Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak in full, clear sentences that directly answer the question, and organize details logically. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief statement), then add one or two specific details using linking words (for example, recently, because). Also correct basic grammar (tense and articles) and reduce hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have made paper crafts. For example, a few days ago my sister gave me a sheet of paper and I folded it into a bird and a paper plane.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct, grammatically correct answer, then briefly explain why using specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct vocabulary ("physical letters") and avoid filler words. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely write physical letters now because online communication is much more convenient. If I need to contact someone formally I usually send an email, and for casual messages I use social media.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear, specific example. Avoid unrelated or unclear details. Use linking words (for example, however, for instance) and correct verb forms. Make your example concise and relevant to keeping or writing letters.

Ejemplo: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially for important records or memories. For instance, I recently had to fill out a form at my college office and they asked me to provide a handwritten confirmation, which I then kept for my records.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear routine-based answer and one specific condition when you carry them. Use correct tense and fewer repetitions. Link the sentences with words like "usually" or "only when" to show frequency.

Ejemplo: Not always. I usually carry paper and pens when I go to college or to official appointments, but I don't bring them when I'm just going home or going out casually.

Sugerencia: Give a simple, relevant statement about childhood activities and one or two specific examples. Use correct vocabulary ("liked making paper toys") and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences and use linking words like "for example" or "often".

Ejemplo: As a child I liked making paper toys and folding paper planes. For example, I often made origami animals and tried to decorate them with pens and stickers.

× Is a mixer creature with papers.

✓ It is a mixed creature made with paper.

Student used incorrect subject pronoun and unclear noun choice. 'Is' lacks subject; use 'It is'. 'Mixer creature' is unnatural; 'mixed creature' or 'paper creature' is clearer. Also use singular 'paper' or 'made with paper' to describe material. Suggestion: always include explicit subject and choose natural noun phrases.

× Few days ago my sister give me a page the time I make a bird or a plane.

✓ A few days ago my sister gave me a page so I made a bird and a plane.

Tense consistency: 'Few days ago' requires past tense verbs. Use 'gave' (past of give) and 'made' (past of make). Add article 'A few days ago' and conjunction 'so' for clarity. Also use 'and' rather than 'or' if both were made.

× No, currently I don't write physical details because of when umm online is very usable.

✓ No, I don't currently write physical letters because online services are more convenient.

Word choice and tense: 'currently' placement is better after 'don't'. 'Physical details' is incorrect; intended 'physical letters'. 'Because of when umm online is very usable' is ungrammatical; use 'because online services are more convenient'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'services are'.

× So if I need to write something that time I use e-mail or social site.

✓ So if I need to write something, I use email or social media sites.

Preposition and article use: 'that time' is unnatural; omit or use 'then' if needed. Use 'email' without hyphen and plural 'sites' or 'social media' to be idiomatic. Add a comma before the clause for clarity.

× Uh, in many countries there are many uh situation need to write letters.

✓ In many countries there are many situations that require writing letters.

Agreement and form: 'situation' should be plural 'situations'. Use relative clause 'that require' to link 'situations' to the need. 'Require' matches plural subject.

× For example, few days ago I go to the GPA office here umm, I am umm, it's umm, packaging area.

✓ For example, a few days ago I went to the GPA office here, which is the packaging area.

Tense: 'go' must be past 'went' after 'a few days ago'. Use 'which is' to explain the office's function. Remove filler words for clarity and add article 'a few days ago'.

× So I need to write the details like.

✓ So I needed to write details such as name, address, and phone number.

Original sentence is incomplete and lacks object. Provide examples to complete 'details like' and ensure tense matches context (past 'needed' if referring to earlier event). Use 'such as' to introduce examples.

× Not always when I I was go to the house college, the time I carry papers and pens or when I go to any official or the time I carry this.

✓ Not always. When I was going to college or home, I carried papers and pens, and I also carry them when I go to official appointments.

Many issues: duplicate 'I', incorrect verb forms 'was go' should be 'was going', tense consistency 'carried' for past context. Clarify 'house college' to 'home or college'. Use 'official appointments' for clarity. Maintain subject-verb agreement and parallel structure.

× What did you like to do with paper as a child?

✓ (Question is fine; student's answer corrected below)

This is the examiner's question; no correction needed.

× No one else is jailed.

✓ No, nothing else was involved.

Original is irrelevant and likely mis-said. 'No one else is jailed' is incorrect in context. Use 'No, nothing else was involved' or 'No, I didn't have anything else' to respond appropriately.

× I like people for writing or sometimes right now I meet with my friends that time I umm make a very sad toys with papers for more popular toys are plan.

✓ I liked writing, and sometimes when I met my friends I made simple paper toys, like paper planes.

Pronoun and tense errors: use past tense 'liked' to match childhood. 'I like people for writing' is incorrect — should be 'I liked writing'. 'Right now' and 'that time' conflict; use past 'when I met my friends'. 'Make a very sad toys' is wrong: use 'made simple paper toys'. 'Plan' should be 'plane'. Improve word choice and tense consistency.