need to make quick decisions and give clear instructions, so plain language can be more effective.

Sugerencia: 多くの語彙が誤用（"bright" や "called to rest" など）しており、文が途中で切れているため意味が伝わりにくいです。まず直接に答えるトピック文（"We should be polite on several occasions"）を言い、具体例（年長者との会話、面接、接客）を列挙し、それぞれ簡単な理由を付けてください。接続語（"for example", "such as", "because"）で文をつなぎ、最後にまとめで締めるとよいです。

Ejemplo: We should be polite on many occasions, especially when meeting elders, during job interviews, and in customer service situations. For example, being polite to elders shows respect and follows cultural norms. In interviews and customer interactions, politeness helps create a positive impression and good relationships.

Sugerencia: 表現は比較的伝わりますが、いくつか語彙の誤りと不自然なフレーズ（"helped her with shorts", "greeted her widely"）があります。より具体的に行動を述べ、接続詞で理由を繋げてください。また文は簡潔にし、詳細（どんな手伝いをしたか、どんな挨拶をしたか）を加えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed respect to my grandmother by helping her with household chores, such as cooking and cleaning. I always greeted her warmly at the door and spent time listening to her stories because I wanted her to feel appreciated.

× When I was a child my mother taught me to be proud by showing me how to greet people and say praise and thank you She also insisted I bought slightly meeting erodes, which helped me become more respectful and wear manners.

✓ When I was a child, my mother taught me to be polite by showing me how to greet people and say 'please' and 'thank you.' She also insisted I behave politely in meetings, which helped me become more respectful and develop good manners.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choices ('proud' should be 'polite'; 'say praise' should be 'say "please"'; 'wear manners' should be 'develop good manners'), missing punctuation, and ungrammatical phrases ('insisted I bought slightly meeting erodes'). These are sentence structure and vocabulary selection errors. Suggestion: use clear collocations (be polite, show respect, say please and thank you, develop good manners), add commas to set off introductory clause, and separate into two sentences for clarity.

× No, I don't think being fright is always very important.

✓ No, I don't think being polite is always very important.

The adjective 'fright' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'polite.' This is a vocabulary error affecting adjective choice. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective that matches the meaning (polite = showing good manners).

× Of course frighteness can help people get along and show respect but in some situations being direct and honest is more useful, for example, at work when quick decisions are needed.

✓ Of course, politeness can help people get along and show respect, but in some situations being direct and honest is more useful, for example at work when quick decisions are needed.

'Frighteness' is not a correct noun; the intended noun is 'politeness.' Also commas are needed after introductory and contrasting clauses. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'politeness' and insert commas for readability.

× We should be bright on many occasions because brightness shows respect and helps build good relationships.

✓ We should be polite on many occasions because politeness shows respect and helps build good relationships.

'Bright' and 'brightness' are incorrect words in this context; the correct adjective/noun pair is 'polite'/'politeness.' This is a lexical choice error. Suggestion: use words that collocate with social behavior (polite, politeness).

× For example, it's important to be called to rest when meeting elders during job interviews and in customer service sessions.

✓ For example, it's important to be respectful when meeting elders, during job interviews, and in customer service situations.

The phrase 'be called to rest' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Customer service sessions' is awkward; 'customer service situations' or 'when working in customer service' is better. This is sentence structure and word choice error. Suggestion: replace unclear idioms with direct expressions ('be respectful') and list occasions with parallel structure.

× Being respectful also makes

✓ Being respectful also helps create a positive atmosphere and builds trust.

The original sentence is incomplete. This is a sentence structure error (sentence fragment). Suggestion: finish the thought with a clear object and result ('helps create a positive atmosphere and builds trust').

× I helped her with shorts and always greeted her widely when she came home because I wanted to make her feel appreciated.

✓ I helped her with chores and always greeted her warmly when she came home because I wanted to make her feel appreciated.

'Shorts' is the wrong word; the intended noun is 'chores.' 'Greeted her widely' is unidiomatic; the correct adverb is 'warmly.' These are word choice and preposition/adverb usage issues. Suggestion: use the correct nouns and adverbs commonly used with 'greet' ('greet warmly').