Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence, add one specific example and use linking words. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., 'I usually showed' or 'I used to show', 'they taught me') and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Keep responses to no more than five sentences and structure them: topic sentence + supporting detail + brief example.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I learned politeness mainly from my parents. They taught me to greet everyone and say 'thank you' even when people were busy, so I learned to be considerate. For example, if my neighbor was carrying heavy bags, I would offer help and say hello. This habit helped me build good relationships with others.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear, direct topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'courtesy' or 'respectful') and correct small grammar issues ('the basics of good manners'). Limit to three to four sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and makes conversations more pleasant. For instance, using polite phrases like 'please' and 'thank you' can ease misunderstandings and build trust. Overall, good manners are fundamental to getting along with others.

× Uh, when I was a little kid, I usually show my politeness to others by saying hello to the other person I met.

✓ Uh, when I was a little kid, I usually showed my politeness to others by saying hello to the other person I met.

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