Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 문장 사이에 마침표와 접속사가 필요합니다. “made airplane”에는 관사 “an”을 사용하고, “learn”보다는 종이비행기를 만드는 과정이 어려웠다는 의미의 “make” 또는 “fold”가 더 적절합니다. 종이비행기를 어떻게 만들었는지나 결과를 한 가지 구체적으로 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I made a paper airplane when I was younger, but it was quite difficult to fold the paper properly. It took me several tries before I finally made one that could fly.

Sugerencia: 어린 시절의 일을 말하므로 현재형 “like” 대신 과거형 “liked”를 사용해야 합니다. “there is many”는 “there were many”로 고치고, “pretty papers”보다는 “pretty sheets of paper”가 자연스럽습니다. 종이에 무엇을 그렸는지 또는 그 활동을 좋아한 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, “because”나 “so”를 사용해 문장을 연결하세요.

Ejemplo: I liked painting on paper when I was a child. There were many colorful sheets of paper available, so I often bought the prettiest ones. I especially enjoyed painting flowers and simple landscapes because it was relaxing.

Sugerencia: “write book”은 질문의 의미에 맞지 않으므로 “write physical letters” 또는 “write cards”라고 해야 합니다. “on my friends’ or family members’ birthdays”처럼 전치사와 소유격을 정확히 사용하고, “make they feel more like celebrate”는 “make the occasion feel more special”로 표현하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 누구에게, 언제, 왜 편지를 쓰는지 명확한 구조로 답변하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, although I only write physical letters on my friends’ or family members’ birthdays. I usually send a handwritten card with a personal message. I think it makes the occasion feel more special and shows that I have made an effort.

Sugerencia: “handwriting letter”는 복수형 명사구인 “handwritten letters”로 고치고, “in today” 대신 “today”를 사용하세요. “very valuable”은 무엇이 가치 있는지 분명하지 않으므로, 사람들이 편지를 간직하는 이유를 설명하는 것이 좋습니다. “I’ve seen many people keep them in their diaries”처럼 대명사와 자연스러운 동사를 사용하고, 추억이나 감정과 연결해 구체성을 높이세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think many people still keep handwritten letters today. They often store them in diaries, boxes, or albums because the letters remind them of important memories. A handwritten message can also feel more personal than a text message.

Sugerencia: “No, I don’t” 뒤에 문장을 나누어 말하면 더 명확합니다. “I bought iPads”는 일반적인 습관을 설명할 때 “I use my iPad”가 더 적절하며, “write with my pets”는 의미상 “write on my iPad”로 수정해야 합니다. 종이와 펜 대신 태블릿을 사용하는 이유와 편리한 기능을 한 가지 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t. I usually use my iPad instead of carrying paper and pens when I go out. It is more convenient because I can take notes, organize them, and access them whenever I need to.

× Yes I have I made airplane with paper It was very hard to learn.

✓ Yes, I have. I made an airplane with paper. It was very hard to learn.

The singular countable noun airplane requires the indefinite article an because it begins with a vowel sound.

× I like painting on paper.

✓ I liked painting on paper.

The question asks about an activity the student enjoyed as a child, so the past tense liked is more appropriate than the present tense like.

× When I was a child there is many colors of paper

✓ When I was a child, there were many colors of paper.

Because the sentence refers to the past, is must change to was or were. The plural noun colors requires were.

× so I like to buy pretty papers.

✓ so I liked to buy pretty paper.

The sentence describes a childhood habit, so liked is required. Paper is generally an uncountable noun when referring to the material, so it should not normally be pluralized here.

× Yes, I write book.

✓ Yes, I write letters.

The context is about physical letters, so the plural noun letters is needed. A single countable noun would also require an article, such as a book.

× I write their letters only in my friends or family's birthday.

✓ I write letters only for my friends' or family members' birthdays.

The preposition for is used to express the purpose or occasion. The plural possessive forms friends' and family members' are needed because the sentence refers to birthdays belonging to several people.

× Physical letters make they feel more like celebrate.

✓ Physical letters make them feel more like celebrating.

After the verb make, an object pronoun is required, so they must change to them. The pronoun refers to people who receive the letters.

× Physical letters make they feel more like celebrate.

✓ Physical letters make them feel more like celebrating.

After the expression feel like, a gerund ending in -ing is required. Therefore, celebrate should be changed to celebrating.

× Yes, handwriting letter is very Ver valuable in in today.

✓ Yes, handwritten letters are very valuable today.

The sentence refers to letters in general, so the plural form letters is needed. The plural subject requires the plural verb are.

× Yes, handwriting letter is very Ver valuable in in today.

✓ Yes, handwritten letters are very valuable today.

Handwritten is the correct adjective for letters produced by hand. Handwriting is a noun or a verb form and cannot directly describe the letters in this sentence.

× Yes, handwriting letter is very Ver valuable in in today.

✓ Yes, handwritten letters are very valuable today.

The phrase in today is incorrect. Today is an adverb of time and does not need a preposition in this sentence.

× I saw many people keep letters in diary.

✓ I saw many people keep letters in a diary.

Diary is a singular countable noun, so it requires an article. The indefinite article a is appropriate because the sentence refers to a nonspecific diary.

× No I don't I bought iPads so I don't have to carry paper and pens.

✓ No, I don't. I bought an iPad, so I don't have to carry paper and pens.

The original contains two independent clauses joined without proper separation. Dividing them into two sentences makes the structure clear. An iPad is used here as a singular countable noun and requires an article.

× I can write with my pets when I have to do.

✓ I can write on my iPad when I have to.

The natural preposition for writing using a tablet is on, as in write on an iPad. The phrase have to do is incomplete in this context; have to is sufficient because the omitted verb is understood from the previous clause.

× I can write with my pets when I have to do.

✓ I can write on my iPad when I have to.

The phrase when I have to do is structurally incomplete because do has no clear object or complement. When I have to is grammatically complete when the repeated action, write, is understood from context.