Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 「Yes」で直接答えた後、具体的な作品と頻度を簡潔に説明すると、より自然で効果的です。「made airplane by paper」は不自然なので、「made paper airplanes」または「folded paper airplanes」と言いましょう。また、「Odigami」「Oligami」は「origami」、「holding paper」は「folding paper」、「make」は「making」に修正してください。最後まで文を完成させ、「We Japanese have...」のような一般化よりも、自分の経験を中心に話すとよいです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often made paper airplanes when I was in elementary school. I also enjoyed origami, the traditional Japanese art of folding paper into different shapes. Paper airplanes were my favorite because I could fly them with my classmates during break time.

Sugerencia: 過去の習慣についての質問なので、「I loved」や「I used to write」を使い、時制を過去に統一してください。「writing the stories」は「writing stories」、「that interest become changed changing」は「this interest developed into a desire」にすると自然です。どんな話を書いたのか、またなぜ好きだったのかを1つ具体的に加えると、内容が豊かになります。

Ejemplo: I loved writing short stories when I was a child. I was an avid reader, and this interest gradually developed into a desire to create my own stories. I often wrote simple adventure stories about children who discovered mysterious places.

Sugerencia: 「physical letters」よりも、日常会話では「handwritten letters」のほうが自然です。「hot mother」は「host mother」の誤りなので注意してください。また、「see reply me on WhatsApp」は「receive her replies on WhatsApp」、「write physical letter」は「write handwritten letters」に直しましょう。過去の経験と現在の習慣を分け、最後まで明確な文で終えるとよいです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, although I do it occasionally. Last year, I stayed with a host mother in Spain during my internship, and I sometimes sent her handwritten letters to show my appreciation. She usually replied to me on WhatsApp, which made the exchange feel special.

Sugerencia: 意見と理由が明確で、質問にも直接答えています。「less and less people do handwritten letters」は「fewer and fewer people write or keep handwritten letters」、「use smart phone」は「use smartphones」、「put it on by keyboard」は「type them on a keyboard」に修正してください。手書きの手紙が減った結果や、例を1つ加えると、より具体的で説得力のある回答になります。

Ejemplo: I think fewer and fewer people keep handwritten letters today. Smartphones and computers make it much quicker to type and send messages, so most people prefer digital communication. However, some people still keep letters because they are personal and meaningful memories.

Sugerencia: 「Yes」で答えた後、紙とペンを持ち歩く理由を説明できています。「the idea of research comes up quickly」は「research ideas often come to me unexpectedly」、「I really easy to forget」は「I easily forget them」、「put it on my smartphone」は「type them into my smartphone」に直してください。理由が多く続くため、「because」「so」などの接続語を整理し、具体的な場面を1つ加えると、より自然で効果的です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen with me. Research ideas often come to me unexpectedly, and I’m afraid I’ll forget them if I don’t write them down immediately. Although I could use my smartphone, writing by hand helps me remember my ideas better.

× Yes, when I was in elementary school, I often made airplane by paper.

✓ Yes, when I was in elementary school, I often made airplanes out of paper.

Airplane is a countable noun, so it should be plural when speaking generally. The natural preposition is out of, because the airplanes were made from paper. No article is needed before the plural noun airplanes.

× We Japanese have a culture of Odigami, which is holding paper and make something.

✓ We Japanese have a culture of origami, which involves folding paper to make things.

After involves, use the -ing form folding. The original sentence also incorrectly combines holding with make. The phrase folding paper to make things creates a clear and grammatically parallel structure.

× I really love writing the stories.

✓ I really loved writing stories.

The question asks about activities you liked as a child, so use the past tense loved. Stories is used in the plural without the definite article when referring to stories in general.

× When I was a kid, I really loved reading books and that interest become changed changing to the desire to write a story.

✓ When I was a kid, I really loved reading books, and that interest changed into a desire to write stories.

Because this event happened in the past, become should be changed to changed. Changed is the correct finite verb here; changed changing is an incorrect combination. Stories is more natural when referring to writing in general.

× When I was in elementary school, I often make story and write it in.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I often made up stories and wrote them down.

Use the past-tense forms made and wrote because the activities happened in elementary school. Stories should be plural for a repeated activity. The natural phrasal verb is write stories down, not write them in.

× Yes, last year I was in Spain to do my internship and I lived with my host mother and I really love her, so I often write physical letter to her.

✓ Yes, last year I was in Spain for my internship, and I lived with my host mother. I really loved her, so I often wrote physical letters to her.

The time expression last year requires the past tense loved, wrote, and lived. Letters should be plural because this happened repeatedly. Physical letters also needs the plural form without an article when speaking generally.

× And see reply me on WhatsApp.

✓ I also saw her replies to me on WhatsApp.

The verb should be in the past tense: saw. Her is needed to show whose replies you saw, and replies should be plural because there was probably more than one reply. The correct preposition is replies to me.

× I think less and less people do handwritten letters because it is easy to use smart phone or PC, laptop, and a lot of people prefer to put it on by keyboard.

✓ I think fewer and fewer people write handwritten letters because it is easy to use a smartphone, PC, or laptop, and many people prefer to type them on a keyboard.

Use fewer with the countable noun people. Write is the appropriate verb for letters, and prefer is in the present tense because this is a current general trend. Use a before the singular countable nouns smartphone, PC, and laptop. Them refers to letters, and the natural expression is type them on a keyboard.

× Yes, because I often think about my research and the idea of research comes up quickly.

✓ Yes, because I often think about my research, and research ideas come to me quickly.

Research ideas is more natural in the plural because you are talking about ideas in general. The phrase come to me quickly is a natural way to express that ideas appear in your mind.

× I really easy to forget about it.

✓ It is really easy for me to forget about them.

Easy is an adjective, so it needs the verb is. The structure it is easy for me to forget is required here. Them refers to research ideas, which is plural.

× So I cannot put it on my smartphone.

✓ So I cannot write them down on my smartphone.

Use write down for recording ideas. Them is the correct pronoun because it refers to research ideas. On my smartphone is the appropriate prepositional phrase for recording information with a phone.

× Writing is the best way to keep my idea on my mind.

✓ Writing is the best way to keep my ideas in mind.

Ideas should be plural when referring to multiple thoughts. The fixed expression is keep something in mind, not keep something on my mind.