Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add one specific example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief example using linking words. Avoid repetition and tense errors.

Ejemplo: I learned politeness from my parents who taught me to use polite phrases. For example, they always reminded me to say “thank you” when someone helped me and to call older people “Sir” or “Ma’am”, so I grew up using respectful language in daily life.

Sugerencia: Open with a clear opinion sentence, then give two concise supporting reasons linked with connectors. Correct phrasing and use specific examples instead of vague claims.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it demonstrates respect and helps build good relationships. For instance, polite colleagues are more likely to cooperate at work, and polite behavior can open doors when you meet new people.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, avoid double negatives, and give one or two concrete occasions with linking words. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: We should be polite in almost all situations, such as at work, at school, and when dealing with customer service. Even when you're upset, staying polite helps resolve conflicts more effectively.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary and phrasing, and include one vivid specific action as an example. Use linking words and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by using polite phrases and helping others. For example, I would always say “thank you” and offer my seat on the bus to pregnant women or elderly passengers.

× My parents raised me to say thank you to people when somebody have a nice gesture to me or to say sir, a madam to the elderly to ask questions politely instead of just doing things.

✓ My parents raised me to say thank you to people when somebody has a nice gesture toward me or to say sir or madam to the elderly and to ask questions politely instead of just doing things.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error: 'somebody have' should be 'somebody has' because somebody is singular (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). Also 'a madam' is incorrect; use 'madam' and coordinate items with 'or'. 'Gesture to me' is more naturally 'gesture toward me'. Finally, add 'and' before the second infinitive phrase and adjust prepositions for clarity (these are still within subject-verb agreement and sentence structure corrections). Suggested improvement: check singular subjects and use singular verbs, and connect coordinated items clearly.

× In my opinion, when a person is polite it shows a matter of respect and I think it's really good to have respect on a mutual base that you respect each other.

✓ In my opinion, when a person is polite it shows respect, and I think it is good to have mutual respect so that you respect each other.

The phrase 'shows a matter of respect' is awkward and 'have respect on a mutual base' is incorrect preposition and word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 11). Use simple present tense 'shows' and replace complex noun phrases with 'shows respect' and 'have mutual respect'. Suggestion: prefer concise noun phrases and correct prepositions: 'mutual respect' rather than 'respect on a mutual base'.

× And I think when you're polite, you can achieve a lot of things in your life.

✓ I think that when you are polite, you can achieve a lot in your life.

This sentence is largely correct in tense, but 'a lot of things' is wordy; 'a lot' or 'many things' is better. Also avoid starting with 'And' in formal speech. Suggestion: simplify objects after 'achieve' and use full form 'you are' for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 13).

× In my opinion we have to be polite on every time of the day you just show respect to each other and yeah I don't think there isn't an occasion that you must not be polite.

✓ In my opinion, we have to be polite at all times of the day; you should always show respect to each other, and I don't think there is any occasion when you must not be polite.

Multiple issues: 'on every time of the day' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'at all times' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). The clause 'I don't think there isn't' contains a double negative; correct is 'I don't think there is any occasion' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestion: avoid double negatives and use standard prepositional phrases like 'at all times' or 'all the time'.

× Even if you're angry, I think you have to treat each other with respect.

✓ Even if you are angry, I think you should treat others with respect.

'You're' is fine, but for formality use 'you are'. 'Treat each other' implies mutual action between two people; 'treat others' is more general. 'Have to' is strong obligation; 'should' is more natural for advice (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Suggestion: choose the verb modal that fits the level of obligation and adjust pronoun to match general advice.

× As a kid, I showed respect for the elderly by saying thank you, by asking things politely instead of demanding for them.

✓ As a kid, I showed respect for the elderly by saying thank you and by asking for things politely instead of demanding them.

'Demanding for them' is incorrect: 'demand' does not take 'for' when followed by an object (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Also use parallel structure 'by saying... and by asking...'. 'Demanding them' or 'demanding things from them' are correct alternatives. Suggestion: maintain parallel gerund phrases and choose correct verb-complement patterns ('ask for something', 'demand something').

× I think even like for example standing up for a pregnant late lady or an elderly and a bus, thick that's also a shone of respect and politeness.

✓ I think, for example, standing up for a pregnant woman or an elderly person on a bus is also a sign of respect and politeness.

This sentence has multiple errors: 'pregnant late lady' is incorrect word order and choice; likely meant 'pregnant lady' or 'pregnant woman' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'An elderly and a bus' is ungrammatical; correct is 'an elderly person on a bus'. 'Thick' should be 'I think' and 'shone' should be 'sign'. Overall sentence structure is broken and needs reordering and correct word choice. Suggestion: rewrite for clarity: 'standing up for a pregnant woman or an elderly person on a bus is a sign of respect.'