Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g. "when festivals come" not "when some festival arrives"). Avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes. I often make paper decorations at home for festivals. For example, I cut lanterns and garlands for Lunar New Year, which my family hangs around the house because these decorations have sentimental value.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, clarity and completeness. Begin with a simple topic sentence, then describe specific crafts and one memorable detail. Use linking words (e.g. "for example", "then") and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: As a child, I loved making simple paper crafts. For example, I often folded paper boats and made paper flowers; we would sometimes float the boats in puddles and put the paper flowers in water to see them change shape.

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatical and more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give two concise reasons, using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish your thought.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually write physical letters anymore because of smartphones. I mainly send messages or emails since they are faster and usually free, especially for staying in touch with friends and family.

Sugerencia: Use clearer structure and reduce repetition. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific contrast and an example of who might keep letters. Use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand."

Ejemplo: Many people now use email or social media, so handwritten letters are less common. However, some people—such as older relatives or romantics—still keep handwritten letters for sentimental reasons.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct grammar (e.g. "travel abroad"). Give a concise reason and one specific example of what you write. Avoid repeating words and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, especially when I travel abroad. I carry a notebook and a pen to write down important details like visa appointment times, addresses, or phone numbers.

× I have made paper decorations at home, especially when some festival arrives I prefer to do some paper decoration by myself it means a lot to my family.

✓ I have made paper decorations at home; especially when a festival arrives, I prefer to make paper decorations by myself because it means a lot to my family.

Original sentence had run-on structure and incorrect verb form 'do some paper decoration' which should be 'make paper decorations' to show action of creating. Use of present perfect 'I have made' is fine. Add punctuation and conjunction 'because' to connect the idea. Use article 'a festival' and plural 'decorations' for consistency.

× When I was a child I usually They made some paper craft like a paper boat or paper plant.

✓ When I was a child, I usually made some paper crafts like paper boats or paper plants.

Original includes an extra pronoun 'They' and wrong singular/plural forms. Remove 'They' and use past tense 'made' with plural 'crafts' and plural examples for parallel structure.

× After making this we put the paper plant into water and stimulates as

✓ After making these, we put the paper plants into water and watched them float.

Original sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect verb form 'stimulates'. Provide a complete, coherent past-tense description matching prior clause: 'watched them float' clarifies the intended action. Use plural 'these' and 'paper plants' for consistency.

× No, I don't with the development of technology.

✓ No, I don't, with the development of technology.

Sentence is ungrammatical and missing verb. Better correction: 'No, I don't' is acceptable as a short answer but needs pause; however the respondent intended to say they don't write letters anymore. A clearer version: 'No, I don't write letters anymore because of the development of technology.' This uses modal/auxiliary correctly and completes the idea.

× I really send messages on phone.

✓ I usually send messages on my phone.

Original lacks determiner and adverb for frequency. Use 'usually' to indicate habit and 'my phone' for possession. Present simple 'send' is correct for habitual action.

× I think it's more flexible and convenient and what's more is totally free free.

✓ I think it's more flexible and convenient, and what's more, it's totally free.

Repeated word 'free free' is redundant. Add 'it's' for grammatical completeness and commas to separate clauses. Adjectives 'flexible' and 'convenient' correctly describe medium; ensure proper clause structure.

× We can send message through some

✓ We can send messages through various apps.

Original is incomplete and uses singular 'message' without article. Provide plural 'messages' and complete the phrase with 'various apps' to convey typical means of sending electronic messages.

× As I say, a majority of people send letters on email or on social media platform but there is still some people still keep handwriting letters.

✓ As I said, the majority of people send letters by email or on social media platforms, but there are still some people who keep handwritten letters.

Use past 'said' for reference to previous statement. Use 'the majority' and 'by email' (preposition) and plural 'platforms'. Correct 'there is still some people' to 'there are still some people' for subject-verb agreement and add relative pronoun 'who'. Use 'handwritten letters' rather than 'handwriting letters'.

× Yes, I do, especially when I travel aboard.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I travel abroad.

Use 'abroad' (meaning overseas) rather than 'aboard' (on board). 'Travel abroad' is the correct collocation.

× I must take paper and pencil because I need to write down some information information when apply for the visa.

✓ I must take paper and a pencil because I need to write down some information when applying for a visa.

Add article 'a' before 'pencil' and remove duplicate 'information'. Use gerund 'applying' after 'when' to form correct subordinate clause and include article 'a' before 'visa'.