Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 在回答中要更明确、连贯地表达成长经历和具体做法。避免含糊不清的词语（例如“trick other people plight”），用清晰的句子说明是谁教的、如何教的以及你当时的感受或具体例子。可以把回答控制在3-4句内，使用连接词（比如“because”、“so”）使逻辑更顺畅。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, my parents taught me to be polite by setting a good example. For instance, my mother always insisted that I greet neighbors and say thank you after receiving help, so I learned to say hello and show respect naturally.

Sugerencia: 在阐述重要性时要给出明确理由和具体结果。避免使用不自然或模糊的短语（例如“It's a route that you need to get”）。用1个主题句表明观点，接着用1-2句具体原因或例子支持，并使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build good relationships. For example, when I speak politely to classmates, they are more willing to cooperate with me, so communication becomes easier.

× Where was a child? Uh, my parents also told me that to trick other people plight.

✓ When I was a child, my parents also taught me not to offend other people.

语句结构混乱：原句“Where was a child?” 与上下文不符，正确应该是“When I was a child”（当我还是个孩子时）。“told me that to trick other people plight” 不合语法且意思模糊，猜测想表达“不要让别人为难/冒犯别人”。同时用 teach/tell 的搭配更自然，且将“trick”改为“not to offend”或类似表达。建议：先明确时间状语（When I was a child），主句用简单过去（taught），宾语从句用不定式或that从句表达具体内容。

× Umm, my mom's really straight at that point, like umm, when I see some people, I know that them I always need to say hi or hello to them.

✓ My mom was very strict about that. When I saw some people, I knew that I always needed to say hi or hello to them.

形容词/副词及代词使用错误：原句“my mom's really straight” 中“straight”用错，正确应为“strict”（严格的）。时态与指代混乱：上下文回忆过去，应使用过去时（was, saw, knew, needed）。句子“that them I always need to say” 中代词和语序错误，应为“that I always needed to say... to them”。建议：使用正确形容词（strict），保持时态一致（过去回忆用过去时），注意代词位置和动词时态一致。

× Yes, I say it's quite important.

✓ Yes, I think it's quite important.

现在时及动词选择不当：原句“I say it's quite important” 在口语中可理解但不自然，常用动词为“think”表达意见。建议：用“think”或“believe”来表达看法，保持现在时态正确使用（I think / It's important）。

× It's a route that you need to get.

✓ It's a quality that you need to have.

语句结构和用词错误：“route that you need to get” 用词不当且结构不清，中文意图应为“这是你需要具备的品质”。用“quality”或“skill”更合适，动词用“have”或“develop”。建议：用语义明确的名词搭配合适的动词（have/develop）。

× Be a polite person, also show your kindness and that made everyone want to get closer with you and to know you.

✓ Being a polite person and showing kindness makes people want to get closer to you and know you.

连词使用与时态一致性问题：原句出现祈使句“Be a polite person”与过去式“that made”混用，结构不统一。应将整句改为现在一般时的陈述句，使用动名词短语并保持主谓一致（showing kindness makes）。此外搭配动词短语应为 “get closer to someone” 而不是 “get closer with you”。建议：统一句子结构（如用主语+动词），保持时态一致，并注意固定搭配“get closer to”。