Part 1
Examinador
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Candidato
As a Chinese I was told by my parents to be polite when I went out.
Examinador
Do you think being polite is very important?
Candidato
I think it's essential to be polite training because if you are rupee, people will not be close to you and if it damaged your relationship with other people and also your social image that's it.
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并提供具体细节,句子结构需更自然。可以先用主题句回答,然后补充说明比如父母如何教(通过示范、规矩或提醒),以及你当时的感受或具体情境。注意避免文化身份陈述代替具体行为描述,并调整语法(冠词、时态、介词)。
Ejemplo: I learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and demonstrated respectful behavior when guests visited. They also corrected me gently when I forgot, which helped me form good habits.
Do you think being polite is very important?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更清晰有逻辑,使用恰当词汇并避免发音或拼写错误(如"rupee"应为"rude")。先用一句总结性观点,然后用两到三个具体原因支持,使用连词连接句子,控制在不超过五句内。注意语法:时态一致,句子完整。
Ejemplo: I believe being polite is very important. If you are rude, people are less likely to want to spend time with you, which can harm your personal relationships and professional reputation. Therefore, polite behavior helps you build trust and maintain a positive social image.
× As a Chinese I was told by my parents to be polite when I went out.
✓ As a Chinese person, I was told by my parents to be polite when I went out.
句中缺少名词搭配“Chinese person”。单独使用“As a Chinese”在口语中有时可接受,但更标准的是“As a Chinese person”或“As a Chinese child”。建议在“Chinese”后加名词以使表达完整。
× I think it's essential to be polite training because if you are rupee, people will not be close to you and if it damaged your relationship with other people and also your social image that's it.
✓ I think polite behaviour is essential because if you are rude, people will not be close to you, and it can damage your relationships with other people and your social image.
原句结构混乱、词汇错误和时态/搭配问题: - “it's essential to be polite training” 是不正确的搭配,应该用名词短语如“polite behaviour”或不定式“to be polite”。 - “rupee” 写错,应为“rude”。 - “if it damaged your relationship” 时态和代词不当,应为“it can damage your relationships”或“it will damage your relationships”。 - 句子过长缺少标点与连接词,导致逻辑不清。建议使用清晰的名词短语并保持时态一致;将句子拆分或用逗号和连词连接,使意思连贯。