Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但存在明显的重复和搭配错误，例如“forgotten”重复、“how to manage it”不自然。应准确说明折纸的具体作品，并用“but”或“although”连接补充信息。注意最多使用2—3句，避免信息混乱；“make a board”可能想表达“make a boat”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. When I was younger, I learned how to make a paper boat through origami, although I’ve completely forgotten the steps now. I mainly remember doing it with my friends, who were really enthusiastic about paper crafts.

Sugerencia: 没有直接、清晰地回答过去喜欢做什么；“I really need to do”应改为“I really liked doing”或“I used to do”。“oily pestiles”应为“oil pastels”，“enjoy it to creative”应为“enjoy being creative”。建议先给出主题句，再补充绘画工具和原因。

Ejemplo: As a child, I especially liked drawing on paper and making simple origami figures. I sometimes used oil pastels or colored pencils, and although I wasn’t very skilled, I enjoyed being creative and experimenting with different colors.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但有重复和语法问题：“not really, not anymore”可保留一个；“Sending messages are more faster”应为“Sending messages is faster and more convenient”；“high or sentimental value and original”表达不完整。应解释为什么仍有人写信，例如因为信件更有纪念意义或更个人化。

Ejemplo: No, not really. I hardly ever write physical letters because sending messages is much faster and more convenient. However, I think some people still write them for sentimental reasons, since a handwritten letter feels more personal and memorable.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，也提供了个人和祖父母的例子，内容较具体。“a ten machine”应改为“a time machine”；“travel back and see”后面需要更自然地说明可以了解过去的交流方式。建议避免“physical handwritten letters”的重复，直接说“handwritten letters”。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I keep several handwritten letters, and I believe my grandparents have saved letters that they wrote to each other. To me, they’re like a time machine because I can read them and get a sense of how people communicated in the past.

Sugerencia: 回答切题，并给出了学生身份和使用场景，但“some Thinking”应改为“some thoughts”，“typing on computers”可改为“typing on a computer”或“typing digitally”。建议使用连接词清楚表达原因，并具体说明会记录什么内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen because I’m still a student. I write and read a lot every day, so whenever I have an idea or a reminder, I prefer to write it down rather than type it on my phone or computer.

× Like I said, I really need to do some origami and I like drawing on paper.

✓ Like I said, I really needed to do some origami, and I liked drawing on paper.

题目问的是“小时候喜欢做什么”，所以要使用过去时。need 应改为 needed，like 应改为 liked。

× I'm not professional.

✓ I'm not a professional.

professional 在这里是可数名词，表示“专业人士”。单数可数名词前通常需要冠词，因此要加 a。

× I just enjoy it to creative.

✓ I just enjoy being creative.

enjoy 后面通常接名词或动名词（动词-ing形式），不能接 to do 结构。creative 是形容词，需要用 being creative 表示“保持创造力/进行创作”。

× Sending messages are more faster and convenient.

✓ Sending messages is faster and more convenient.

Sending messages 是一个动名词短语，整体作单数主语，所以谓语要用 is，不能用 are。

× Sending messages are more faster and convenient.

✓ Sending messages is faster and more convenient.

faster 本身已经是比较级，不能再和 more 一起使用。应该说 faster；而 convenient 较长，使用 more convenient。

× I guess people still do it mostly high or sentimental value and original.

✓ I guess people still do it mostly because handwritten letters have high sentimental value and are original.

原句缺少完整的句子结构，high or sentimental value 前缺少谓语和介词，and original 也缺少对应的谓语。加入 because 引导原因，并使用 have 和 are，使句子结构完整。

× I guess people still do it mostly high or sentimental value and original.

✓ I guess people still do it mostly because handwritten letters have high sentimental value and are original.

原句中的 or 不能正确连接句意。这里是在说明人们保留信件的原因，应使用 because；同时用 and 连接两个并列谓语。

× When I have some thinking, I prefer to write them down rather than typing on computers.

✓ When I have some thoughts, I prefer writing them down rather than typing them on a computer.

prefer 后面可以使用动名词结构。为了保持两部分结构平行，应使用 writing 和 typing。

× When I have some thinking, I prefer to write them down rather than typing on computers.

✓ When I have some thoughts, I prefer writing them down rather than typing them on a computer.

them 指代 thoughts，因此在 typing 后也需要使用 them，表示“把这些想法打出来”。此外，thoughts 是可数名词复数，比 thinking 更适合表达“想法”。