Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. 'Yes, I used to make paper crafts.') then give a brief specific example and a linking phrase to show relevance. Avoid tense and article errors and unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to make paper crafts when I was a child. For example, I often folded paper into cranes and flowers, a tradition we call origami in my country.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with specific details and a linking word to connect ideas. Correct plurals and idioms (e.g. 'paper planes'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

Ejemplo: As a child, I enjoyed folding paper to make animals and paper planes. I often played with my friends, and we would race the planes we made.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer natural and correct collocations (e.g. 'express my gratitude'). Use a topic sentence then a brief reason or example. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'gratitude feelings.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I still write physical letters occasionally, especially when I want to express my gratitude. For instance, I send handwritten thank-you notes after someone helps me with a project.

Sugerencia: Make the sentence grammatically correct and more concise. Use linking words to compare and give a reason. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like 'write handwriting write letters in their hand.'

Ejemplo: I don't think many people keep handwritten letters today because texting on phones and computers is much easier and faster.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason. Fix grammar and clarity (e.g. 'I use a PC for note-taking' and finish the thought). Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete clauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pencil when I go out because, as a student, I use my PC for note-taking but worry about battery issues, so I like having paper as a backup.

× Yes I have when I was a children.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The original mixes present perfect 'I have' with a past time phrase 'when I was...', which is incorrect. Use simple past 'I did' with the past time clause. Also 'children' (plural) is wrong for referring to one person; use 'child'. Add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× I like folding papers and making object which is called origami in my country.

✓ I like folding paper and making objects called origami in my country.

'Papers' is unnecessary; 'paper' as a material is uncountable. 'Object' should be plural 'objects' to match activities. Use 'called' to reduce wordiness and omit 'which is' for natural phrasing.

× As a child I used to like folding papers and creating some object like animals or planes and play with my friends.

✓ As a child, I used to like folding paper and creating objects like animals or planes to play with my friends.

Use 'paper' (uncountable) and plural 'objects'. Maintain parallel structure by using the infinitive 'to play' or make 'playing' parallel; here 'to play with my friends' fits. Add a comma after the introductory phrase.

× Yes, I occasionally write physical letters to my friends, especially when I really would like to express my gratitude feelings.

✓ Yes, I occasionally write physical letters to my friends, especially when I really want to express my gratitude.

'Gratitude feelings' is unnatural; use the uncountable noun 'gratitude'. 'Would like to' is overly formal and awkward here; 'want to' is more natural in this context.

× I don't think many people today write handwriting write letters in their hand because texting by computer or iPhones by far easier than handwriting.

✓ I don't think many people today write handwritten letters by hand because texting on computers or iPhones is far easier than handwriting.

Replace the awkward phrase 'write handwriting write letters in their hand' with 'write handwritten letters by hand'. Use 'texting on computers or iPhones' and correct verb agreement 'is far easier'. Capitalize 'iPhones' to 'iPhones' (kept lowercase i is brand stylistic but grammar focuses on structure).

× Uh yes I would say I always carry paper, notebook and pencils with me whenever I go out because I as a student I always use PC for not taking but I also worry about.

✓ Uh, yes, I would say I always carry paper, a notebook, and pencils with me whenever I go out because, as a student, I always use a PC for note-taking but I also worry about it.

Add commas for clarity. Use 'a notebook' (article) and 'note-taking' (hyphenated noun) instead of 'not taking'. Add 'it' at end to complete 'worry about it'. Include 'a PC' for correct article use and 'as a student' set off by commas.