Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答总体意思清楚，但有多处发音或用词错误和句子不连贯，使表述不够自然。改进建议： 1) 简化句子结构，先给出主题句（来源于父母），然后用一到两句具体细节支持（举例父母怎样提醒、言传身教）。 2) 注意常用礼貌用语的表达（say “please”, “thank you”, “hello”），避免重复或词序混乱。 3) 使用连接词（for example, also, because）让话语更连贯。练习时可多读短句并纠正发音与停顿。

Ejemplo: My parents taught me to be polite. For example, they always reminded me to say “please”, “hello” and “thank you”. They also set a good example by being polite themselves, so I learned manners naturally.

Sugerencia: 回答观点明确但存在发音与词汇错误（如把 “polite” 说成 “blind/played”），语法和连贯性也需加强。改进建议： 1) 开头直接给出明确立场（Yes/Absolutely）并简洁说明原因（shows respect, builds relationships）。 2) 用一两个具体说明或例子支持观点，并用连接词（because, for example, especially）提高连贯性。 3) 注意词汇发音与选择，避免把关键词说错；练习可通过慢读句子并录音回听纠正。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. Being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, in my country politeness is highly valued, especially when meeting new people.

× They also reminded me to say please and hello and the.

✓ They also reminded me to say ‘please’, ‘hello’ and ‘thank you’.

原句在列举礼貌用语时使用了错误的冠词“the”，且遗漏了“thank you”而写成不完整的句子。应使用逗号分隔并写出完整短语。建议记住固定短语（please, hello, thank you）不需要冠词，列举时用逗号或 and 连接。

× Thank you also that set a good relay a good example by being polite themselves so it's second to me for nature.

✓ My parents also set a good example by being polite themselves, so it felt natural to me.

原句结构混乱，有多处词汇错误（如 relay、second to me for nature）和冗余，导致意思不清。改为“My parents also set a good example...” 更符合英语表达。建议学习常用表达“set a good example”和“felt natural to me”，并注意主语一致与句子逻辑。

× Absolutely, being blind is very important uh, it shows respect for others and helps build a good relationship.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is very important; it shows respect for others and helps build good relationships.

原句把“polite”错写为“blind”，属于词汇使用错误（形容词错误），同时“a good relationship”在泛指人际关系时通常用复数或无冠词。建议核对关键词拼写，注意复数用法“relationships”或使用不可数/泛指结构。

× Are also in uh, in our country being played is very is high valued, especially when meeting new people.

✓ Also in our country, being polite is highly valued, especially when meeting new people.

原句有多处错误：多余的词“Are”、把“polite”误写为“played”、和不正确的词序“is very is high valued”。应为“being polite is highly valued”。建议注意介词短语位置（Also in our country, ...）和副词短语“highly valued”的正确形式。