Politeness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 句子表达有意义但存在语法、用词和连贯性问题。建议： 1) 修正语法错误和词汇：将“applied present”改为“behave/manner”或“be polite”；将“set a good examples”改为“set a good example”。 2) 精简并直接回答主问题，用主题句开始，然后用1-2个具体细节支持。比如说明父母如何提醒（例：示范、纠正或通过故事教导）。 3) 使用连接词使句子更流畅，如“for example”, “they would”, “also”。 4) 控制长度在3-4句内，避免重复和犹豫。

Ejemplo: I learned to be polite from my parents. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they modelled polite behaviour themselves. For example, my mother would correct me gently when I forgot to say thanks, and my father always greeted our neighbours politely, which I copied.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，但句子不够流畅且有许多犹豫词与重复。建议： 1) 避免填充词（uh, um）和重复表达，使用更简洁的句子结构。 2) 给出1-2个具体理由或例子说明为什么重要，例如“建立良好人际关系”或“在工作场合受尊重”。 3) 使用连接词如“because”, “so”, “for example”来组织观点。 4) 控制在2-3句内，逻辑清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, polite behaviour makes people more willing to cooperate at work, and it creates a friendly atmosphere in social situations.

× Mostly I learned to be applied present from my parents.

✓ Mostly I learned good manners from my parents.

错误类型（对应列表：27/26）：原句中短语“to be applied present”是不正确的动词/词组搭配，应该使用表示“学会礼貌”更自然的表达“learned good manners”。建议：用常见的搭配如“learned good manners / learned to be polite / was taught to be polite”。在本句情境下保留过去时“learned”即可。

× They always reminded me to say thanks and please, and they also set a good examples for me to follow.

✓ They always reminded me to say “thank you” and “please,” and they also set a good example for me to follow.

错误类型（对应列表：1/22/27）：1) “say thanks and please” 中更自然的短语是“say ‘thank you’ and ‘please’”。2) “set a good examples” 中“examples”为复数但前有不定冠词“a”，应为单数“example”。3) 动词与主语一致无问题，但名词与冠词不匹配。建议：使用正确的短语和单数形式，即“a good example”。

× And when we show the respect for others, we will have uh, another people think we will have, uh, highly value and uh, will be, will like it.

✓ When we show respect for others, other people will think highly of us and like us.

错误类型（对应列表：11/12/20/26/27）：问题包括：1) 冠词滥用，“the respect”应为不可数名词“respect”或不加冠词。2) “another people”是错误的复数/单数搭配，应为“other people”。3) 语序和搭配问题：“think we will have, highly value”不符合英语习惯，正确表达是“think highly of us”。4) 句中大量语气词“uh”和重复助动词“will be, will like it”造成结构混乱。建议：删除多余的“the”和“uh”，使用固定搭配“think highly of someone”和“like us”。