Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答需更直接、有条理，并避免语法错误与含糊词。先用一句话概括，然后用一两句具体说明来自谁、用什么方式教（例如父母示范、纠正、讲道理或通过榜样）。尽量不要使用停顿词（uh），把句子控制在最多5句内。

Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. They often corrected my behaviour, showed good manners themselves and reminded me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’. For example, my mother always explained why politeness matters, and my father led by example at dinner and when guests visited.

Sugerencia: 回答要更具体并使用连贯的连接词。先明确观点，然后给出两到三个具体原因，用 because/so/therefore 等词连接句子，避免模糊表达（例如 “the other hand we can know each other”）。保持句子简洁自然，不超过5句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build and maintain relationships. Being polite also creates a positive first impression, so people are more likely to trust you. In the long run, polite behaviour makes communication smoother and avoids unnecessary conflicts.

Sugerencia: 回答需更清晰地列举具体场合并使用适当词汇。先给出概括（e.g. in public and at home），然后用连接词举例说明（for example/in school/at work/with relatives）。纠正词汇错误（如“priests”应为“please”或“please and thank you”）。控制在最多5句内。

Ejemplo: We should be polite in many situations, especially in public places and at home. For example, at school or work we should say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ to teachers and colleagues. At family gatherings we should show respect to older relatives and listen patiently when they speak.

Sugerencia: 回答已经包含具体行为，但需要更自然的表达与更流畅的语法。用一两句总结常做的礼貌行为，随后用连接词给出具体例子。避免重复并修正语法（例如‘I will I raise my hands’应为‘I would raise my hand’）。保持句子简短清晰。

Ejemplo: As a child I showed politeness by greeting people and saying ‘thank you’ often. For example, I would let others start eating first at family meals, and in class I always raised my hand to ask questions instead of interrupting.

× When I was young, my family to teach me, my family told me, uh, many polite manners to everyone, like to my family, to my friends, to my teachers. They usually say plant is only.

✓ When I was young, my family taught me many polite manners for everyone, such as how to behave with my family, my friends, and my teachers. They usually said, "Be polite."

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句存在词序混乱、重复以及不完整的从句（例如“my family to teach me”缺少谓语），并且“plant is only”不合语义，可能是听写或表达错误。建议：使用完整的过去时句子结构（主语+过去式谓语+宾语），避免重复信息，必要时将列举项并列成短语；把不明短语改为合理的表达，例如“Be polite”。（简体中文）

× It can connect relationship with somebody and we can make good impressions to everyone.

✓ It can help build relationships with others, and we can make a good impression on everyone.

问题类型：介词使用不当（11）。原句中“connect relationship with somebody”搭配不当，正确表达为“build relationships with someone”；“make good impressions to everyone”应使用介词“on”并使用单数“impression”搭配泛指。建议：常见搭配要记牢（build relationships, make an impression on）。（简体中文）

× The other hand we can know each other

✓ On the other hand, we can get to know each other.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句缺少介词短语“On the other hand”中的介词和逗号，并且动词短语应为“get to know”表示相互了解。建议：在转折短语前加“On”并使用惯用表达“get to know”。（简体中文）

× Many occasions can show my pride to someone like learning in a school we usually use priests thank you and when we in a family, we also respect my family.

✓ Many occasions can show respect to someone. For example, at school we usually say "please" and "thank you", and at home we also respect our family.

问题类型：介词和词汇使用不当（11）。原句中“show my pride to someone”用词不当，应该是“show respect to someone”；“learning in a school”表达冗长，改为“at school”；“use priests thank you”可能是误听，应为“say please and thank you”；“when we in a family”缺少动词且人称不一致。建议：使用常见搭配（show respect to, at school, say please and thank you），保持人称一致。解释以简体中文提供。

× Yes, I usually say hi, hello, thank you to strangers or even my family. And we sometimes let someone eat first and if we have questions, I will I raise my hands to ask.

✓ Yes, I usually said "hi", "hello", and "thank you" to strangers and even to my family. We sometimes let someone eat first, and if we had questions, I would raise my hand to ask.

问题类型：过去时问题（5）。题目问及过去（as a child），回答应使用过去时。原句使用现在时（usually say）与过去情境不一致；“I will I raise my hands”有重复并且人称、时态不当；“raise my hands”通常用单数“hand”表示举手。建议：把动词改为过去式（said, let, had），条件句使用过去式或过去将来（would），并删除重复词。（简体中文）

× They usually say plant is only.

✓ They usually said, "Be polite."

问题类型：第三人称单数问题（2）与句子结构问题（26）。在描述过去习惯应使用过去式“said”而非现在时“say”；原句“plant is only”显然为错误短语，应改为合适的祈使或引用句“Be polite”。建议：使用正确时态并引用确切短语。（简体中文）