Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid the unnatural phrase “there is in Japan.” Use a clear structure: identify origami, explain what you made, and add a specific childhood detail. Replace “I loved the attempt” with “I enjoyed making it” and avoid repetition such as “many many” and “or something.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. In Japan, origami is a popular paper craft in which people fold square pieces of paper into animals and other shapes. When I was a child, I enjoyed making paper cranes and animals with my friends.

Sugerencia: Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “loved,” “made,” and “played.” State the activity in a topic sentence, then explain the game clearly. Replace “the perk” with “a park” if that is what you mean, and use linking words such as “After that” or “so.”

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I loved doing origami and making paper animals. My friends and I would then arrange them in a pretend zoo or park. It was a simple activity, but we had a lot of fun creating stories with the animals.

Sugerencia: The answer has a clear personal example, but “is living” can be changed to “lives,” and “emails or chat is” should be “emails and chats are.” Explain the emotional benefit more naturally instead of saying “see the paper by paper.” For example, mention that handwritten letters feel more personal and can be kept as memories.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes do. My boyfriend lives in Italy, so we occasionally send handwritten letters to each other. Emails and chats are more convenient, but a physical letter feels more personal, and we can keep it as a special memory.

Sugerencia: Avoid making an overly broad statement such as “No, they don’t”; say that fewer people do so, while some still keep letters for sentimental reasons. Correct “sometimes they feel comfortable” to “they are more convenient,” and replace “It doesn’t cost much more time” with “They save time.” Use a balanced contrast to make the answer more developed.

Ejemplo: I think fewer people keep handwritten letters nowadays because emails and chats are faster and more convenient. They also save time and can be edited or deleted easily. However, some people still keep old letters because they have sentimental value and remind them of important relationships.

Sugerencia: Give a more natural explanation for using paper and pens. “Manipulate smartphones” should be “use smartphones,” and “keep memo” should be “take notes.” Add a specific situation, such as writing down an address or a shopping list, and avoid the vague phrase “something a little bit.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen with me. In Japan, it can sometimes be difficult to use a smartphone in crowded places, so paper is useful for taking quick notes. For example, I might write down an address, a phone number, or a short shopping list.

× Yes I have actually there is in Japan origami which is a square paper is so famous to create many many animals or something.

✓ Yes, I have, actually. In Japan, there is an art form called origami, which involves folding square pieces of paper to create many animals and other things.

The phrase there is must be followed by the thing that exists. The original word order is incorrect because there is appears before in Japan origami. Use there is an art form called origami to introduce the topic clearly.

× Yes I have actually there is in Japan origami which is a square paper is so famous to create many many animals or something.

✓ Yes, I have, actually. In Japan, there is an art form called origami, which involves folding a square piece of paper to create many animals and other things.

Paper is usually an uncountable material, so a square paper is incorrect when referring to one sheet. Use a square piece of paper instead.

× Yes I have actually there is in Japan origami which is a square paper is so famous to create many many animals or something.

✓ Yes, I have, actually. In Japan, there is an art form called origami, which is famous for creating many animals and other things.

After the preposition for, use a gerund with the -ing form. Therefore, famous for creating is correct, not famous to create.

× Yes I have actually there is in Japan origami which is a square paper is so famous to create many many animals or something.

✓ Yes, I have, actually. In Japan, there is an art form called origami. It involves folding square pieces of paper to create many animals and other things.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined without clear connections. Separate the ideas into well-formed sentences and use it to refer to origami.

× I love to do some origami and make some animals and with my friends.

✓ I loved doing origami and making animals with my friends.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change love to loved. The parallel activities should also use the same form: doing and making.

× I love to do some origami and make some animals and with my friends.

✓ I loved doing origami and making animals with my friends.

After loved, the gerund form is natural when describing an activity that someone enjoyed. Use doing and making rather than mixing love to do with make.

× I love to do some origami and make some animals and with my friends.

✓ I loved doing origami and making animals with my friends.

The phrase and with my friends is incorrectly placed and leaves the sentence structure incomplete. Put with my friends after the activities it describes.

× We play by pretending it as a zoo or the perk or something and it is so fun.

✓ We played by pretending that our origami animals were in a zoo or a park, and it was so much fun.

The answer refers to childhood activities, so use the past-tense forms played and was instead of play and is.

× We play by pretending it as a zoo or the perk or something and it is so fun.

✓ We played by pretending that our origami animals were in a zoo or a park, and it was so much fun.

The pronoun it does not clearly refer to the origami animals, and pretend is not normally followed by pretend it as. Use that our origami animals were in a zoo or a park to express the idea clearly.

× We play by pretending it as a zoo or the perk or something and it is so fun.

✓ We played by pretending that our origami animals were in a zoo or a park, and it was so much fun.

Use in when describing the location of the animals. The phrase pretend it as is not the correct prepositional structure in this context.

× Of course, emails or chat is fine, but we can see the paper by paper, we can see the paper is so good.

✓ Of course, email or chat is fine, but we can see and touch the paper, which is really nice.

When email or chat is treated as one choice, the singular verb is fine agrees with the singular subject. If both nouns are plural, use emails and chats are fine. The corrected sentence uses the singular alternatives consistently.

× Of course, emails or chat is fine, but we can see the paper by paper, we can see the paper is so good.

✓ Of course, email or chat is fine, but we can see and touch the paper, which is really nice.

The original sentence contains a comma splice and repeats we can see the paper. Join the ideas with which and express the two benefits with parallel verbs: see and touch.

× No they don't because chat or email is much more convenient and sometimes they feel comfortable. It doesn't cost much more time and also it is so easy to erase and rewrite. So I guess they use emails or much more.

✓ No, they do not, because chat or email is much more convenient. It does not take much time, and it is easy to erase and rewrite messages. So, I guess people use email much more often.

The final clause, use emails or much more, is incomplete because much more needs to modify a complete comparison. Use email much more often to complete the sentence correctly. The ideas are also separated into clearer sentences.

× It doesn't cost much more time and also it is so easy to erase and rewrite.

✓ It does not take much time, and it is also easy to erase and rewrite messages.

Much more time incorrectly suggests a comparison with another amount of time. When saying that something requires only a small amount of time, use much time or not much time. The verb take is also the appropriate verb for time.

× Sometimes in Japan it is little bit difficult to manipulate smart phones.

✓ Sometimes in Japan, it is a little bit difficult to use smartphones.

The fixed expression is a little bit, so the article a is required. Smartphone is normally written as one word, and use is more natural than manipulate in this context, although the main grammar correction is the article.

× So using pen and paper is sometimes great way to keep memo.

✓ So using a pen and paper is sometimes a great way to keep a memo.

Singular countable nouns need articles. Use a pen and a great way. Memo is also a singular countable noun here, so it needs the article a.

× Also it is so convenient to write down something a little bit.

✓ Also, it is very convenient to write something down.

The adverb down belongs after the object when the object is a pronoun or an indefinite expression such as something. Therefore, write something down is the correct word order. A little bit is unnecessary in this sentence.