Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, correct grammar, and be concise. Say you prefer comfortable clothes and briefly explain why with one supporting detail. Use linking words if adding a reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than formal or restrictive outfits. For example, I like loose shirts and soft trousers because they allow me to move easily and feel relaxed during the day.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer (which you prefer) then briefly explain with a specific example and use correct grammar and linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation: I usually wear casual clothes, but I choose smart clothes for formal events. For instance, I wear a blazer and dress shoes for interviews, while I prefer jeans and a T‑shirt for university.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct pronoun and phrasing, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and run‑on phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are casual and comfortable. Also, they come in many colors and prints, so I can choose different styles depending on my mood.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, concise answer about current habits and contrast with the past using correct tense and linking words. Be specific about why you now spend more time choosing clothes.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes now because I pay more attention to fit and style than when I was younger. For example, I check colors and sizes carefully to make sure clothes suit me.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'only' to show contrast and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: No, I usually wear the same casual style during weekdays and weekends because I am a student and value comfort. Only for parties or festivals do I change to more formal or festive clothes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with correct grammar. Avoid filler words and be specific about preferences (when/why you choose black).

Ejemplo: I like many colors, but I mostly wear black because it makes me feel more confident and appears slimming. For example, I often choose a black shirt for presentations or when I want a neat, simple look.

× I always like to wear clothes make me uncomfortable, just not very few strict.

✓ I always like to wear clothes that are comfortable, not very strict.

The original sentence lacks a relative pronoun and has incorrect phrasing. Add 'that are' to connect 'clothes' with the describing clause and replace 'make me uncomfortable' and 'not very few strict' with 'comfortable, not very strict' for clarity and correct grammar. Use consistent adjectives to describe clothes.

× I think it's depends on the situations where where I'm in.

✓ I think it depends on the situations I'm in.

'It's depends' is incorrect because 'depend' should be used with 'it' as 'it depends' (no contraction with 'is'). Also remove the repeated 'where' and the unnecessary 'where' before 'I'm in'. Keep present simple 'depends' to express general truth.

× When I aim some strict situations I must to wear clothes to let me look very smart and in my daily life I just like to wear.

✓ In strict situations I must wear clothes that make me look smart, and in my daily life I prefer casual clothes.

'Must to wear' is incorrect; modal verb 'must' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. 'Aim' is wrong choice; use 'in' or 'during' strict situations. The clause 'to let me look very smart' is better expressed as 'that make me look smart'. End with a clear contrasting clause: 'I prefer casual clothes.'

× Yeah, I like to wear T-shirts because he's very casual and it's very easy to let me put it on and I could wear different kind of T-shirts and different colors and different picturing on it.

✓ Yeah, I like to wear T-shirts because they are very casual, they're easy to put on, and I can wear different kinds of T-shirts with different colors and designs.

Pronouns 'he' and 'it' are incorrect for 'T-shirts' (plural inanimate -> 'they'). Use plural agreement: 'they are' and 'they're'. Use 'kinds' for plural, and 'designs' instead of 'picturing'. Use 'can' instead of 'could' to indicate ability in general.

× Yeah, it's very it's has very many style.

✓ Yeah, they have many different styles.

The original is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns and verb forms. 'It's has' is incorrect; use 'they have' to match plural 'T-shirts'. 'Many different styles' is the correct noun phrase.

× Yeah, absolutely. Yes, uh, almost today, this day, because when I was young I, I don't need to do a lot of choosing, but when I was old, get older, I think it's very hard to get what I like to wear.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Nowadays I choose more carefully because when I was young I didn't need to choose much, but as I got older it's harder to find what I like to wear.

Tense consistency: use past simple 'didn't need' for past, and 'as I got older' for the change. 'Almost today, this day' is unclear; 'nowadays' fits better. Use 'it's harder to find' for present difficulty.

× No, absolutely not. Because I am a student now. I just wear different styles, clothes when there is a festival or some party or some Special Situations, yeah, so. But in the daily life I just wear casually casual clothes just to relax.

✓ No. Because I am a student now, I only wear different styles of clothes for festivals, parties, or special occasions. In daily life I wear casual clothes to relax.

'Different styles, clothes' is redundant; use 'different styles of clothes'. 'Some Special Situations' should be 'special occasions'. Avoid repetition 'casually casual clothes'—use 'casual clothes'. Also combine short sentences for better flow.

× Hum, for me, I like a lot of colors, but most of the color I wear on is black because I just know very confident about my body.

✓ Well, I like many colors, but most of the clothes I wear are black because I feel more confident about my body in black.

Use 'many colors' or 'a lot of colors' (not 'like a lot of colors' followed by 'most of the color I wear on'). 'Most of the clothes I wear are black' matches plural. 'I just know very confident' is incorrect; say 'I feel more confident'.

× So I think black could then could let me look like slim, yeah.

✓ So I think black makes me look slimmer.

Remove redundant 'could then could'. Use 'makes me look slimmer' to express that black has the effect of making the wearer appear slimmer. 'Look like slim' is ungrammatical; use comparative 'slimmer'.