Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答方向正确，也提供了童年经历和具体例子，但有明显的语法和搭配问题。可以说“just a few simple things”而不是“just a little just simple things”；“when I was in kindergarten”比“when I was kindergarten”正确；“crafts”应使用复数。最后一句的“crafting with paintings”不符合语境，应改为“doing paper crafts”，并使用现在完成时结构“since I last did...”。建议按照“直接回答＋具体例子＋现在的情况”组织，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, but I’ve only made a few simple things. When I was in kindergarten, I learned how to fold paper into the shapes of different animals. I found it quite interesting, although I haven’t done any paper crafts for a long time.

Sugerencia: 回答包含了明确的活动和场景，这是优点，但句子结构不自然。应将“The most often things”改为“The thing I did most often”，并补充宾语“folded paper into little airplanes”。“when I was child”应为“when I was a child”，“shoot airplanes”不如“fly them”或“launch them”自然。建议使用过去时，并加入一个简短的感受或结果，使答案更完整。

Ejemplo: The thing I liked doing most was folding paper into little airplanes. My classmates and I would launch them across the playground to see whose plane could fly the farthest. It was a simple activity, but we had a lot of fun competing with each other.

Sugerencia: 答案直接表达了“不写”，但有重复和不自然的表达。“For now”和“right now”不需要同时使用；“physical letter”应为“physical letters”；“electrical”应改为“electronic”；“write email or tasks”搭配错误，应说“send emails or messages”。建议先直接回答，再说明电子 communication 更方便，并给出具体方式。

Ejemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters these days. Since most forms of communication are electronic, I usually send emails or instant messages instead. They are much faster and more convenient, especially when I need to contact someone quickly.

Sugerencia: 观点清楚，理由也与问题相关，但“people that likes”应改为“people who like”，“a more classic way”前需要冠词，而且“physical letters”在此处可以直接说“handwritten letters”。句中连续使用两个“because”，影响流畅度。建议使用“Although...,...”或“Many people believe...”来连接观点和原因，并加入保存信件的具体原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters. They may see them as more romantic and personal than emails or text messages. In addition, a handwritten letter can become a meaningful memory, so people often keep it for many years.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确理由和实际场景，但内容表达不够清晰，且最后一句没有完成。“some emergency”应改为“an emergency”，“if you mess some foreign tourists”应改为“if you meet some foreign tourists”，“where their destination is”可改为“how to get to their destination”。“write a write”是明显重复，应用“write directions”。建议控制在三句话左右，并完整结束答案。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook with me. They can be useful in an emergency—for example, if I meet foreign tourists who need directions, I can draw a map or write down the address for them. I can also use them to note down an important phone number.

× Yes, but just a little just simple things.

✓ Yes, but only a little—just simple things.

原句中两个“just”连续使用，句子结构不自然。可以用“only”表示“仅仅”，并用破折号连接补充说明，使句子更清晰。

× I made some craft with paper when I was kindergarten.

✓ I made some crafts with paper when I was in kindergarten.

“some”后面通常接可数名词复数，因此“craft”应改为“crafts”。表示“在幼儿园”时，应使用介词短语“in kindergarten”，不能说“was kindergarten”。

× There are some lessons that tell you how to fold papers into the shape of different animals.

✓ There are some lessons that tell you how to fold paper into different animal shapes.

表示制作材料时，“paper”通常是不可数名词，不需要加复数形式。为了表达多种动物的形状，“different animal shapes”比“the shape of different animals”更自然。

× It’s been a while since last time I do crafting with paintings.

✓ It’s been a while since the last time I did paper crafts.

“since the last time”后面描述过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时“did”，不能使用现在时“do”。“last time”前通常需要定冠词“the”。此外，“paper crafts”更准确地表达“纸艺”。

× The most often things I did with paper when I was child is I folded into like little airplanes and we would shoot it on the playground with other classmates.

✓ The things I did most often with paper when I was a child were folding it into little airplanes and shooting them on the playground with my classmates.

“most often”应放在动词“did”之后，不能放在“things”前面。“I was child”缺少冠词，应改为“I was a child”。主语“things”是复数，所以系动词应使用“were”，不能使用“is”。“airplanes”是复数，因此后面的代词应使用“them”，不能使用单数“it”。

× For now I don't write physical letter right now. I just because I found a lot of things are electrical right now so I think I mostly write email or tasks to others.

✓ For now, I don’t write physical letters because I find that many things are electronic, so I mostly write emails or messages to others.

“physical letter”和“email”在这里都是泛指，应使用复数形式“physical letters”和“emails”。“I just because...”不是完整的句子结构，需要把“because”从句连接到主句中。表示电子设备或电子形式时，“electronic”比“electrical”更合适。

× I think yes because there are still people that likes to write physical letters because they think they are more romantic or they're more classic way to express their feelings.

✓ I think so because there are still people who like to write physical letters. They think letters are more romantic or are a more classic way to express their feelings.

“people”是复数，所以谓语应使用“like”，不能使用第三人称单数形式“likes”。“a more classic way”是单数可数名词短语，前面需要冠词“a”。将过长的句子拆开，可以避免重复使用“because”，使句子结构更清楚。

× Yes, I carry them when I go out because there's always some emergency that you need to use paper like if you mess some foreign tourists on the road and then they want to know where their destination is. You can write a write on paper to tell them where to go or you can leave your contact

✓ Yes, I carry them when I go out because there is always an emergency in which I might need to use paper. For example, if I meet foreign tourists on the road and they want to know where their destination is, I can write a note on paper to tell them where to go, or I can leave them my contact information.

原句包含多个从句，连接方式混乱，因此需要拆分并重新组织句子。“an emergency”是单数可数名词，前面需要使用不定冠词“an”。“write a write”结构错误，应改为“write a note”。句末“leave your contact”意思不完整，应改为“leave them my contact information”。