Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking phrase. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (e.g. "comfortable clothes that are easy to move in").

Ejemplo: I prefer casual clothes. For example, as a student I need comfortable clothes that are easy to move in for lessons and practical activities, and they also make it easier to meet friends after school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then one clear reason with improved grammar and a linking word (e.g. "because" or "so"). Avoid repeating words. Use a topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I go to school every day and need outfits that help me concentrate and move easily during activities.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and avoid repetition and hesitations. State clearly why you like T-shirts and give one specific example. Correct vocabulary mistakes ("sell T-shirts").

Ejemplo: Yes, I love T-shirts. I have a large collection and often buy new designs online because they are comfortable and easy to pair with jeans for everyday wear.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence (yes or no), then one specific detail and a linking phrase. Remove unrelated comments and fix grammar (e.g. "I usually take a little time to choose what to wear").

Ejemplo: I sometimes spend extra time choosing clothes, especially for special events when I ask my parents for advice. On normal days I usually pick something simple and do not spend long.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a reason. Use linking words like "because" and avoid trailing off. Correct grammar ("I wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I still go to school").

Ejemplo: Not really — I wear the same basic style on weekdays and weekends because I still attend school most days and prefer practical clothes that suit both study and free time.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct expressions (e.g. "bright colours"). Start with a topic sentence, then give two clear reasons connected by linking words such as "because" and "so". Avoid awkward phrasing like "make my emotion go off."

Ejemplo: I like bright colours such as red and yellow because they make me feel energetic and help me stand out in a crowd, so I feel more confident when I wear them.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes because I am a student, I have to go to school and I prefer the comfortable clothes to easy to uh move and uh easy to meeting up with friends.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because I am a student, I have to go to school, and I prefer comfortable clothes that are easy to move in and easy for meeting up with friends.

Run-on and incorrect verb forms: 'the comfortable clothes to easy to move' and 'easy to meeting up' are ungrammatical. Use relative clause 'that are easy to move in' and the adjective 'easy for meeting up' or 'easy to meet friends' to fit present simple preference context. Also add commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× For my personality, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes and casual clothes because I am a student, I have to go to school and I need something make me feel comfortable to learn and to take activity.

✓ Because of my personality, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes. Since I am a student and have to go to school, I need something that makes me feel comfortable for studying and for activities.

Missing relative pronoun and incorrect verb form: 'something make me' should be 'something that makes me' to agree with singular 'something' (subject-verb agreement). 'to take activity' is unnatural — use 'for activities' or 'for physical activities'. Also split into two sentences for clarity and keep present simple tense.

× Absolutely. I have a, a collection of T-shirts, so I am a really light T-shirt. I uh, always, uh, whenever I surf the Internet and I see the shop that uh sell teachers, I always want to buy it all because I am a.

✓ Absolutely. I have a collection of T-shirts, so I really like T-shirts. I always, whenever I surf the Internet and see a shop that sells T-shirts, want to buy them all.

Multiple errors: 'a, a collection' has extra article; 'a really light T-shirt' likely meant 'really like T-shirts' (wrong word). 'shop that uh sell teachers' should be 'shop that sells T-shirts' — third person singular requires 'sells'. Use plural pronoun 'them' for 'T-shirts'. Remove filler and finish the sentence coherently.

× My parents say I am an annoying person because I whenever I have a special event I always ask them what I have to wear and in a normal day I spend a quiet time to choose clothes to going out I am feel I've.

✓ My parents say I am an annoying person because whenever I have a special event I always ask them what I should wear. On a normal day, I spend a little time choosing clothes to go out and I feel I've...

Run-on sentence and incorrect verb forms: 'what I have to wear' is acceptable but 'what I should wear' is more natural. 'spend a quiet time to choose clothes to going out' is ungrammatical — use 'spend a little time choosing clothes to go out'. The ending 'I am feel I've' is incomplete; correct to 'I feel...' and complete thought. Use commas and sentence breaks for clarity.

× For really I just wear one style because I in the weekday and in the weekend I always have to go to school and I have to wear something basic to uh.

✓ Actually, I just wear one style because on weekdays and at the weekend I always have to go to school, so I wear something basic.

Preposition and tense issues: use 'on weekdays' and 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends'. 'I in the weekday and in the weekend' is incorrect. Remove filler and finish clause: 'have to wear something basic to uh' should be 'so I wear something basic'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I prefer pride color like red or yellow because I it's make me feel excited and when I in a crowd it make me unique and I think it's make my emotion go off.

✓ I prefer bright colors like red or yellow because they make me feel excited. When I'm in a crowd they make me stand out, and I think they lift my mood.

Word choice and agreement errors: 'pride color' is wrong; use 'bright colors'. 'I it's make me' mixes pronouns and verbs — use 'they make me' to agree with plural 'colors'. 'when I in a crowd' needs 'when I'm in a crowd'. 'make me unique' → 'make me stand out' is more natural. 'make my emotion go off' is incorrect idiom; use 'lift my mood' or 'improve my mood'.