Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答有相关内容，但句子不完整、重复较多，时态和搭配错误明显。应直接说明“小时候做过什么”，使用过去时，例如将“use paper to handmade”改为“used paper to make”。同时补充一个清晰的具体例子，并用“for example”连接；避免重复“as a surprise”和没有完成的句尾。

Ejemplo: Yes, I made paper crafts when I was a child. I used to make small gifts for my best friend, such as paper stars. For example, I once made a star-shaped decoration as a surprise for her at the beginning of the school term.

Sugerencia: 回答基本切题，也提供了原因，但存在冠词、单复数和词汇搭配问题。“draw in the paper”应改为“draw on paper”，“a creative people”应改为“a creative person”，“thinkings”应改为“thoughts”。建议用清晰的两到三句表达喜好、原因和具体内容，减少“that is”的重复。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I enjoyed drawing on paper. I was quite creative, so drawing was a good way for me to express my thoughts and ideas. I especially liked drawing animals and scenes from nature.

Sugerencia: 回答意图清楚，但语法和词汇问题较多，且句子没有完成。“In nowadays”应改为“Nowadays”，“I not to write”应改为“I don’t write”，“quickly”在这里应使用形容词“quicker”或“faster”。建议先直接回答“No”，再说明人们使用 messaging apps，因为它们更方便、更快捷。

Ejemplo: No, I don’t write physical letters nowadays. I usually use messaging apps to keep in touch with my friends and family because they are faster and more convenient. I would only write a letter for a special occasion, such as a birthday.

Sugerencia: 回答给出了观点和原因，但“it's no to have”“handmaking writer”和“the most people”等表达不自然，最后一句也未完成。应使用“Most people do not keep handwritten letters”或“Some people still keep them”。建议进行适度让步：虽然电子信息更普遍，但具有纪念意义的信件仍可能被保存。

Ejemplo: I think most people do not keep handwritten letters nowadays because they mainly communicate through messaging apps. However, some people still keep letters that have sentimental value, such as letters from family members or old friends. These letters can remind them of important memories.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但存在动词、词汇和表达错误。“I not carry”应改为“I don’t carry”，“easily be broke”应改为“can easily get damaged”，“my film”应为“my phone”。“mask behavior”和“during the traffic”不符合语境。建议说明不携带纸笔的原因，并用“instead”引出手机这一替代工具。

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. They can be inconvenient to carry, and paper may get damaged in my bag. Instead, I use my phone to take notes because it is more practical and convenient.

× Personally in my childhood I always use paper to handmade gifts for my best friend.

✓ Personally, in my childhood, I always used paper to make handmade gifts for my best friend.

“in my childhood”表示过去时间，因此动词“use”应使用过去式“used”。“to handmade”结构错误；“to”后面应接动词原形“make”。

× And that that as a surprise as a surprise.

✓ I made them as surprises.

原句有重复和不完整的结构，缺少清晰的主语和谓语。可以用“I made them as surprises”完整表达“我把它们做成惊喜礼物”。

× For example in the beginning of the term I use I used paper to make stars in.

✓ For example, at the beginning of the term, I used paper to make stars.

“at the beginning of the term”描述过去经历，所以应使用过去式“used”。句末的“in”没有后接宾语，应删除。

× When I was a child I used to draw in the paper.

✓ When I was a child, I used to draw on paper.

表示在纸张表面画画时，通常使用介词“on”，而不是“in”。“on paper”是正确搭配。

× I was a creative people.

✓ I was a creative person.

主语“I”指一个人，所以应使用单数名词“person”，不能使用复数形式“people”。

× So that is that is a best way to express my thinkings and ideas.

✓ So that was the best way to express my thoughts and ideas.

这句话谈论的是童年经历，因此“is”应改为过去式“was”。同时，“the best”前应使用定冠词“the”，而不是不定冠词“a”。

× So that is that is a best way to express my thinkings and ideas.

✓ So that was the best way to express my thoughts and ideas.

最高级“best”前通常要使用定冠词“the”，因此应说“the best way”，不能说“a best way”。

× In nowadays I not to write physical letters.

✓ Nowadays, I do not write physical letters.

“nowadays”本身就是时间副词，前面不需要使用介词“in”。一般现在时的否定句需要使用助动词“do”，所以应说“I do not write”。

× I not to write physical letters as it's we usually to use some international or other community applications to commit or chat with each other.

✓ I do not write physical letters because we usually use messaging or social media applications to communicate or chat with each other.

描述当前的习惯应使用一般现在时。否定句需要“do not + 动词原形”，所以是“do not write”；“we usually use”后面也直接接动词原形“use”，不能使用“to use”。

× That is more convenient and quickly.

✓ That is more convenient and quicker.

“more convenient”中的“convenient”是形容词，因此并列部分也应使用形容词。副词“quickly”应改为形容词比较级“quicker”。

× For most people, I think it's no to have a handmaking writer today because the most people will use message application or other online ways to communicate with their families or friends.

✓ For most people, I do not think they keep handwritten letters today because most people use messaging applications or other online ways to communicate with their families or friends.

“most people”泛指大多数人时，前面不需要定冠词“the”。“a handmaking writer”不能正确表达“手写信”；这里应使用复合形容词“handwritten”修饰复数名词“letters”。

× For most people, I think it's no to have a handmaking writer today because the most people will use message application or other online ways to communicate with their families or friends.

✓ For most people, I do not think they keep handwritten letters today because most people use messaging applications or other online ways to communicate with their families or friends.

题目询问现在的情况，因此应使用一般现在时“do not think”和“use”。“will use”表示将来，不适合描述目前的普遍习惯。

× No, I not carry paper when I go out.

✓ No, I do not carry paper when I go out.

一般现在时的否定句需要使用助动词“do”。因此应说“I do not carry”，不能直接说“I not carry”。

× The paper easily be broke during the traffic.

✓ The paper can easily be torn during traffic.

“paper”是被撕坏的对象，需要使用被动语态“be torn”。情态动词“can”后面应接“be + 过去分词”，所以不能使用“be broke”。

× The paper easily be broke during the traffic.

✓ The paper can easily be torn during traffic.

原句缺少情态动词，导致“be”前没有助动词。可以使用“can”表示纸张可能被撕坏，结构为“can + be + 过去分词”。

× Additionally, I can use my film to write anything that is more easily and convenient.

✓ Additionally, I can use my phone to write anything, which is easier and more convenient.

“easily”是副词，不能与形容词“convenient”并列描述某件事。这里应使用形容词比较级“easier”和“more convenient”。