Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use correct vocabulary, avoid repetition and keep sentences concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (crafts not graphs), and give one specific reason or example. Use linking words if adding extra detail.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't made paper crafts. I don't enjoy crafting because I prefer activities like reading and playing sports, which feel more relaxing to me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct grammar (use present simple), and be specific. Give one brief reason and an example of what you use instead. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't. Nowadays most people use messaging apps like WhatsApp or email because they are faster and more convenient for staying in touch.

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and organize your idea: give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific examples. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'especially' to clarify contexts where handwritten letters remain common.

Ejemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially for sentimental reasons or official documents. For example, families often save old letters from relatives, and legal forms are sometimes signed by hand.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer and give a brief, clear reason with an example. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't carry paper and pens because I use my smartphone to take notes and set reminders. For instance, I use a notes app when I need to write down shopping lists.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence about childhood activities, then provide two specific examples using simple linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing.

Ejemplo: As a child I enjoyed writing stories and making paper crafts. For example, I often wrote short poems and made paper airplanes and boats to play with friends.

× No officer, till now I haven't made any graphs with paper because I don't like to make.

✓ No, officer. Until now I haven't made any crafts with paper because I don't like making them.

The sentence uses 'to make' after 'like' which is awkward; after 'like' we usually use the -ing form for activities (verb + -ing). Also 'graphs' is likely wrong contextually; 'crafts' fits the question. Use 'them' to refer back to 'crafts' (plural pronoun). Use 'until' not 'till' for formal speech and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'like making' for activities and ensure pronoun matches the noun's number.

× I'm not interested in making crafts so like that things.

✓ I'm not interested in making crafts or things like that.

Word order and pronoun/determiner use are incorrect. 'Like that things' is ungrammatical; correct expression is 'things like that'. Connective 'or' properly links the two negative ideas. Suggestion: Place 'things like that' after the noun and use a conjunction if joining clauses.

× No officer. Nowadays there are different types of application apps for messaging to send messages.

✓ No, officer. Nowadays there are many messaging apps for sending messages.

Redundant phrasing 'application apps' is unnecessary; 'messaging apps' is concise. 'For messaging to send messages' is repetitive; use the gerund 'for sending messages' or simply 'for messaging'. Suggestion: Use concise noun phrases and correct gerund forms for purpose.

× So in this time nobody write physical letter for essays or something.

✓ So nowadays nobody writes physical letters for essays or similar things.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'nobody' (singular) requires 'writes' (third person singular). 'Physical letter' should be plural 'physical letters' when speaking generally. 'In this time' is unnatural; use 'nowadays' or 'these days'. Suggestion: Match verb form to singular indefinite pronouns and pluralize countable nouns when general.

× Yes, they do because in some case we are must be return hen return letters, uh, in uh some uh, some place, uh, there is most important and commonly used in letter letter, inmate letter or end return letter.

✓ Yes, they do because in some cases we must return letters; in some places, letters such as inmate letters or returned letters are important and commonly used.

Many issues: 'in some case' -> 'in some cases' (pluralization), 'we are must be return hen return letters' is ungrammatical; correct idea: 'we must return letters'. 'inmate letter or end return letter' unclear—interpreted as 'inmate letters or returned letters'. Fix pronouns and verb forms and punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Break into shorter sentences, use plural forms for general statements, and use correct modal + base verb (must return).

× So they used to uh write by hand.

✓ So they used to write by hand.

Insert 'used to' with base verb 'write' without 'to uh' filler; remove disfluencies. 'Used to' indicates past habit; if intended as general present habit, use 'use' -> 'So they write by hand.' Suggestion: Choose correct tense for meaning and avoid filler words.

× Uh, no, uh, beside usually, uh, wouldn't, uh, carry pen, pencils, uh, papers like like these things nowadays because we have our cell phones, mobile phone for, uh, for some notes, we can use our mobile phone.

✓ No. Usually people don't carry pens, pencils, or paper nowadays because we have mobile phones for taking notes.

Pronoun 'wouldn't' is misused; use 'don't' for general present habit. 'Pen, pencils, papers' needs pluralization and articles: 'pens, pencils, or paper'. 'Cell phones, mobile phone' redundant; use 'mobile phones' or 'our mobile phones'. Simplify phrase 'for some notes' to 'for taking notes'. Suggestion: Use general present simple for habitual statements and correct plural forms.

× So I don't think anybody carry pen, pencil, uh, paper with them.

✓ So I don't think anybody carries a pen, a pencil, or paper with them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'anybody' is singular and requires 'carries' (third person singular). Add articles 'a' for singular countable nouns when specific items are implied. 'With them' is acceptable as gender-neutral singular; alternatively use 'with him or her' in formal contexts. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with singular indefinite pronouns.

× Officer When I was child I used to write I I used to write something what I what I feel or what I what I like by looking dear.

✓ Officer, when I was a child I used to write about what I felt or what I liked, often inspired by what I saw.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'. Repetition and disfluencies removed. 'What I feel' should be past 'what I felt' to match 'used to'. 'By looking dear' unclear; interpreted as 'inspired by what I saw'. Suggestion: Use articles with nouns and maintain consistent tense when describing past habitual actions.

× After I used to study in the paper, like by returning in paper time and again, time and again, and playing with playing with papers, by making aeroplane, by making sea.

✓ Afterwards I used to practice on paper repeatedly and play with paper by making paper airplanes and paper boats.

'Used to study in the paper' is unclear; 'practice on paper' or 'do exercises on paper' is better. 'Returning in paper' is incorrect. 'Making aeroplane' should be 'making paper airplanes' and 'making sea' likely means 'paper boats'. Use past habitual 'used to' consistently. Suggestion: Replace unclear phrases with common collocations (paper airplanes, paper boats) and remove repetition.