Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提到了过去和现在的纸艺活动，但有几处表达不自然。花的名称通常写作“lilies”；应说“make birthday cards for my friends”，而不是“to my friends”。“my sincerely blessing”语法错误，可改为“my heartfelt wishes”或“my sincere good wishes”。建议用一个具体细节说明你如何制作卡片。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I used to make paper flowers, especially lilies, and these days I enjoy making birthday cards for my friends. I usually decorate them with colorful paper and write a personal message inside.

Sugerencia: 题目询问童年经历，应使用过去时“liked”。“creams”可能是“cranes”的拼写或发音错误；可以说“fold paper into cranes and stars”。第二句理由清楚，但可以补充一个简单的具体细节，让回答更完整。

Ejemplo: As a child, I liked folding paper into cranes and stars. It was a fun and creative way to pass the time, and I sometimes made them with my friends at school.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，结构清楚。“physical letters”可以理解，但“handwritten letters”更自然。“show my sincere blessings”搭配不够地道，建议改为“express my warm wishes”或“show them how much I care”。还可以加入一个简短细节，例如会在信中写什么。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, although I mainly write handwritten letters on special occasions. I often send one to a friend on their birthday because it feels more personal than a text message. I also like adding a short note about a happy memory we share.

Sugerencia: 回答直接、观点明确，并使用了“because”和“but”连接理由与对比。整体表达自然。可以将“it”明确为“keeping handwritten letters”，避免指代略显模糊；如果想进一步展开，可以举一个人们保存信件的例子。

Ejemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters because they have sentimental value. For example, they may save letters from close friends or family members as reminders of important moments. However, this is much less common than it used to be.

Sugerencia: 主要意思能够理解，但“when go out”缺少主语，应改为“when I go out”；句尾“by our”不完整。可以说“on our phones”或“using our phones”。此外，题目问的是你个人的习惯，建议统一使用“I”，并补充一个具体场景说明你通常如何记笔记。

Ejemplo: I don't usually carry paper and a pen when I go out because I can take notes on my phone. For example, if I need to remember a shopping item or an idea, I just type it into a notes app.

× Yes, I used to make paper flowers like Lily and now I like making birthday cards to my friends on their birthday to show my sincerely blessing.

✓ Yes, I used to make paper flowers like lilies, and now I like making birthday cards for my friends on their birthdays to show my sincere blessing.

“flowers”表示多种纸花，举例时花的种类通常也用复数形式“lilies”。句中“my friends”是复数，因此通常用“their birthdays”与之对应。

× Yes, I used to make paper flowers like Lily and now I like making birthday cards to my friends on their birthday to show my sincerely blessing.

✓ Yes, I used to make paper flowers like lilies, and now I like making birthday cards for my friends on their birthdays to show my sincere blessing.

表达“为朋友制作卡片”时，应使用“make something for someone”，所以这里用“for my friends”，而不是“to my friends”。

× Yes, I used to make paper flowers like Lily and now I like making birthday cards to my friends on their birthday to show my sincerely blessing.

✓ Yes, I used to make paper flowers like lilies, and now I like making birthday cards for my friends on their birthdays to show my sincere blessing.

“blessing”是名词，前面需要形容词修饰，因此应把副词“sincerely”改为形容词“sincere”。

× I like folding paper, creams and stars. I think it's a creative and fun way to spend time.

✓ I liked folding paper, creams and stars. I think it's a creative and fun way to spend time.

问题询问的是“小时候喜欢做什么”，描述过去的喜好时，动词“like”应使用过去式“liked”。

× I do not always carry pens and paper when go out because nowadays we can take notes or write down ideas by our.

✓ I do not always carry pens and paper when I go out because nowadays we can take notes or write down ideas by ourselves.

“when”引导的时间从句需要主语和谓语，原句中的“when go out”缺少主语，应补上“I”，构成“when I go out”。

× I do not always carry pens and paper when go out because nowadays we can take notes or write down ideas by our.

✓ I do not always carry pens and paper when I go out because nowadays we can take notes or write down ideas by ourselves.

“by”表示“独自、靠自己”时，后面应使用反身代词。这里主语是“we”，因此应使用“ourselves”，不能用物主限定词“our”。