Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, tense and article use), make the response more concise and natural, and add one specific example to support your statement. Use a clear topic sentence followed by a supporting detail connected with a linking word.

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite as a child because I grew up in an Asian family with strict parents. For example, my parents taught me to greet older relatives first and to use respectful language at family gatherings, so these habits became natural to me over time.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitation sounds and unclear references, use present-tense general statements rather than vague phrases like "ancient culture," and give a clear reason with an example. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then add a linked explanation and a brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it reflects respect and good manners. For instance, when children are polite to their elders, it shows that their parents taught them proper behavior and helps maintain harmony in the family.

× I grew up in Asian culture where I have a strict parents so they teaches children to be polite especially to older people.

✓ I grew up in an Asian culture where I had strict parents, so they taught children to be polite, especially to older people.

Errors: 'a strict parents' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'strict parents' or 'a strict parent'. Tense inconsistency: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'grew up'. Subject-verb agreement: 'they teaches' uses singular verb with plural subject; correct past tense is 'they taught'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense when describing childhood and ensure articles match noun number; use past form 'had' and 'taught'.

× Then that was the time I learned how to be polite to people.

✓ Then that was the time I learned how to be polite to people.

Sentence is grammatically correct. It uses past tense appropriately to describe a past event. No change needed.

× In ancient culture, yes, being polite is very important because it can reflect umm, with your families, umm, behavior.

✓ In our culture, yes, being polite is very important because it can reflect your family's behavior.

'Ancient culture' is likely wrong word choice; use 'our culture' or 'my culture'. 'Reflect with your families, behavior' is ungrammatical ordering and pluralization. Correct: 'reflect your family's behavior' (singular possessive if referring to one's family). Suggestion: choose accurate noun ('culture' not 'ancient') and use possessive form to show whose behavior is reflected, keep word order natural: 'reflect your family's behavior'.

× And if you're being polite to others, it means that your parents, they done a good job umm, teaching you how to be polite.

✓ And if you're being polite to others, it means that your parents did a good job teaching you how to be polite.

Errors: redundant subject 'your parents, they' should be just 'your parents'. 'Done' is incorrect past form here; use 'did' to form past simple ('did a good job'). Also remove filler 'umm' and comma clutter. Suggestion: use simple past 'did' and avoid redundant pronouns; write 'your parents did a good job teaching you how to be polite'.