Paper— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g. 'hard for me'), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific example of an origami model and link to future plans with a connector.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I tried Japanese-style origami, such as cranes and flowers, although they were difficult for me. However, I found them beautiful, so I plan to practice more and learn new patterns soon.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct statement, avoid redundant phrases ('the vibe that I get'), improve grammar ('the pressure someone puts on the paper' → 'the pressure of the writer's handwriting'), and give one clear reason or example. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still write handmade letters. I find them more personal and authentic because the writer's handwriting and the pressure of the pen convey emotion. For example, I enjoy sending handwritten notes to close friends on special occasions.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise topic sentence, correct grammar ('her father who passed away' and 'she cherishes them'), and make the emotional point clearer and more specific. Use linking words for coherence and avoid vague phrases like 'so that is why.'

Ejemplo: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters. For example, my mother cherishes letters from her father, who died when she was a baby, because holding them helps her feel his presence. Therefore, letters often become treasured family mementos.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, fix grammar and word order ('more handy and practical' → 'more convenient and practical'), avoid filler phrases, and add one clear exception with a linking phrase. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Usually no, I don't, because I prefer taking notes on my phone since it's more convenient and practical. However, if my phone dies, a pen and paper can be useful for jotting down important information.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and specific examples; avoid hedging ('I think') and redundancy. Use linking words to organize: first describe activities, then add a brief reason or memory. Keep length to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: As a child I enjoyed making paper figures like origami cranes and paper flowers, and I also loved drawing with bright markers and crayons. I was very creative and often spent afternoons crafting and coloring at the kitchen table.

× Yes, I did do some crafts with paper but I wouldn't say they were pretty or successful.

✓ Yes, I did some paper crafts, but I wouldn't say they were pretty or successful.

Redundant use of 'did do' is an unnecessary emphatic past tense construction; 'did' + base verb is acceptable for emphasis but sounds awkward here. Also 'crafts with paper' is better phrased as 'paper crafts'. Suggest using simple past 'did' + noun phrase or just 'I made some paper crafts.'

× I did some kind of Japanese style origami, although they are really hard to me, but they are really beautiful so I definitely want to try again in the near future.

✓ I did some Japanese-style origami, although it is really hard for me, but it is really beautiful, so I definitely want to try again in the near future.

'Origami' is treated as a singular uncountable noun here, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Hard to me' is incorrect preposition use; correct is 'hard for me'. Hyphenate 'Japanese-style'. Also comma placement: separate clauses with commas. Suggest: 'Origami is really hard for me, but it is really beautiful.'

× I do still write handmade letters.

✓ I still write handmade letters.

Using 'do' with 'still' is unnecessary for affirmative present tense and can sound unnatural. Simple present 'I still write' is correct. 'Handmade letters' is acceptable.

× I find them to be extremely romantic and the vibe that I get from them, it's really different from a computerized letter.

✓ I find them to be extremely romantic, and the vibe I get from them is really different from a computerized letter.

Incorrect clause structure and redundant pronoun 'it' creates a comma splice. Remove the extra 'it' and combine clauses properly: 'the vibe I get from them is' instead of 'the vibe that I get from them, it's'. Also ensure pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'letters'.

× I feel them to be more authentic and more personal because of many reasons such as the pressure as someone puts on the paper.

✓ I find them to be more authentic and more personal for many reasons, such as the pressure someone puts on the paper.

'I feel them to be' is an unnatural verb choice; 'I find them to be' or 'they feel' is better. 'Because of many reasons' should be 'for many reasons'. 'The pressure as someone puts on the paper' is awkward; correct 'the pressure someone puts on the paper.'

× Definitely they do.

✓ Definitely they do.

This short answer is grammatically acceptable, but for natural word order use 'They definitely do.' However, as spoken response, 'Definitely they do' is acceptable; no verb error.

× For instance, my mother still has letters from her father that passed away when she was a baby and she really cherished them.

✓ For instance, my mother still has letters from her father who passed away when she was a baby, and she really cherishes them.

Mixing past 'cherished' with present 'still has' creates tense inconsistency. Use present 'cherishes' to match 'still has'. Use 'who passed away' instead of 'that passed away' for a person (pronoun choice).

× And it's so nice when she get to touch the handmade letter that her father wrote, she can still feel her present his presence.

✓ And it's so nice when she gets to touch the handmade letter her father wrote; she can still feel his presence.

'She get' needs third person singular 'gets' (third person singular issue / subject-verb agreement). 'Her father' requires 'his presence' not 'her present his presence'—mixed pronouns and the word 'present' is incorrect. Also combine clauses properly; use semicolon or full stop.

× Usually I don't, because I prefer to take notes on my phone.

✓ Usually I don't, because I prefer to take notes on my phone.

Sentence is correct. 'Prefer to take' is proper. No correction needed.

× I find it to be more handy and practical fast.

✓ I find it to be handier and more practical and faster.

'More handy' is less natural than comparative 'handier'. 'Practical fast' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'more practical and faster' or 'more practical and convenient'. Use comparatives for adjectives: 'handier', 'more practical', 'faster'.

× Therefore I nowadays have no reason to go out carrying a pen, even though it sometimes can be really useful.

✓ Therefore, nowadays I have no reason to go out carrying a pen, even though it can sometimes be really useful.

Word order 'I nowadays' is awkward; place 'nowadays' after comma. Move adverb 'sometimes' to correct position: 'it can sometimes be'. Add comma after 'Therefore'.

× If for example your phone dies or something, you still have some a way to take notes.

✓ For example, if your phone dies or something, you still have a way to take notes.

Unnecessary words 'some a' should be 'a way'. Move 'for example' to sentence start for clarity. Avoid 'or something' in formal speech; use 'or similar' or omit.

× As far as I can remember, I think I really liked to make some kind of figures with the paper, as I said, such as origami or flowers.

✓ As far as I can remember, I really liked making figures out of paper, such as origami or paper flowers.

Use 'liked making' (verb + -ing) rather than 'liked to make'—both are possible but 'liked making' is more natural here. 'Figures with the paper' should be 'figures out of paper' or 'paper figures'. Remove redundant 'I think' when already saying 'as far as I can remember.'

× Or of course, I also liked to draw on paper using many colors.

✓ Of course, I also liked drawing on paper using many colors.

'Or of course' is unnecessary; start with 'Of course'. Use gerund 'liked drawing' rather than 'liked to draw' for naturalness. Preposition 'on paper' is fine.

× I was a really creative child.

✓ I was a really creative child.

Sentence is grammatically correct and consistent with past tense; no correction needed.