Part 1
Examinador
Have you made any crafts with paper?
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Have you made any crafts with paper?
Examinador
What did you like to do with paper as a child?
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What did you like to do with paper as a child?
Examinador
Do you still write physical letters?
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Do you still write physical letters?
Examinador
Do people still keep handwritten letters today?
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Do people still keep handwritten letters today?
Examinador
Do you carry paper and pens with you when you go out?
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Do you carry paper and pens with you when you go out?
Have you made any crafts with paper?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你的回答只是复述了考官的问题,未给出任何实质内容。请务必直接回答问题并补充1-2个具体细节,例如你制作过的手工类型、使用的材料或一个简短的经历。回答应自然、简洁(最多5句),并用连词衔接补充细节。
Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I often made paper origami like cranes and boats when I was younger, using colourful scrap paper. Also, I sometimes decorated greeting cards with cut-out shapes and glue.
What did you like to do with paper as a child?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你的回答仍然只是复述问题,未表达个人经历或喜好。请直接给出主题句,然后用一两句具体细节说明你做过的活动、频率或原因,使用简单的连接词使语意连贯。
Ejemplo: I liked folding paper into animals, especially cranes, when I was a child. I did it almost every week because it was fun and helped me relax.
Do you still write physical letters?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你没有回答问题。请明确说出是否仍写信,并给出原因或例子(如写给谁、什么时候写),用一两个连接词使陈述自然流畅。
Ejemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays because I usually send messages online. However, I sometimes write postcards when I travel.
Do people still keep handwritten letters today?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你没有给出观点或细节。请先表达你的看法,然后用具体理由或例子支持(例如情感价值、保存方式或数字化趋势),并用连接词保持逻辑性。
Ejemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters because they have sentimental value. For instance, many people save letters from family members in a box or album as keepsakes.
Do you carry paper and pens with you when you go out?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 你没有回答问题。请直接说明自己是否随身携带纸和笔,并补充原因或具体情境(如工作、记笔记或紧急情况),用一两句连接补充说明。
Ejemplo: I usually carry a small notebook and a pen in my bag for jotting down ideas or lists. I find it useful for quick notes when my phone battery is low.
× Have you made any crafts with paper?
✓ Yes, I have made some crafts with paper.
原句为学生直接重复考官的问题,属于句子结构与内容不完整的问题(没有陈述主语的动作或回答)。应根据情境用完整句子回答。建议在回答时加入主语和谓语,或给出简短肯定/否定并补充细节,例如 “Yes, I have made some crafts with paper” 或 “No, I haven't made any.”
× What did you like to do with paper as a child?
✓ As a child, I liked to fold paper into animals and make paper boats.
原句为重复问题,缺乏回答内容。需要用过去时完整陈述,包含主语和具体动作。建议使用过去时态的动词(liked)并说明具体活动,例如 “fold paper into animals” 或 “make paper boats”。
× Do you still write physical letters?
✓ No, I don't usually write physical letters anymore, but sometimes I do for special occasions.
原句只是重复问题,没有给出回答。应根据现在习惯使用一般现在时回答,注意否定形式使用助动词 do/does。建议用 “I don't usually…” 或 “I still sometimes…” 来表达频率。
× Do people still keep handwritten letters today?
✓ Some people still keep handwritten letters today, especially for sentimental reasons.
学生重复了考官的问题,没有提供陈述句。应用一般现在时给出概括性回答,使用主语(Some people)和谓语(still keep),并可补充原因。建议用 “Some people…” 或 “Yes, many people…” 等完整句子。
× Do you carry paper and pens with you when you go out?
✓ No, I don't usually carry paper and pens when I go out; I prefer to use my phone for notes.
同样为重复问题,未作回答。需要使用一般现在时和适当的否定或肯定形式,且加入原因或频率词更自然。建议使用 “I don't usually…” 或 “I sometimes…” 并说明为什么。