Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific example with a brief detail. Use simple linking if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes. I used to make paper crafts when I was a child, especially small animals like rabbits and ducks. For example, I often folded origami rabbits and decorated them with markers to give them faces.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitation and repetition, and provide a specific reason or short detail using a linking word (because or so). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoyed making small paper animals and kites as a child because it was easy for me and I liked being creative. For instance, I used colourful paper to fold rabbits and sometimes flew simple paper kites in the park.

Sugerencia: Speak more confidently and correct grammar (use present simple). State a clear topic sentence and add one brief reason or contrast using a linking word (so/because).

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually write physical letters now because they are inconvenient. Instead, I send emails for work and personal matters, since I work at a university and need quick communication.

Sugerencia: Clarify who 'people' refers to and answer directly. Avoid confusing tense and questions inside your answer. Give a concise reason and one brief example or condition.

Ejemplo: I think fewer people keep handwritten letters today because most messages are digital and it's unclear where to store old letters. For example, I rarely save letters myself since I usually receive messages by email or messaging apps.

Sugerencia: Use present simple and be concise. Give a clear topic sentence and one specific detail about how you substitute paper (phone apps, camera). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ejemplo: No, I don't carry paper and pens when I go out because I use my phone to take photos and make notes. For example, I use the phone's voice recorder or a notes app to capture ideas quickly.

× Yes, I made the crafts with paper, for example, when I was a child. I always make, I always make some small animals with paper.

✓ Yes, I made crafts with paper when I was a child. I always made small animals out of paper.

The student mixes past and present tenses. The question asks about past activity so use simple past consistently ('made', 'made'). Also remove redundant article 'the' before 'crafts' and use 'out of paper' as the common collocation. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for past descriptions and use correct preposition 'out of' for materials.

× I like to do some some small animals like rabbits, kites or ducks with paper and I feel it's easy for me because I'm I'm good at to make crafts.

✓ I liked making small things like rabbits, kites, or ducks out of paper, and I found it easy because I was good at making crafts.

The student should use past tense to answer what they liked as a child. Also correct verb patterns: 'good at making' not 'good at to make'. Remove duplicate words and use 'making' after 'liked'. Suggestion: Use correct verb + -ing after 'good at' and keep past tense for childhood preferences.

× MMM I don't like write physical letters because it's not convenient for everyone. I always send e-mail for others because I work in university.

✓ I don't like writing physical letters because they are not convenient for everyone. I always send emails to others because I work at a university.

After 'like' use the gerund 'writing' not the base verb. Use plural 'emails' and the preposition 'to' for recipients. Use 'at a university' for workplace. Also replace 'it' with 'they' to match plural 'letters'. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'like' and correct prepositions for workplace and recipients.

× No, I didn't keep a handy handwritten letters today because there is, because I don't know if I if I write the letters and where I should where should I send? So I didn't keep it.

✓ No, I don't keep handwritten letters today because I'm not sure if I should write them or where I should send them, so I don't keep them.

The student mixes past and present; question asks about today, so use present simple ('do not keep'). Remove unnecessary words and fix pronoun agreement ('them' for letters). Avoid double question structure; convert to statements. Suggestion: Use consistent present tense for current habits and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× No, I didn't have carrying papers and pens when I go out, umm, because I always use my phone to record anything, umm, which need I recall, which need I recall and I will use, uh, a camera wall or notes and uh, to write.

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens when I go out because I always use my phone to record things I will need to recall, and I use the camera or notes to write.

Use present simple for habitual actions ('don't carry', 'go out'). Use correct verb forms: 'need to recall' not 'which need I recall'. 'Camera wall' is incorrect; use 'camera' or 'camera app'. Simplify and correct word order. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines, correct infinitive 'need to recall', and use common collocations like 'use the camera' or 'take notes'.