Part 1
Examinador
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Candidato
Oh that's good question. I not to be polite from my parents because my parents are really gentle person. For example, my parents often require me say hello when the guests come in my home.
Examinador
Do you think being polite is very important?
Candidato
Yes, definitely because everyone likes the person who to be polite. For me, I really like this person. For example my best friends are very gentle person and they always say thanks to everyone.
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 回答要直接回应问题并用正确的语法表达原因和举例。注意主谓一致、时态和代词用法,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。回答控制在最多5句内,先给主题句(如何学会礼貌),然后用一两句具体细节支持(例如父母的行为、具体场景和频率)。避免重复和语法错误。
Ejemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They were very gentle and taught me good manners by example, so I often followed them. For instance, they always asked me to greet guests when someone came to our home, and they reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” in daily life.
Do you think being polite is very important?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答(是/不是),然后给理由并用具体例子支持。修正语法错误(如不定式用法、名词单复数和冠词),并用连接词(because, for example, also)使表达更流畅。尽量提供一个清晰的观点和一两个具体例子或结果,控制在最多5句。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along and shows respect. For example, my best friends are very polite and they always say “thank you,” which makes others feel appreciated. As a result, they have strong relationships and people enjoy being around them.
× Oh that's good question.
✓ Oh, that's a good question.
原句缺少冠词“a”。在英语中,名词前通常需要冠词或其他限定词,尤其是可数单数名词“question”。建议记住可数单数名词通常要用a/an或the。
× I not to be polite from my parents because my parents are really gentle person.
✓ I learned to be polite from my parents because my parents are really gentle people.
原句有多个问题:1) 缺少动词,应该用“learned”表示过去学会;2) 表达来源应使用“learned from”;3) “person”用于复数父母不正确,需用复数“people”;4) 对于过去事实用过去时。建议:主语+过去时动词+from+来源;复数名词要用复数形式。
× For example, my parents often require me say hello when the guests come in my home.
✓ For example, my parents often require me to say hello when guests come into my home.
原句问题:1) 动词require后需要不定式“to say”;2) “the guests”在泛指来访者时可去掉定冠词或使用“guests”更自然;3) 介词搭配应为“come into my home”或更常用“come to my house/home”。建议:学习动词搭配(require + to do),以及定冠词的使用和常见介词短语。
× Yes, definitely because everyone likes the person who to be polite.
✓ Yes, definitely, because everyone likes people who are polite.
原句问题:1) “the person who to be polite”结构不正确,不定式不能放在关系从句中;2) “everyone likes people who are polite”更自然,关系从句需用完整谓语“who are polite”。建议:关系从句中使用完整谓语,避免直接用不定式。
× For me, I really like this person.
✓ For me, I really like polite people.
原句模糊且与上下文不一致。学生想表达喜欢有礼貌的人,使用复数“polite people”更合适。建议:根据语境选择恰当的名词形式和形容词搭配。
× For example my best friends are very gentle person and they always say thanks to everyone.
✓ For example, my best friends are very gentle people and they always say thank you to everyone.
原句问题:1) “best friends”为复数,不能接单数“person”,应为“people”;2) 英语中表达“说谢谢”通常用短语“say thank you”而不是“say thanks to”;3) 句首需逗号分隔。建议:注意名词单复数一致及固定表达的用法。