Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 句子不自然且有语义错误（“learned to be late”与上下文不符）。回答也超出或偏离题意，表达应更直接并提供具体细节。建议用一到两句说明学习礼貌的方式，随后用一两句举例说明具体行为或情境。注意时态和词语搭配，如 use "learned to be polite" 而非 "learned to be late"。

Ejemplo: When I was little, my parents taught me to be polite by correcting my behavior. For example, they told me to say "please" and "thank you" and praised me when I greeted adults respectfully.

Sugerencia: 表达混乱，有语法和指代错误（如“He actually”不明确），内容偏向个人惩罚而非礼貌的重要性。建议先给出明确立场，然后解释原因并举一两个具体例子。使用连词如 "because" 或 "for example" 来连接观点与细节。避免不相关的信息。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along and shows respect. For example, polite behavior can make a good impression during job interviews and improve relationships with neighbors.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且用词错误（如 "contrange" 不是英语单词），缺乏具体场景。建议先列出几个典型场合（e.g. public places, family gatherings, workplace），然后用一两句解释为什么需要在这些场合表现礼貌。使用连接词如 "for example" 或 "such as" 提高连贯性。

Ejemplo: We should be polite in many situations, such as in public places, at work, and at family gatherings. For example, in public you should speak quietly and queue properly to show consideration for others.

Sugerencia: 回答有多个语言错误和不自然的表达（如 "great job in advance", "ignore the drum"）。应使用第一人称过去式描述自己当时的具体行为，并给出示例（e.g. greeting, using polite phrases, offering help）。保持句子简短且连贯。

Ejemplo: As a child, I would greet elders politely by saying "Good morning" and offering to help with small tasks. I also always listened attentively and used polite phrases like "please" and "thank you."

× Hey, when I was little my mom spanked me because I was impolite. After that I learned to be late.

✓ Hey, when I was little my mom spanked me because I was impolite. After that I learned to be polite.

句中原文“learned to be late”显然是笔误或用词错误，與上下文（被打以後學會禮貌）不符。應該用“polite”表示“有禮貌”。此外时态“learned”用于过去经历是正确的，所以只需替换词汇即可。建议检查近义词和反义词，确认语义一致。 (简体中文)

× At least I won't get punished by my mom. He actually good manners matter a lot. It is the basic response between.

✓ At least I won't get punished by my mom. Actually, good manners matter a lot. They are the basis of mutual respect.

原句“He actually good manners matter a lot.”中有代词错误和句子结构混乱：用“He”指代不明且不符合句意，且缺少动词。应去掉“He”，改为“Actually, good manners matter a lot.” 或者用“they are …”进行后续说明。原句“It is the basic response between.” 语法和表达均不正确，意思可能是“这是相互尊重的基础”，因此改为“They are the basis of mutual respect.” 建议：注意代词的指代对象，确保主语与后文一致；检查句子是否缺动词或宾语。 (简体中文)

× Of course it's in public place. Remember that respecting others is also to contrange on myself.

✓ Of course it's in public places. Remember that respecting others also reflects on myself.

“in public place”中的名词单数/复数和冠词使用不当，通常说“in public places”或“in public”。因此改为“in public places”。第二句“respecting others is also to contrange on myself.” 中“contrange”不是正确英文单词，且结构不自然。根据可能意思，应为“尊重别人也會反映在我自己身上”，用“reflects on myself”更合适。建议：注意常用搭配（in public / in public places），并确认词汇拼写与搭配。 (简体中文)

× Of course it's in public place. Remember that respecting others is also to contrange on myself.

✓ Of course it's in public places. Remember that respecting others also reflects on me.

关于代词“myself”在原句中不自然。通常在一般陈述中使用宾格“me”而非反身代词“myself”，除非有反身强调需要。将“myself”改为“me”可以使句子更自然：“respects others also reflects on me.” 建议：学习反身代词和宾格代词的使用场景，避免滥用“myself”。 (简体中文)

× When meeting elders or acquaintance, you should great job in advance and must not pretend not to see them or ignore the drum.

✓ When meeting elders or acquaintances, you should greet them in advance and must not pretend not to see them or ignore them.

原句“When meeting elders or acquaintance”中“acquaintance”应为复数“acquaintances”且缺冠词或复数形式。动词短语“great job”是错误拼写，應为“greet”表示“打招呼”，而“job”不合适。最后“ignore the drum”是错误用法，应为“ignore them”（忽视他们）。因此改为“When meeting elders or acquaintances, you should greet them in advance and must not pretend not to see them or ignore them.” 建议：注意动词拼写（greet vs great），名词单复数一致，并避免使用不相关的名词（drum）。 (简体中文)