Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I’ve made many paper cups and several paper flowers, and I’ve also created homemade birthday cards. For example, I folded colorful paper to make layered flowers for my sister’s birthday cards.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., ‘as a child’ not ‘I was a child’), use precise words (likely you meant ‘paper’ not ‘pepper’). Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples linked with connectors.

Ejemplo: As a child, I liked making paper crafts. For instance, I often folded paper into flowers and made little paper carts and boards to play with, which kept me busy for hours.

Sugerencia: Use proper verb forms and concise phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give one reason and one brief example. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ correctly.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually write physical letters anymore because everyone uses mobile phones. For example, I now send birthday messages by text instead of mailing cards.

Sugerencia: Clarify the idea and use accurate vocabulary (e.g., ‘handwritten letters’ and ‘official documents’). Give a clear topic sentence, a reason, and a specific example, using linking words to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially for sentimental or official reasons. For instance, families often keep old letters as keepsakes, and some institutions still require signed paper documents for legal purposes.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural by using correct verb forms and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear statement, give a brief reason and a specific example, and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notepad and a pen because I often need to jot down important information. For example, I note down addresses or shopping lists when I’m out.

× Here's I have I made many paper cups and several paper flowers and I also created some homemade birthday cards.

✓ I have made many paper cups and several paper flowers, and I also created some homemade birthday cards.

The original has extraneous words and incorrect word order ('Here's I have I made'). This is a sentence structure error: remove 'Here's I have' and combine clauses with a comma and 'and' to form a clear compound sentence. Use present perfect 'have made' to indicate experience up to now and simple past 'created' for a specific past action; keeping both is acceptable here depending on intended meaning.

× I was a child, I liked to make pepper flowers, pepper, crafts.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to make paper flowers and other paper crafts.

The sentence misuses tense and words: start with 'When I was a child' to set the time frame (past). 'Pepper' is likely a wrong word; replace with 'paper'. The comma splice ('I was a child, I liked') is a sentence structure issue but here corrected by connecting the clause correctly. Use past tense 'liked' for childhood habits.

× Sometimes I made carts and boards with pepper,

✓ Sometimes I made cards and boards with paper.

This contains incorrect word choice ('pepper' instead of 'paper') and ends with an unnecessary comma. Correct the vocabulary to 'paper' and the nouns to 'cards and boards.' The past tense 'made' is appropriate for past activities.

× No, I'm not write physical letters because nowadays everyone use mobile phones so I'm not write physical letters to anyone.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters anymore because nowadays everyone uses mobile phones, so I don't write physical letters to anyone.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'I'm not write' is incorrect—use simple present negative 'I don't write.' Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone use' should be 'everyone uses.' Also, use 'anymore' to indicate a change from the past. This fixes present tense usage and agreement.

× Yeah, some people still keep writing letters because some emails like that we should write a paper we can't send email like official letters, so some people write official letters.

✓ Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters because for some official matters we should write on paper; we cannot send email for those official letters, so some people write official letters.

The original mixes forms and has unclear phrasing. Use 'handwritten letters' instead of 'writing letters.' Clarify that certain official matters require physical paper. Use present simple 'keep' and 'write' to describe current habits. Break into clearer clauses and correct modal/ability phrasing ('cannot send email for those').

× Yes, definitely I carry paper and pens because sometimes I noted very important things, so usually I carry paper and pens.

✓ Yes, definitely I carry paper and pens because sometimes I need to note very important things, so I usually carry them.

'I noted' is incorrect tense and verb choice; use 'I need to note' or 'I need to write down.' Repetition of 'I carry paper and pens' was redundant; replace with 'I usually carry them.' This fixes sentence structure and tense usage.