Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. possessives, verb forms) and avoid unclear phrases like “talented teaser.” Keep to 1–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite from my mother. She was very kind and always corrected my manners gently, for example reminding me to say “please” and “thank you,” so I picked up polite habits early.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct opinion first, then one or two reasons with linking words. Avoid slang and vague expressions like “rubbish people.” Correct grammar (tenses and pronouns) and keep sentences concise. Show specific examples or brief explanation of when politeness matters.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is usually important because it helps build good relationships. However, if someone is abusive or insulting my family, I might respond firmly rather than politely to protect myself.

× I learned to be polite as a child because of my mother because my mother is very kind and innocent person which also very talented teaser so she made me.

✓ I learned to be polite as a child because of my mother. My mother is a very kind and gentle person and also very good at teasing, so she raised me that way.

This sentence has multiple problems: missing articles ('a very kind and innocent person' needs 'a'), incorrect adjective choice ('innocent' is odd for describing a polite influence; 'gentle' fits better), awkward relative clause ('which also very talented teaser' is ungrammatical) and run-on sentence structure. Suggestions: split into two sentences for clarity, use correct article before singular countable nouns, choose appropriate adjectives, and form relative clauses correctly (e.g., 'and she was also good at teasing' or 'and also liked to tease me'). Grammar problem type ID:13

× I think it depends on how the people you were talking to because when all rubbish people toxic about me or my parents I didn't talk politely with them.

✓ I think it depends on the people you are talking to; when rude or toxic people talk about me or my parents, I do not speak politely to them.

Errors include wrong tense and aspect ('you were talking to' conflicts with general statement; use present 'you are talking to'), incorrect word order and choice ('all rubbish people toxic' is ungrammatical; use 'rude or toxic people'), missing articles and prepositions, and inconsistent verb forms ('I didn't talk politely with them' should be 'I do not speak politely to them' for a general habit). Suggestions: use appropriate adjectives ('rude'/'toxic'), correct present simple for general truths, and correct preposition ('speak to' rather than 'talk with' is acceptable but keep consistency). Grammar problem type ID:6

× So it depends on how the people you are talk.

✓ So it depends on who you are talking to.

This sentence has incorrect word order and an incorrect pronoun ('how the people you are talk' is ungrammatical). Use 'who' as the object of 'talking to' and correct verb form 'are talking'. Also place the preposition 'to' after 'talking'. Suggestions: use 'who you are talking to' for natural English and ensure subject-verb-object order is correct. Grammar problem type ID:26