Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否做过纸艺，再解释原因。避免使用“terrible handmaker”这类不自然表达，可说“I'm not very good at making things by hand”。注意主谓一致，例如“I have made”，并区分纸艺和塑料手工；回答控制在两到三句，删除重复的“terrible”和“difficult”。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't really made any crafts with paper because I'm not very good at making things by hand. I have made a model rocket out of plastic, though, and I enjoyed putting it together.

Sugerencia: 内容切题，也提供了具体活动和回忆。重点改进名词和语法：用“my classmates”而不是“my classmate”，并删去“the some some story”等重复、不完整表达。可以把“写故事”和“画漫画”表达得更清楚，并使用自然的连接词串联细节。

Ejemplo: As a child, I loved writing funny stories and drawing little comics on paper. It was quite popular at my school, so I often shared them with my classmates. We would read each other's work and have a good laugh.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，理由也清楚。注意使用复数“messages”，并将不自然的“slide a screen”改为“tap on my phone”或“type on my phone”。“handwriting letters”应改为“handwritten letters”；可以减少重复的“First/Second”，让表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: No, I don't write physical letters anymore. It's much more convenient to send messages on social media, and they arrive instantly. Also, handwritten letters are less common these days, so most people use them only for special occasions.

Sugerencia: 目前的回答没有充分回应“是否有人保留手写信”，而是主要解释人们为何不常写信。先直接说明看法，并补充有人会因纪念意义而保存信件。注意主谓一致（“people prefer”）、词形（“handwritten letters”）和动词表达（“takes more time”）；避免重复和“waste your time extremely”这类不自然说法。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they are from someone close to them. They may be meaningful reminders of a relationship or an important time in their lives. However, most people communicate through messages now, so fewer letters are written.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，理由也切题。把“quickly recall anything I want to remember”改成“quickly jot down anything I need to remember”，因为这里想表达的是“记下来”而非“回想起来”。并列列举设备时可加上“or”，也可以补充一个简短例子，让细节更具体。

Ejemplo: I don't usually carry paper and pens when I go out because they're a little inconvenient to carry around. Instead, I use my phone to jot down reminders or make a quick shopping list. It's always with me, so it's more practical.

× No, I haven't since I am a terrible handmaker, this is difficult for me to deal with the terrible the difficult and complex handmaking.

✓ No, I haven't, because I am terrible at making things by hand. Difficult and complex crafts are hard for me to make.

句子结构错误（ID 26）。原句用逗号连接多个完整意思，且“deal with the terrible the difficult and complex handmaking”结构混乱。建议把不同意思拆成完整句，并使用清楚的主谓结构表达原因。

× But I still has the other craft like the rocket used by the plastic. I have made it before.

✓ But I still have other crafts, like a rocket made of plastic. I have made one before.

主谓一致错误（ID 27）。主语是“I”，应使用“have”，不能使用“has”。建议检查主语是第一、第二还是第三人称，再选择对应的动词形式。

× But I still has the other craft like the rocket used by the plastic. I have made it before.

✓ But I still have other crafts, like a rocket made of plastic. I have made one before.

单复数错误（ID 1）。这里是在泛指其他手工制品，因此可数名词“craft”应使用复数“crafts”。建议留意可数名词前的限定词，并根据表达的数量使用单数或复数。

× But I still has the other craft like the rocket used by the plastic. I have made it before.

✓ But I still have other crafts, like a rocket made of plastic. I have made one before.

介词使用错误（ID 11）。“由塑料制成”应说“made of plastic”，不能说“used by the plastic”。建议描述材料时使用“made of + 材料”。

× I used to enjoy writing short funny stories on paper when I was a child. It was quite popular at school at that time, so I often wrote little comics and the some some story and shared them with my classmate.

✓ I used to enjoy writing short funny stories on paper when I was a child. It was quite popular at school at that time, so I often wrote little comics and some stories and shared them with my classmates.

冠词错误（ID 22）。“some”前通常不加定冠词“the”，所以应删除“the”。此外，“some”后接可数名词复数，应说“some stories”。建议避免在“some”前误加“the”，并检查名词单复数。

× I used to enjoy writing short funny stories on paper when I was a child. It was quite popular at school at that time, so I often wrote little comics and the some some story and shared them with my classmate.

✓ I used to enjoy writing short funny stories on paper when I was a child. It was quite popular at school at that time, so I often wrote little comics and some stories and shared them with my classmates.

单复数错误（ID 1）。“some”表示一些，后面应接可数名词复数“stories”；如果分享给不止一位同学，应使用“classmates”。建议检查数量词后名词的形式。

× No, I don't. First, it's much more convenient to send message via social media. I can simply slide a screen and type with my fingers and the message is delivered instantly. Second, handwriting letters are much less common now, so people, uh, rarely use them to keep in touch.

✓ No, I don't. First, it's much more convenient to send a message via social media. I can simply slide a screen and type with my fingers, and the message is delivered instantly. Second, handwritten letters are much less common now, so people rarely use them to keep in touch.

冠词错误（ID 22）。“message”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词，因此应说“a message”。建议使用单数可数名词时检查前面是否有冠词或其他限定词。

× No, I don't. First, it's much more convenient to send message via social media. I can simply slide a screen and type with my fingers and the message is delivered instantly. Second, handwriting letters are much less common now, so people, uh, rarely use them to keep in touch.

✓ No, I don't. First, it's much more convenient to send a message via social media. I can simply slide a screen and type with my fingers, and the message is delivered instantly. Second, handwritten letters are much less common now, so people rarely use them to keep in touch.

过去分词形式错误（ID 9）。“handwriting”表示正在写信的动作；这里需要用过去分词“handwritten”作形容词，表示“手写的信”。建议表达被完成或具有某种结果的动作时，检查是否应使用过去分词。

× Well, I don't think so. And here for some reason, firstly is that people prefers to send messages via social media on the phone to the handwriting letters.

✓ Well, I don't think so. The first reason is that people prefer sending messages via social media on their phones to writing letters by hand.

句子结构错误（ID 26）。“firstly is that”缺少明确的主语，且“to the handwriting letters”结构不完整。建议使用“The first reason is that...”引出理由，并让比较结构两边保持一致，例如“sending ... to writing ...”。

× Well, I don't think so. And here for some reason, firstly is that people prefers to send messages via social media on the phone to the handwriting letters.

✓ Well, I don't think so. The first reason is that people prefer sending messages via social media on their phones to writing letters by hand.

主谓一致错误（ID 27）。“people”是复数主语，动词应使用“prefer”，不能使用“prefers”。建议看到“people”时将其视为复数，并使用动词原形。

× And the second is that handwritingwriting cost uh more time than sending a message and you will waste waste your time extremely

✓ The second reason is that writing by hand costs more time than sending a message, and you will waste a lot of time.

主谓一致错误（ID 27）。“writing by hand”作主语时是单数概念，因此一般现在时的动词应使用“costs”，而不是“cost”。建议检查动名词短语作主语时的动词形式，通常按单数处理。