Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., say “western clothes” or “traditional clothes”, not both together), and correct articles and plural forms.

Ejemplo: I prefer both western and traditional clothes. For everyday work and college I usually wear western clothes because they are comfortable and practical, but for family events I wear traditional clothes to show respect for my culture.

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize your response: state your preference first, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., “formal/smart clothes,” “important function,” not “business e-mail” for dressing). Avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer comfortable clothes for daily life but I wear smart clothes for important events. For example, I wear comfortable outfits at work for ease of movement, whereas I choose smart clothes for interviews or ceremonies to look professional and respectful.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise answer and use accurate explanations. Avoid awkward or incorrect claims (T-shirts don’t “give oxygen” — say they are breathable). Use one linking phrase to expand briefly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. Also, cotton T-shirts are breathable, so they keep me cool and relaxed during hot days.

Sugerencia: Structure your answer: give a direct time estimate, then explain reasons with specific details. Avoid gender stereotypes as justification; instead mention personal preference or professional reasons. Correct grammar and sentence flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually spend about 20–30 minutes choosing an outfit for work or school. I do this because I want to feel confident and make a good impression, and wearing the right clothes helps my mood all day.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then contrast with a linking word (e.g., “whereas” or “but”). Use specific examples of what you wear and correct phrasing (e.g., “balance my traditional and work life”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear casual, practical clothes for work and college, whereas on weekends I often choose traditional clothes to relax and celebrate my culture.

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise: state preferences for weekdays and weekends separately with correct word forms and linking words. Use specific adjectives and correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer black or white on weekdays” and “I like bright colours on weekends”). Avoid redundant words.

Ejemplo: On weekdays I usually wear black or white because they look professional and are easy to match. On weekends I prefer bright, colourful clothes because they make me feel cheerful and relaxed.

× I like to wear all kind of clothes, but specifically I love to wear western clothes 'cause I work and I go to college or school too, so I feel comfortable and western clothes.

✓ I like to wear all kinds of clothes, but specifically I love to wear western clothes because I work and I go to college or school too, so I feel comfortable in western clothes.

The noun phrase 'all kind of clothes' needs the plural form 'kinds' to agree with 'all'. Also 'comfortable and western clothes' is ungrammatical; use the preposition 'in' before 'western clothes' and repeat 'comfortable in western clothes'. Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because' for formality and clarity.

× But traditionally our traditions say we have to wear a traditional clothes to respect our culture.

✓ But traditionally our traditions say we have to wear traditional clothes to respect our culture.

'A traditional clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes'. Remove the article and use 'traditional clothes' (plural). Also 'traditionally our traditions' is repetitive but acceptable; consider 'traditionally we are expected to wear traditional clothes' for smoother phrasing.

× So I'd like both traditional western.

✓ So I'd like both traditional and western clothes.

The sentence lacks a parallel structure and the noun 'clothes' at the end. Add 'and' to connect the adjectives and include the noun 'clothes' to complete the sentence.

× I prefer both 'cause I am I'm a different kind of personality.

✓ I prefer both because I have a different personality.

'I am I'm a different kind of personality' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'have a different personality' to express trait. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because'.

× I prefer comfortable clothes at work and on the other hand, if I'm going somewhere like a important function or an business e-mail, then I prefer casual clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes at work and, on the other hand, if I'm going somewhere like an important function or a business event, then I prefer formal clothes.

'a important' should be 'an important' because 'important' begins with a vowel sound. 'an business e-mail' is incorrect; 'a business e-mail' would be correct but contextually speaking of occasions, 'business event' or 'formal event' fits better. Also 'casual clothes' contradicts 'important function'; use 'formal clothes' for important occasions.

× Because I think it is a good source to give set an example for some people who try to learn from you something.

✓ I think it is a good way to set an example for people who try to learn from you.

The phrase 'a good source to give set an example' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'a good way to set an example' and simplify 'some people who try to learn from you something' to 'people who try to learn from you'.

× Yes I love wearing T-shirts and it gave me like so much comfort for me to relax my body and it give.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts; they give me a lot of comfort and help me relax.

Mixing present ('love') with past 'gave' is inconsistent. Use present tense 'give' to match 'I love'. Remove filler 'like' and the incomplete clause 'and it give'.

× As we all know T-shirts are more comfortable to wear and it give our body oxygen and help to breathe ourselves.

✓ As we all know, T-shirts are more comfortable to wear; they allow our bodies to breathe and help us feel cooler.

'It' is singular but refers to plural 'T-shirts', so use 'they'. 'Give our body oxygen' is inaccurate and awkward; better to say 'allow our bodies to breathe' or 'let our skin breathe'. 'Breathe ourselves' is incorrect; use 'help us breathe' or 'help us feel cooler'.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes 'cause I'm a girl and as a girl I know we have to look good to give good impression on people.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I'm a girl and I know we have to look good to make a good impression on people.

'Give good impression on people' is incorrect collocation. Use 'make a good impression on people'. Replace ''cause' with 'because' for formality.

× So I spend like a 20 to 30 minutes to choose one outfit for my work or for my school.

✓ So I spend about 20 to 30 minutes choosing an outfit for work or school.

Do not use 'a' before '20 to 30 minutes'; use 'about' or 'around'. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend' and 'an outfit' rather than 'one outfit' is more natural.

× And if I didn't like I my whole day depend on my outfit and if I don't good, I don't feel good.

✓ And if I don't like my outfit, my whole day depends on it, and if I don't look good, I don't feel good.

Original sentence has tense and word order problems. Use present tense 'don't like', correct word order 'my whole day depends on it', and 'don't look good' to express appearance affecting mood.

× Yes, my weekdays and weekend outfits are different and on weekdays I work and go to school so I prefer casual clothes.

✓ Yes, my weekday and weekend outfits are different; on weekdays I work and go to school, so I prefer casual clothes.

'Weekdays and weekend' should be parallel: 'weekday and weekend outfits' or 'weekdays and weekends'. Adjust punctuation and keep 'weekdays' plural with 'on weekdays'.

× On a weekend I prefer traditional clothes to wear so I can balanced my life between my tradition and my work life.

✓ On weekends I prefer to wear traditional clothes so I can balance my traditional life with my work life.

Use 'on weekends' for habitual action. 'Prefer traditional clothes to wear' is awkward; 'prefer to wear traditional clothes' is correct. 'Balanced' should be base form 'balance' after 'can'. 'Between my tradition and my work life' is awkward; 'balance my traditional life with my work life' is clearer.

× To be very honest, on weekdays I prefer black and white 'cause this is the natural clothes we wore on work and school and on weekdays, Weekends I prefer like a colorful clothes to make my body relax and to feel good, like I work breathable and colorful clothes. Clothes.

✓ To be honest, on weekdays I prefer black and white because these are the usual clothes we wear at work and school, and on weekends I prefer colorful, breathable clothes to feel relaxed and comfortable.

Multiple issues: 'this is the natural clothes' mixes singular 'this' with plural 'clothes' and wrong adjective 'natural'. Use 'these are the usual clothes we wear'. 'Wore on work' should be 'wear at work'. 'Weekdays, Weekends' redundant; use 'on weekends'. 'a colorful clothes' wrong article; use 'colorful, breathable clothes'. Remove repeated 'Clothes'.